>>3738560Nta, sure
>>3738372 looks bad, but personally I think he's too pale in canon. A very slightly tanned skin would suit him better. His design is still ugly though, you need to fix more.
I know sjws are a plague but I agree that Sumeru's designs are not good. Collei became cheap waifubait, bootleg Diona is too ugly and over-designed, the red-haired bitch's design is extremely generic, the archon looks like an irrelevant loli fairy from an isekai harem.