>>3173467You want me to critique your art? FINE I'll bite
It looks like in all three of your panels, you have both of your characters using the same exact poses for their hands, also you don't understand how to draw any angle of a hand. they look like tiny sausages with no segments on each finger. I bet you couldn't figure out how the muscles on a hand look.
Also, you're eyes are half moon shaped, both look almost identical. so it looks like you have zero diversity in your drawing.
The bodies from both male and female look like boxes, no curves, no bumps whatsoever. how many poses have you studied from real life? How many real life models have you drawn? I bet, you can only count that answer on one hand. maybe.
Your "shading." looks like it's just a bunch of half hazard lines jutting out from no particular direction. Also they aren't consistent lines, so your female character looks like she has hairy pits.
The hair looks like clumps of play-dough being shoved on top of a skull.
There are no backgrounds, stop being lazy as fuck and draw in a goddamned background. Where are they? in nowhere land?
also your arms are way too short, and it hurts my eyes to look at it.
To be honest, you aren't the worst person on planet earth, but you don't have smooth lines, your anatomy is fucked three ways to Tuesday, your hair has no sense of gravity, or sense of style. and your cocky on top of it.
At one point, I drew like this, and yeah it's fucking tough getting into this media, but jesus christ dude. You are on 4chan, you want people to be nice and not let you improve? go back to fucking tumblr. You want to improve? Get off this fucking site, go and fine some real life models. and practice. Were a few people on the internet rude to you? Fucking whoop dee doo. Get over it.
