>>2457491Let me explain my point. First off, the colors. Now, I don't care about the colors of the room, but the artist decided to include lines to discern different objects. Some of these lines go through the hyper guy's head. Some overlap others. But worse than that, the colors aren't even finished. There are parts where the coloring goes outside the lnes, or the wall/door is completely white because the artist forgot (or didn't care) to color them in.
The proportions on hyper guy's foot is completely ruined, making him look like he's Joseph Merrick or something. His knees don't even make sense. They look like popcorn.
The POV foot also has messed up colors; some parts are white, other times you can literally see the paint of the wall on the toe.
Continuing with colors, the shading is mostly okay, but there's also the fact that hyper guy's cup is literally the same color of the skin, leading me to believe that he is drinking from a cup made up of someone's skin.
The cracks in the wall and ceiling don't make sense, since the door is BEHIND HIM and completely untouched, despite him being taller than it.
His eyes also don't exist; there are no irises or sclera (white part) on either eye; the eyes are literally the exact same color as the skin and the cup.
Finally, there's the expression. He has a blank look on his face. You'd expect him to be smiling or surprised, but he has just a blank look on his face. What is he even looking at? The cracks in the ceiling are above him, not to his right.
The second picture is a noticeable improvement, but still sloppy and could use work. The characters have the exact same expression (or lack thereof). it looks like the artist just did an Adam Ellis and copied one face onto the other head. What the fuck is even behind the blond guy? It looks like the artist was just playing with colors on the "wall" instead of actually drawing.
Now can you see why these two pictures look fucking awful?
