>>3888645>read tons of webcomics thinking I could do better, especially comedy>someone actually asks for crit, have no idea how to helpAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
What is the joke in this one? And what is the context?
Do your characters have underlying personalities?
What mood does the comic have?
I'm going over the Twitter, I think [Finland?] being front and centre but with no facial expressions is a big part of the problem but I'm actually stumped by this. Is it possible to keep the =3 idea but have the eyes change? Or have the blue man react in the last panel. Or both are stone faced, but something/someone else in the last panel makes the situation look very dire- a beating,shanking or fight club would probably be better received than prison rape, though.
Also try to convey a personality. The more I think on this the less convinced I believe it but look at pic related-despite being dumb as hell and >>>wholesome it has a strange charm to it
