>>2908550It would be more believable if they were just a couple years younger because it's far-fetched that 18+ guys would want to do something as regimented as a Summer Camp at a point when you first have real taste of freedom as an adult. I know they had to do this because of the implication of shota, but even something like making Keitaro celebrate his 18th during the course of the summer before any real romance would've done a lot to sell the believably since it could be seen as the last time for activities like this before going into the adult world, which the world seems to near entirely disregard.
The writing also assumes everyone but the fujoshi scoutmaster is at least bicurious given how often male characters call each other cute and semi-jokingly flirt. It's one thing if admitting to liking cock wasn't drama-inciting and treated as just having different dating preferences, but at no point do these young adult men ever once talk about pursuing sex or even relationships unless tacitly with each other, or as a display of overall horniness. I know it's a weird complaint that there's too many fags in my gay porn, but it fucks with my suspension of disbelief.
Currently playing through Hunter's route because qt twink artist makes my heart flutter. Writing is semi-believable but very obvious fantasy wish fulfillment given how first overall physical encounters are second and third basing with very little comparable buildup, especially with a shy boy that has trouble making friends. That being said the sex scenes are overall good to great, voice acting is mediocre to bad in a lot of cases. the "animation" is nothing to write home about, but the effort is appreciated. Mini-games are a mix of MeetNFuck and word jumble which is good one-handed, but makes me at least want more depth in the dialogue trees, or at least toning if I want a more horny/romantic way of playing things out with my hazubando of choice.
/r/ing Keitaro power bottoming for Hunter if that exists.