>>2934123>>2934125I wouldn't call it ugh by any means, it's miles better than half of the art I have to go through to find anything decent sometimes. Speaking purely from my preferences, I like the second one only, I don't like that position on the first one and how common it is and I also don't like jockstraps.
Now for some constructive criticism in hopes of helping you improve, for the first one, initially the feet didn't look like something 3D, as in, actual feet, it looked like paper if you can understand what I mean, but the more I looked the more it melded together with the rest of the art and now it's just simple drawn feet (which isn't a bad thing at all, I personally dislike artists who show each finger and everything through socks in high detail as if they were always wet) that fit with your art style. The asshole looks a bit like just any hole than specifically an asshole but it's not necessarily bad, I think the inside not being overly detailed fits your art style, so it might be just a matter of getting used to it. I'm not sure about how jockstraps look in this position, but I feel like the black stripes should be more diagonal, that is, it should cross below his hands towards his thumbs, feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. Lastly, it doesn't particularly bother me, but with the lines where they are, his arms, particularly his left one feel shorter than they should be, though I don't know what change could address that.
As for the second one, the only things that stand out to me are Karstedt pecs being a bit too large vertically or long would be a more appropriate word, but I'm not familiar with the character so it might be accurate and also his left forearm looks a bit short, though it may be to give the illusion of depth so not a problem.
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