>>38519461) the pose is awkward, likely the artist skipped the gesture phase and went straight to drawing the form. If you look at the feet, you'll see the whole figure is off balance, which I'm guessing was not the intention of the artist.
2) the arm and the thigh lines create an unappealing tangent, which confuses the eye.
3) the lighting is inconsistent, highlights aren't placed correctly according to the shadows.
4) the hand proportions aren't correct.
5) there is a crease in the butt which shouldn't show when the glutes are relaxed in this pose.
6) the face proportions are off, inconsistent number of eyelashes on each eye, the eyebrows are completely different lengths.
7) the torso looks disconnected from the lower half of the body, again likely due to the artist skipping the gesture phase.