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pros
-Pretty much completely understandable/readable
-The figure's proportions are good.
cons
-The volumes aren't consistent in some parts
-The lines aren't consistent
-The subject is sliding around a little
-Very uninteresting generally speaking
-The pose is very uninteresting more specifically (arguably, fixing this would fix like 50% of this after the wobbling form/lines)
Just ignore the last point for now because I'm pretty sure this isn't supposed to be very action packed, but try to make the lines and volume more consistent. Once it isn't wobbling about anymore, watch that 12 principles of animation video on youtube and try to see what you can apply to your animation to make it more fun to watch, even if it's something small.
pic related from PSG is pretty cool, and the girl is only animated on two frames. ofc there's camera work and effects as well, but her action pose really sells it though. (excuse the quality)
