Your art is excellent in my opinion. You filled my request even better than I had imagined it in my head, and I know for a fact multiple other people have seen it and saved it because I've seen it posted when I wasn't the one posting it. Only thing I would work on are Hooni's eyes in it, something about them seem off. Think it might be how flat they are on top. Other than that one thing, I think it's perfect. I know being a creator is scary and any criticism hurts even if it's meant to help, art isn't my thing but I am a creator of something else. I hope that I made it clear enough that I love your style and you drew it 99% perfectly in my opinion that I'm not discouraging you by saying this.