>>4074918I do mind the shitty camera. A good camera is not hard to get these days.
But, as far as the painting goes...
I like the colors, except for the purples in the clouds. They're too vibrant, they're competing for attention with the focal point of the trees. Also, if the clouds were that brightly colored, the entire scene would need more of that color, as it would be reflected.
The other issue is the values of the clouds on either side - they're the same value, so they read as a hll, not clouds, and should be lighter in value to create the illusion of depth - the darker blue clouds especially break the planes of space and almost feel like they're close than the hills in front of them.
The last issue is the lower left corner. Your entire composition is arcs, flowing out from the trees, but you have almost a straight line going to the corner, it's jarring and doesn't fit with the overall flow of the painting. A little artistic licence would be good here, if you're working from life - or just some editing if not.
It's not a bad painting, from what I can see. Unfortunately, we can't see details. I think with some edits, this can be a nice piece.
