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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 00:02:31 2019 No.3862885 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>3862887 >>3862889 >>3862890 >>3862927 >>3862931 >>3863130 >>3863266

I recently created a webcomic, please give me constructive critisism (or just bash it, that's fine too) so I can improve.
Will post some pages.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:03:32 No.3862887 Report

Quoted By: >>3862905

>>3862885
>goriland
not this shit again

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:04:09 No.3862889 Report

Quoted By: >>3862905

>>3862885
My criticism? work on anatomy.
My bash? Don't write that incest shit. go be degenerate at a gay pride parade.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:04:42 No.3862890 Report

Quoted By: >>3862905

>>3862885
In the last 2 panels of that page I tried to change the coloring style but didn't like it so never did it again after that.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:10:17 No.3862905 Report

Quoted By: >>3862915

>>3862887
Yeah posting it because I made some new pages that I believe improved a bit, hol on til I get there tho
>>3862889
>go to a gay pride parade
And risk getting AIDS from those disgusting homos? No thanks!
>>3862890
Here I made a reference to a dank argentinian meme and also used the word 'nani' to add to the cringe.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:14:59 No.3862915 Report

Quoted By: >>3862920

>>3862905
Thats the third pseudo page to have an animation. Theres another version where it looks smoother because it had inbetweens but the file is too big and thus slows the website loading, so this one is used instead

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:18:20 No.3862920 Report

Quoted By: >>3862925

>>3862915
As you can see in the 2nd last panel of that page I didn't really even try. Was kinda in a hurry to post on schedule.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:20:59 No.3862925 Report

Quoted By: >>3862930

>>3862920
Reused a lot of stuff in that one so I could make it longer and get to the point soon

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:22:31 No.3862927 Report

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>>3862885
Again? God dammit I hate /ic/'s forced memes.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:23:28 No.3862930 Report

Quoted By: >>3862939

>>3862925
That Jesus was made by a mormon church on New York city. Mormons are literally fucked up im the head so every day I am worried one of them could stab me with a knife for using his Jesus without asking for permisson first.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:23:59 No.3862931 Report

Quoted By: >>3862957

>>3862885
natto dissu shittu agen

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:27:25 No.3862939 Report

Quoted By: >>3862945

>>3862930
I couldn't be bothered to make the 3 outside of the house shots so I just applied an orange filter on one of them and called it a day. The nude part is just a buildup for a joke to be seen in like 2 posts from this one

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:30:13 No.3862945 Report

Quoted By: >>3862949

>>3862939
Had to use way too much text on that one for my liking, but was necessary for this (and next post) joke

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:33:24 No.3862949 Report

Quoted By: >>3862978

>>3862945
I thought it would be funny to subtly disrupt an stereotipycal character like Ho Lee Fuk with something completely out of stereotypo (you can see the tip of his dong, implying he has a big one. Contrary to the tiny chink dick they are known for)

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:34:31 No.3862951 Report

Quoted By: >>3862957

I feel like I might go to prison from viewing this thread.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:39:49 No.3862957 Report

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>>3862931
Sawa?
>>3862951
If you live in the land of the free you shouldn't worry. Maybe you should if you live in Canada.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:44:58 No.3862965 Report

Quoted By: >>3862968

You should know that this amount of edginess is so passe by now.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:46:22 No.3862968 Report

Quoted By: >>3862972

>>3862965
How is it edgy?

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:50:16 No.3862972 Report

Quoted By: >>3862994

>>3862968
Incest? Underage? Bruh pls.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 00:55:58 No.3862978 Report

Quoted By: >>3862994

>>3862949
is that the end or theres more after it?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 01:11:19 No.3862994 Report

Quoted By: >>3862997 >>3862999

>>3862972
If anything that's degeneracy. Degeneracy =/= edginess dude
>>3862978
There's more, now he goes to buy the koon killer so his sister is finally alone so I can expand on her personality

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 01:14:17 No.3862997 Report

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>>3862994
>Degeneracy =/= edginess dude
says you

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 01:16:14 No.3862999 Report

Quoted By: >>3863173

>>3862994
>Degeneracy =/= edginess
It kind of does. Showing off degeneracy is just as attention whoring as being edgy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 02:34:54 No.3863116 Report

Quoted By: >>3863118

[spoiler:lit]Goriland, I am a girl into Shota too and I want to be your friend.[/spoiler:lit]

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 02:36:13 No.3863118 Report

Quoted By: >>3863119

>>3863116
Just because you have a hole in between your legs doesn't mean you get to have a pass, kys pedo.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 02:38:41 No.3863119 Report

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>>3863118
I only say it because Goriland is a female as well.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 02:41:52 No.3863121 Report

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>degenerate pedo thread
Reported.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 02:49:55 No.3863130 Report

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>>3862885
>constructive critisism
Improve your anatomy, don't use color black for lineart and don't pillowshade

>or just bash it, that's fine too
Shits degenerate, are you desperate for money or what?
it feels like im going to jail just by looking at it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 03:28:27 No.3863173 Report

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>>3862999
Not to defend the guy but attention whoring =/= edgy

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 03:32:07 No.3863180 Report

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It's so bad but it actually made my dick tingle a bit.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 03:47:44 No.3863196 Report

Quoted By: >>3863202

i wish i had a twin sister

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 03:51:20 No.3863202 Report

Quoted By: >>3863239 >>3863271

>>3863196
I wish I had a twin brother so we would pretend to be the other at work so we only work 2 weeks per month

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 03:57:42 No.3863212 Report

Quoted By: >>3863248

I wish I were a cute girl

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 04:27:29 No.3863239 Report

Quoted By: >>3863255

>>3863202
how the fuck would you two live on 1 job

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 04:38:15 No.3863248 Report

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>>3863212
I wish I were a cute guy.

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 04:46:17 No.3863255 Report

Quoted By: >>3863261

>>3863239
What do you mean? most men feed their entire family with one job

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 04:51:56 No.3863261 Report

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>>3863255
Judging by your maturity it would be a minimum wage job, or close. not enough to feed an entire family, pretty much not enough to support 2 adults

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 05:01:39 No.3863266 Report

Quoted By: >>3863738 >>3863751

>>3862885
>3/4ths angles only
>no dynamic scenes whatsoever
>"anatomy" isn't consistent even for two panels in a row
you could have at least tried to make your pedoshit presentable but no, you don't care at all

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 05:04:59 No.3863271 Report

Quoted By: >>3863738

>>3863202
you can't do lewd shit with twin bro. or you can, but it wouldn't be the same.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 14:37:59 No.3863738 Report

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>>3863271
You're right, it would be better!
>>3863266
>>3/4ths angles only
Yeah you're right, I will try new angles from now on
>Dynamic scenes
True too, will do it too my dude, just wait, I will make you proud

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 14:51:05 No.3863751 Report

Quoted By: >>3863916

>>3863266
In my defense I used to make dynamic scenes when I started tho, pic related

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Anonymous Sun 24 Mar 2019 17:27:51 No.3863916 Report

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>>3863751
okay the panel with the robot neck looks kino

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