>>2433770>>2420993>>2420610Not him but it doesn't matter, rules of the board. I kinda liked the first comic, but when you make smut NEVER forget to not let plot get in the way of the porn, plot should ONLY be there as a supporting tool and maybe as an enhancer. Things like death or wounds can be a massive turn off for some people. It's of course your choice to put them in your comic, but keep that in mind.
Also I don't know if I like this whole rapey stuff, and it generally doesn't bother me, I guess in this case it's because I'd like to see more of those characters in different situations, things like lil' bro from the first comic with his brother AND cousin, big bro with a few indians, the bro and counsin in a more sweet scene. It's nice to see some amerindians on porn because there's so little of them.
Still I ask again a gallery or tumblr.
