I'll give it to you straight, bro, these are trash, they inform nothing about the characters, they're flat, fucking trash em. I'm not saying the little quirks with their faces or their actual personalities are bad, but you could execute these better. Fuck it, give me a rundown on the character personalities and I could sketch something better without going off the rails in a couple of minutes. I'm serious, gimme something to work with and I'll crank something out right fucking now.>>101135794>we took no anime tropes>but the only thing I can describe about it is a big fat anime trope
fucking do better, bro, why the hell shit, what's the story about? dealing with loss and guilt, redemption, suffering, like god damn gimme something here.
And when I say producer I dont mean a motherfucker that'll give you free money, I mean a motherfucker that'll keep your crew on track and actually push you to fucking make the thing instead of staying in limbo. Do you really care about this? Do you want to make it happen? then do the producer work or get a producer, that has fuck all to do with money and everything to do with logistics and scheduling. Even as a passion pilot short you could have this shit done in a year max. Hell, ignore my ass, but get your shit together, otherwise it aint a passion project, it's a vanity project that wastes peoples' time. That's the realest talk you're gonna get in this thread, amigo.>>101136069>storyboard in full color
oh shit nigger what the fuck are you doing>scrapped instead of reworking and completing
OH SHIT WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING