>>6029438The eyes are kinda lopsided. What are the influences for your style? Is not a personal attack but I'm not sure if the square 2000'sish eyes works with the nose and face format.
Look in to temmie's touhou artwork, I think is pretty close to your style and what I imagine you are trying to achieve but more polished, you could study how she does things and try to apply it to your vision, It would improve a lot in my opinion.
