I just started cleaning this one.>>5718023
Your brushwork is too messy? Paint in the direction of the plane.>>5717807
Nice expressive lines. Good design on the ogre face on her back.>>5717520
The face looks a bit too big for the head>>5716859
The pose is very T-posey but you could draw a ton of shit flying around her along with her hair to give movement to the piece.