>>2353575Oooh, what a delight.
You have such a lovely feminine style, it's aesthetically pleasing to look at, as is the woman on the right, which is my favorite of the two.
Anatomy wise, there's a few things that I didn't buy. The woman on the right's right arm is longer than normal, even if she is bending it. and the way the character on the left is positioned makes it seem initially that the other lady has no left arm.
I understand that the woman's thighs are abnmormally large, which I assume is a part of the design and/or your style, but they need a bit of reduction.
The guy (I assumed their gender) looks a bit stiff, considering he has such a glamorous, suave look, and the woman looks relaxed and curvy.
Character composition is a bit off, as I've mentioned before about the arm. If you look closely, the man looks to be right in between her armpit, and her arm, which makes absolutely no sense that a portion of his body fits there.
Aside from that, I think this is an overall good piece, and I really do like your style a lot. Reminds me of Loish's style. You have a great understanding of anatomy and clothing, and your attention to detail is extraordinary, so well done!
