>>4468358I like the colors and it's cool and all, just don't use a brush in a way that it's clear which brush you used.
>>4468360Your shadings all over the place. if the suns up and behind, everything would be back-light with only an edge glow, if it's above then the leaves would cast shadow down on the truck, also make your back and foreground different tones.
>>4468362Don't stop at the first step to get approval, finish the damn thing and then see what others think.
>>4468366don't emphasize individual teeth. looks like she has gingivitis
>>4469047Don't draw individual teeth, way to much detail in places that don't need it, either have giant eyes or move the side of the head closer to the eye, no line variation.
>>4469134You are not thinking about why you are using the line weight that you are using. Heavy lines should be used to imply shadows or to show weight, light lines to show highlights and lightness.
>>4469157focus on line drawing or rendering one at a time, you're doing both and neither are working.
>>4469267Face is fine, you have to put more effort into the rest
>>4469279Back of the hand and hip need the lines cleaned up, pant cuffs are symbol drawn. still cute
>>4469337clean up your sketches
>>4469665Nice, but over detailed and lines and perspective is fucked in some places.
>>4469326build up detail over the entire picture at the same time, don't just concentrait on the parts you like, hair is playdough
>>4469736do thumbnails to get a pose before you start drawing, work out detail in sketches. you've got the "this is concept art" pose.
>>4469754darker grey for the shadows.
