>>4469737Ayayaya ya. Gonna be honest with ya.
This is pretty cringe, brah.
I only read the first chapter, since I din't find ch2 and I'm not gonna put in the effort to actually search for it.
But I was involuntarily cringing several times as I pushed through the first chapter. I can see you're heavily influenced by shonen fight mangas, you've basically reused a lot of common tropes without adding anything new or a different twist, just tired cliches. Nothing wrong if you want to do a fighting manga, but your not bring anything new to the table, in terms of both characters and story. You have the gifted and unbeatable but edgy mc who honestly felt a lot like a wish fulfillment/self insert. This whole first chapter felt like something a 14 year old kid would draw, thinking it's cool.
Now for the positive point, It's easy to follow and flows pretty natural between panels, so following the plot is easy. Though it's crude and lacking in the fight scenes, I like your art style and you've got a lot of potential for growth.
But if you want people to give you more feed back, then as another anon mention before, at least dump the first chapter here, or direct link your chapters, if you want people to give a shit.
I'm not gonna bash on you too much, if this is a passion project of your, then knock yourself out, just have fun, it's a good learning experience and keep working at it.
