>>4071967How is this /alt/? Are you blind? I'll admit it's not shaded the TV anime style but other than that I see no features that should make this belong in /alt/.
I gave you advice, size down the torso vertically, make the hips a little wider, fix up her right hand.
Your face shape is okay, but it might could use some work.
The skirt doesn't look good though, go fix it.