>>2242060It's great you see the flaws, as it means you're aware and want to improve. I agree with your observations and also to feel you lost a sense of perspective
Take note especially of the upper arm, the point of the deltoid connects halfway down the humerus and points at the lateral epicondyle (outer bump of your elbow). This essentially means the deltoid should be wrapping back around the arm and the bicep should be more prominent in this piece. This too will greatly affect the pectorals.