>>11539916im making a manga about a NEET who signs up to sell his kidney to a shoddy butcher shop so he can afford his gaming addiction.
Being a retard who dropped out first year college he doesn't know where the kidney is so when he wakes up and finds his neck has stitching he doesn't realize something is wrong.
When his landlord asks what happened and calls him a retard that didn't sell his kidney he realizes how he fucked up and tries to get his thyroid back, not having enough money for thyroid medication he has limited time as he looks for the underground surgeon who hopefully has his thyroid.
Im a retard is this a believable mediocre story?