>>4387297I have drawn countless db chars.
1: the face is too round
2: the clothes are wrong
3: the nose is wrong, that is the anime nose, Toriyama doesnt draw like this
4: ears are wrong, too smal, there is a part missing also
5: hairline is wrong, it is not totaly closed
6: lines over eyebrows are wrong, there is never only one, and rarely on both sides.
7: angle of hair over the face is wrong, also the size of hair is wrong, also the start of the hair next to the hairline is wrong, see 5 and it also goes up a little in the beggining before turning and coming down.
8 piece of hair next to the ear is wrong, because see 4
9: lines next to the neck to imply traps are wrong, too close one to another, the angle is also wrong, they should be curved but paralel.
10: line of the neck to imply adamns apple is wrong, should be more to the left.
11: chest line is wrong, should be more curved where they meet.
Dont bother coloring.
