>>3613976She likes Omori more than Sunny, so maybe she'll do an image for him. But a full comic like Aubrey? No way, she can't self-insert into a 12 year old boy.
>>3614038A nice and pleasant chapter after the emotional rollercoaster. Thanks again! I see your dialogue has improved over time as well.
You mentioned being worried that your chapters might be too short, and sure they might be compared to other fics, but I think you've got great pacing going on and the shorter chapters allows more focus for specific events. Plus keep in mind you update about every week while other fics can take weeks or even more than a month. Personally, I think you're doing great, anon. Do whatever makes you comfortable!
