>>2493432not a professional to critique this and very few would actually be on /y but you can find them on DA there are forums for it.
Your style reminds me of me kinda... we intentionally put attention away from the hands and feet since they are the hardest to draw. you even cropped out the legs... ha ha either it's a portrait or ran out of canvas space, plus both his hands are conveniently hidden.
Sakimichan has some of the best tutorials on male anatomy give it a look.
Also the background original ones made by you would always be better.
Also outlines are too thick maybe use a less thick brush next time.
Face - 8/10
Body - 5/10
Coloring - 7/10
great stuff