>>2696400Okay since people are being pieces of shit about your art I'm gonna give some constructive criticism since these guys bashing your art can't apparently.
Your art isn't shitty. It's not perfect, but it's not bad. The facial expression on Avery is a little off and I think some of the proportions on the body are too (I think the torso might be too long, but I'm not sure).
So don't listen to these plebs on 4chan that bash your art. I got hammered on /ic/ a couple of months ago and literally nobody stood up for me. Just be glad people are sticking up to you. It's rare here.
Just keep practicing and studying anon. You'll get better as time goes on!