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Very Nice.
I only have a couple issues, you are not putting enough contrast to really help exaggerate the features and make them look normal. The contour lines on the vest are not indicitaive of the forms beneath them and overall it's very timid. Less like you were trying to draw it well and more like you were scared of making something look bad.
Make mistakes while learning. If you aren't making mistakes your not trying to learn.
