Aww man that's so much better than what I did on my overpaint. Just gonna do a side question about overpaints in general and I'd like to hear what other people think about this stuff:
Like I said before I don't think that overpaints need to look like finalized versions of what you think the original artist should do to their images. Just illustrate the points you're talking about and get out. That's how I think of it. People need to figure shit out themselves.
I've seen this shit too much up here where somebody's talking about a specific problem with a piece without going into great detail with their fixes and some random asshole's like "Her eyes look weird nao :((" when the person doing the overpainting was talking about a completely separate subject like the composition or pose. Usually it's not even the original poster of an image who gets triggered but some random dickhead who doesn't have anything else to contribute to the conversation...
I'm not even talking about my overpainting/instructions in particular. Maybe it was really bad or maybe my points didn't come across clearly.
Anyways what do you guys think about this stuff?