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Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 15:00:25 2019 No.3860972 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>3860990 >>3861027

Looking for critique

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 2019 15:22:24 No.3860990 Report

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>>3860972
No idea what anyone's supposed to critique. Go to /beg/ and explain what you want critiqued next time.
>text too slanted
>Bodies are literally silhouettes
>No center of gravity, everyone is flying somewhere
Over all, looks half assed.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 2019 15:45:40 No.3861014 Report

Quoted By: >>3861023

Supposed to be jumping rope.
Specifically I feel like something's wrong with the anatomy
Thanks

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 2019 15:58:50 No.3861023 Report

Quoted By: >>3861158

>>3861014
The gestures dont really suggest motion. Thats your main problem.
The scale of the ropes is way off too. When you jumpt rope it just barely passes under your feet. These kids are all clearing the rope by 4 feet.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 2019 16:09:02 No.3861027 Report

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>>3860972
learn how to draw, and learn graphic design

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 2019 18:32:22 No.3861158 Report

Quoted By: >>3861216

>>3861023
thanks. how can i better imply motion?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 22 Mar 2019 19:23:07 No.3861216 Report

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>>3861158
Fix the jump rope height first. Add hair for motion. Have them all the same size.

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