>>3686594love the style, but I have a complaint regarding the general flow of the page
on the first 3 panels you show a clear motion of escaping that dragon claw thing, but then you cut off the flow by placing the character on the opposite side of the page and breaking into two what I'm guessing is supposed to be one fluid motion
You're making the eye trail off into 2 different directions for no apparent reason, I even thought it was supposed to be 2 different characters doing 2 separate actions
You can fix this by just flipping the bottom panel (pic related), but yeah. It doesn't make the page unreadable or anything but i think you can easily improve this a lot by just changing one small thing.
