>>95527409Take all this with a grain of salt, since I'm not the best artist and I can't ever be bothered to draw. I know that doing box constructions like this is boring, but it helps.
You're head is large, I would take it down a bit but that's just me, I know heads in this show are huge, and loli is suppose to be Huge+. All your limbs seem a bit small too, need them to be longer. You can have either the arms bent and a bit closer to her body, or you can have her leaning a good deal more back for the pic to look good, and having one hand do something different from the other is a lot easier way to make it look good.
You see where the lines of the hands/shoulders/hips/feet are pointing in totally off directions? They should be pointing in either the same direction, or all be pointing to the same point in space.
Hope this helps, sorry if it comes of a bit condecending
