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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 04:30:34 2017 No.93877360 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>93877371 >>93877481 >>93882143 >>93957418

HALT! COMIC POLICE! Edition

What do we do here? Webcomics of course. What kind of webcomics? The kind that the Comics Code Authority approves! Safe and friendly to the youth of the internet.

Come here for some good word on drawing, storytelling, worldbuilding and anything else your webcomic needs to not make any wing angry.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:31:19 No.93877371 Report

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>>93877360
Scrub Authors GOODIE Bag
Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:
>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
calligraphr.com

>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://www.quickposes.com/pages/timed

>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: http://www.shutterstock.com/

>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
http://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ (surprisingly not a typo)

>Links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV
>Contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

>DISCORD CHAT going on:
https://discord.gg/rXMbdqP

>Wise words from John Cleese:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pb5oIIPO62g

>Invisible Ink:
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf

>Paper Wings
http://chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
https://web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/

>Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
http://www.blambot.com/

>Writing Resources:
http://www.cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf

>Guide to promoting your comic:
http://miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/

>Comics for makin' comics!
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics

https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=how+to+draw+comics

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Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:34:01 No.93877432 Report

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>>93877132
Very cool motivation

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:36:50 No.93877481 Report

Quoted By: >>93877667 >>93890499 >>93919506 >>93943346

>>93877360
You can also participate on a HYW challenge!

>>93830952
>Theme: Castaway in space
>Genre (options):
>noir
>romance
>slice of life
>Deadline: July 19

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:46:11 No.93877643 Report

Quoted By: >>93877700 >>93877719 >>93878777

have an idea, and due to me being a scrubby writer it'll come off cliche, but I really want this idea to work, so please, I need honest feedback.
So, world were there is just humans, none of that d&d shit.
This world would be pretty bland, had it not been for the humans being able to master magic.
Eventually, a huge black ball collides with earth, conveniently landing near the main human settlements.
It emerges, reveals itself to be a huge ass monster and goes on to do typical Godzilla stuff.
Eventually the humans are able to kill it, but then, the human who struck the final blow to it became possessed and turned into the beast.
And so began a cycle, monster gets killed, person who kills it becomes monster, repeat.
Eventually, they realize that there is no way to truly kill it, so the humans form a society called the sealers and are able to seal the monster into a cave, causing peace to reign if not for a group of people who worship the invincible beast, who want to go out, kill the sealers and unleash the beast, killing it and somehow splitting the power up among them all.
Pretty much power hungry regular bad guys who wanna be bad.
The story wouldn't have a "chosen one" cliche and would focus on the key figures for both fractions, as well as the occasional page dedicated to the beast's POV

Posted last thread, need ideas to improve on it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:47:36 No.93877667 Report

Quoted By: >>93877719

>>93877481
I feel like I could do a one-panel of space castaways..

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:49:33 No.93877700 Report

Quoted By: >>93877868

>>93877643
It's a non-cliche way to use cliche elements. Everybody does it!

does anyone in the setting ever look into the reason behind this thing? why there's shit like this in space, whether there's any danger of more of it coming? or is it just a force of nature which they're too busy holding down to have any higher thoughts about it

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:50:55 No.93877719 Report

Quoted By: >>93877868

>>93877667
Do it anon! You are still on time!

>>93877643
I gave my latest reply here >>93877682 just in case you already closed that thread

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:51:09 No.93877725 Report

Quoted By: >>93878068

Hi.

Would anyone here draw a comic for me?

Would you like to know the idea of my comic?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 04:58:11 No.93877868 Report

Quoted By: >>93878421 >>93878599

>>93877700
The beast is such an powerful force that yes, the sealers have to work 24/7 to seal it in its cave
Plus with the cultists trying to get
In, they kinda don't care about it's origins.

>>93877719
Okay, any suggestions for comics?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:07:00 No.93878068 Report

Quoted By: >>93878168

>>93877725
post it

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:11:52 No.93878168 Report

Quoted By: >>93878342

>>93878068
well

the idea is a Comic Of Lydia Fox (From Arthur)

With the original idea that Connor Gordon (The Original Creator Of Lydia) had for her

The comic would be of lydia (with 7 years of age)

while she was in a pool. and it is immersed in the shallow end of the pool, and suffered a spinal injury that paralyzed from the waist down.

http://arthur.wikia.com/wiki/Lydia_Fox#Character_development

http://www.swnewsmedia.com/savage_pacer/news/year-old-draws-new-arthur-friend/article_e4dae9f0-2eaa-5352-baac-c71fd47646f1.html

http://www.startribune.com/a-new-friend-for-arthur/44569532/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZsBKbUIyiPY

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oKshI6VrdFU

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:21:27 No.93878342 Report

Quoted By: >>93878546

>>93878168
Do you want her to drown in the pool or what

Lucy !wwaeC23A.o

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Lucy !wwaeC23A.o Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:23:17 No.93878373 Report

Quoted By: >>93878442

Instead of directly inking I'm now making a sketch prior and it's making fantastic work for me. (In other words I'm being more patient with my work)

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:25:57 No.93878421 Report

Quoted By: >>93878599 >>93879310

>>93877868
Okay, as long as there's a sensible reason. The only thing that bothers me as a reader is when there's this impossibly massive problem in the world, and absolutely nobody is thinking about the cure, only the treatment, even after ages and ages. Especially if it's some blunt metaphor about modern problems.
But if they have a legitimate reason to focus all their energy on surviving and the task at hand, then that is fine. Like Shingeki no Kyojin kinda stuff.

Peach

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Peach Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:26:58 No.93878440 Report

Quoted By: >>93878683

I have no idea how to draw females, so here are some sketches I did while I tried to fix my block.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:27:00 No.93878442 Report

Quoted By: >>93878481

>>93878373
is that some kidn of wrinkle on her shirt, or is it a graphic? It kind of looks like a katakana with a ten ten..

Lucy !wwaeC23A.o

Lucy !wwaeC23A.o Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:29:07 No.93878481 Report

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>>93878442
I usually just draw a gibberish alphabet i made up for when I have nothing to put in the shirts or designs

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:32:16 No.93878546 Report

Quoted By: >>93930018

>>93878342
The idea of the comic is Lydia (the fox girl) this she in a pool. And that she dives into the shallow end of the pool, and that she suffered an injury to the spine, that Lydia was paralyzed from the waist down.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:36:10 No.93878599 Report

Quoted By: >>93878955 >>93879310

>>93878421
I guess it makes sense if we think of it as a SnK thing, with the deal of sealers having to be working all days at all hours to keep the beast sealed because of how powerful it is.

Although this gives me the idea that maybe there could be a third faction that dosn't really want to use the beast's power but want to study what it is instead? They may not have bad intentions (they may even think that by studying it they can find a way to stop it once and for all) but some of them may actually do some risky stuff that makes them a menace.

>>93877868
Actually Shingeki no Kyojin is a good example of a comic (well, manga if you want to be too picky) to check on for this, even if it's not typical fantasy.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:40:34 No.93878683 Report

Quoted By: >>93879110

>>93878440
Those designs actually look quite cool.

As for females, you have to remember 4 important steps.

>boobs
>more hips
>less waist
>no bulge

how much boobs, hips or waist they have is up to you to play with.

bonus step of "not too wide shoulders", in that aspect men are usually more "square" than women.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:45:23 No.93878777 Report

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>>93877643
Why is the monster's initial reaction to landing on a foreign planet, just wrecking things?
Considering the story you've provided and the aim you want to approach, I would begin the story off in the middle of a scuffle between these two factions.
I like the other anon's idea too, just kind of a neutral size getting caught up in the mess.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 05:56:29 No.93878955 Report

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>>93878599
ah yes. Not to continue to draw comparisons to other series, as that's a shallow and frustrating way to analyze things, but ... there's something a bit like that in Wheel of Time's backstory, and I've always liked it. The idea of well-meaning researchers screwing things up a bit is fantastic.
Oh, Chrono Trigger too. Not sure who did it first. plus in both of those cases, nobody was sure the thing in question even existed or had any idea that it was evil, so you won't be stepping on toes with your faction, probably.

Peach

Peach Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:04:12 No.93879110 Report

Quoted By: >>93879179 >>93879191

>>93878683
Thanks for the tip, but I was honestly more so talking about the face department.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:08:28 No.93879179 Report

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>>93879110
shorter face, narrower chin, bigger eyes, rounder hairline,
larger, rounder cranium.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:09:00 No.93879191 Report

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>>93879110
Oh I see, sorry about that.

Well the only thing I can say there is that women tend to have more soft facial traits, at least when you want to go with the average female face. Bigger/rounder eyes, eyelashes, a bit smaller noses, more notorious cheekbones. Of course you can also play with those things so they don't look like a Disney Rapunzel clone, but expect people to go with "why does this woman have a manly face"?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:16:52 No.93879310 Report

Quoted By: >>93879339 >>93879397

>>93878421
>>93878599

I've read SnK, but I don't want for their plots to be somewhat similar

You see, the reason why the sealers keep going to seal him away is because their magic is weak and can't hold long, so they have to keep a constant maintenance.
This is why the cultist want them dead
I've been thinking though, what if the sealers waste most of their power weakening the beast and still shielding him, like they used so much of it that the beast has been turned into a more..tame form?
I dunno here's some sketches, and yes i know it's a stick figure, I just can't thinking about making him look....normal like?
Anyone willing to help out with him artwise?

Also, I like the third faction idea, the faction that actually wants to learn about this thing, but isn't trusted by the sealers..

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:18:48 No.93879339 Report

Quoted By: >>93879538

>>93879310
Yeah I was just suggesting it's the same kind of "Oh well, this is our lives now" attitude, which is all you can do when the monster is that... monstery
I like the idea of it legitimately weakening over time, so they've made a form of progress after all

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:22:34 No.93879397 Report

Quoted By: >>93879538

>>93879310
Tame form? That does sound interesting.

Also for a moment I thought the eye was a fang and I was going to comment on how cute the beast turned out after some taming

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:30:10 No.93879538 Report

Quoted By: >>93879743

>>93879339
>>93879397
It's late, so sorry for the horrible quality
Yes that's my excuse

So, say that during the plot the cultists find out thatvthe beast is getting "tamed" and stage an all out attack by breaking into the cave..somehow.

The beast is freed, the cultist rejoice, but they realize that the beast is too weak after all this time and that he's not really worth it at the point.

The beast is freed, and the third faction decides to really step in..

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:41:54 No.93879743 Report

Quoted By: >>93879899

>>93879538
>The beast is freed, the cultist rejoice, but they realize that the beast is too weak after all this time and that he's not really worth it at the point.

What a bunch of meanies, now I feel bad for the poor beast. If he is really being "tamed" this may even lead to some interesting things.

Well anon you are now making your plot bigger and thinking of more paths to follow, this is all good work and exercise for your story. Glad our advices are helping you so far.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:45:25 No.93879794 Report

Quoted By: >>93880433 >>93887926

Here's a test page I did of my project about a month ago. I'm currently working on the prologue and am aiming to have it done by late October.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 06:52:03 No.93879899 Report

Quoted By: >>93880433

>>93879743
Hey thanks, you helped out a lot

Did a rough idea of the cultist freeing the beast, and how it would go down.

The beast could end up being so tamed that he could eventually just be a guy with freak powers

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 07:24:03 No.93880433 Report

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>>93879794
This looks good anon! Good luck on the project, this page alone looks quite nice.

>>93879899
>that page
When will the bullying end? The beast needs a break.

>Then the beast goes into a new self-discovery journey of adventure while dealing with crazy third faction-ers.
>And with it you get to explore more on the "ok where did it come from and why" with maybe even adding more on it as the story keeps going since the promised big bad is not that big or that bad anymore

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 07:33:49 No.93880616 Report

Quoted By: >>93880644

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 07:35:57 No.93880644 Report

Quoted By: >>93885420 >>93886468

>>93880616
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 09:58:06 No.93882073 Report

Quoted By: >>93883526

Finished coloring the second to last page of the spinoff comic tonight. Colored five pages today alone.

Eager to be done with it and put it out in the wild.

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:06:42 No.93882143 Report

Quoted By: >>93882243

>>93877360

posting wip, sorry i was gone all week... it wont happen again!

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:18:56 No.93882243 Report

Quoted By: >>93882453

>>93882143

bump, page arts done...

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:19:06 No.93882245 Report

Quoted By: >>93882266 >>93884296

It's been a while since I last posted in these threads, these last weeks have been busy, but I've kept working on the comic, albeit at a lesser rate that I would have liked. I'm going to post the first four pages, they can be read online at loosecannons.net (the site still needs some polishing).

English is not my native language, so if you spot any mistake feel free to point them and I'll correct them as soon as I can.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:22:11 No.93882266 Report

Quoted By: >>93882344 >>93884296 >>93890794

>>93882245

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:32:04 No.93882344 Report

Quoted By: >>93882351

>>93882266
I've been putting a lot of time drawing and shading these pages. The two main reasons it's in b/w is because I like it, and that going full colour would be a ton of work. I hope I'll get faster soon.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:33:10 No.93882351 Report

Quoted By: >>93882368 >>93884296

>>93882344
Shit, forgot to attach the image.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:35:27 No.93882368 Report

Quoted By: >>93884296

>>93882351
And this is it for now.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:37:00 No.93882376 Report

Quoted By: >>93887307

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 10:50:12 No.93882453 Report

Quoted By: >>93883171 >>93894376

>>93882243

ok, its done, i hope yall like it

*you can read it on:

-comic fury: http://ggz.thecomicseries.com/
-taptastic: https://tapastic.com/episode/623701
-linewebtoons: http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/ggz/introductions/viewer?title_no=66734&episode_no=1
-the duck webcomics: http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/GGZ/
-tumblr: https://gothgrillz.tumblr.com/

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 11:02:17 No.93882556 Report

Quoted By: >>93882592 >>93884877 >>93890385

LOL

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 11:08:03 No.93882592 Report

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>>93882556

I guess all the rumors are true, im just another worthless spic beaner mexican tortilla spinner thats never going to make it, lol

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 11:24:53 No.93882708 Report

Quoted By: >>93883171

>>93853093

>The HYW Discord server finally managed to kick me out.

>Hey, Dewd, Coldfusion and Bones. Where do you guys hang out now?

where do i hang out? under a tree on a noose around my neck that cast the most depressing life crushing darkness, cuz i dont just feel dead on the inside i feel dead in general like this is some kind of hybrid limbo hell, lol

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 11:27:01 No.93882726 Report

Quoted By: >>93882750 >>93888718 >>93889458 >>93890499

What kind of music do you listen to while making comics, /hyw/?

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 11:30:37 No.93882750 Report

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>>93882726

on infinit loop: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20jvV-BPNSk

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boysland_crew Sat 15 Jul 2017 12:11:16 No.93883022 Report

Quoted By:

>>93874426
>>93874506
>>93874530

Thanks for your inputs. (I haven't a clue as to whether or not these links will work back to a dead thread but whatever.) We will make fixing the latest page versus latest chapter update a priority.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 12:30:03 No.93883160 Report

Quoted By: >>93883601 >>93885300

>>93870323
Going commando is far less hygenic than wearing panties.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 12:31:21 No.93883171 Report

Quoted By: >>93894234

>>93882453
Is that a Pepe phone?

>>93882708
Hey man, save the dark humor for the comic!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 13:05:43 No.93883526 Report

Quoted By:

>>93882073
Comic?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 13:12:20 No.93883601 Report

Quoted By:

>>93883160
It's coldfusion, the guy is clinically retarded, there's nothing you can do to talk sense into him.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 14:06:45 No.93884296 Report

Quoted By:

>>93882245
>>93882266
>>93882351
>>93882368
Damn those are some really neat backgrounds, also good use of the b/w.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 14:45:29 No.93884877 Report

Quoted By: >>93885074 >>93910990

>>93882556
Lets be fair. No one here makes more than a few Starbucks lattes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 14:55:57 No.93885074 Report

Quoted By: >>93885243

>>93884877
why is everyone here so shit?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 15:03:33 No.93885243 Report

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>>93885074
Because anyone that gits gud leaves as soon as they can.

Or quits. Many quit.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 15:06:25 No.93885300 Report

Quoted By:

>>93883160
Wear cotton. It breathes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 15:13:04 No.93885420 Report

Quoted By: >>93888468

>>93880644
is this String Theory?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 16:01:37 No.93886468 Report

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>>93880644
that demon cultist is a qt

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 16:43:20 No.93887307 Report

Quoted By: >>93888718

>>93882376
Time for a fight scene

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:09:00 No.93887926 Report

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>>93879794
really into this style. nice stuff. looking forward to the prologue.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:26:35 No.93888468 Report

Quoted By: >>93888721 >>93889143

>>93885420
?

Dupe

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Dupe Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:34:53 No.93888718 Report

Quoted By: >>93896540

>>93882726
For my comic I sometimes make playlists for some of my characters with music they'd like in them. Mostly 90s electronic music since that's the general vibe of my works though.

When I work on resources for my videos I mostly listen to the album I actually have permission to use in it. If anyone here has played "Battleblock theater", it's an album made by the same composer. Though it was made back in the 90s for a fictional video game. Criminally underrated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0ke6ac-O0k&list=PLhJYEHL2UDhU1zkItMvDBk2zxvT7VGP_v

>>93887307
This looks nice when zoomed in and you have a lot of skill but it needs more focus. When I look at it my eyes aren't drawn to anything in particular and so it becomes kind of an eyesore. Maybe try differentiating the characters from eachother and the backgrounds by using bolder outlines on what the focus is. Also since your color palette is so light I might do those panel dividers in black or a dark color so the panels are easier to differentiate.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:34:55 No.93888721 Report

Quoted By: >>93889143

>>93888468
Yeah, idk how anon made a comparison since I don't think anything on that page is similar to something from ST.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:48:55 No.93889053 Report

Quoted By: >>93889207 >>93889255 >>93897163

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:52:48 No.93889143 Report

Quoted By: >>93891639 >>93892651

>>93888468
>>93888721
Not content wise but I thought the art style's very similar.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:55:22 No.93889207 Report

Quoted By:

>>93889053
very nice

Dupe

Dupe Sat 15 Jul 2017 17:57:10 No.93889255 Report

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>>93889053
Legitimately feels like it could of been one of those fake ads from Ren & Stimpy or as a comic in Nickelodeon magazine. The style looks legitimately from that era, nice work.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:05:25 No.93889458 Report

Quoted By: >>93889537 >>93891141

>>93882726
When I was doing some pages I was listening to amon tobins splinter cell chaos theory soundtrack. And for these sketches some deftones.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Ye-frzA7N0E

I'm thinking this is how I want the Demi-urge in my comic to look basically humans get there mana from them and the mana is a lot weaker in the humans. This is back story stuff because the story I want to tell takes place during the age of man. The Dem-urge are responsible for a lot of the technology on the planet as well as the guns although the urge only really love to use melee weapons when they battle. I don't usually do sketches like this only really to show y'all, I mostly use the notes app and jot things down when they hit me.

Dupe

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Dupe Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:06:24 No.93889476 Report

Quoted By: >>93889983 >>93897529

Also I just realized I started work on Vegabond this time last year. Here's a comparison of the first picture of CIN I posted in these threads exactly one year ago and the most recent picture I've done of him this week.

What a difference a year makes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:09:07 No.93889537 Report

Quoted By: >>93889772

>>93889458
4chan is 18+

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:18:20 No.93889772 Report

Quoted By: >>93891141

>>93889537
Im your elder though :) and Demi urge are many different color fyi forgot to mention.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:24:57 No.93889932 Report

Quoted By:

feast for a king will kill me if i continue to read it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:26:46 No.93889983 Report

Quoted By: >>93890197

>>93889476
>>93889476
Foreal dude I LOVE it ,like I say every now and then I can't wait to see this done, but taking your time really has done you good. Btw will you review the system shock games or are you gonna only do new games?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:29:26 No.93890057 Report

Quoted By: >>93894234 >>93897198

Character designs of Mary J. doe.

Dupe

Dupe Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:34:28 No.93890197 Report

Quoted By: >>93890818

>>93889983
Thanks! And yeah I've kind of felt bad for taking so long with all of this but I really do think it's for the good of the end product.

As for the reviews, I'm starting off with my series "Forgotten Gaming" which just focuses on my shareware and abandonware collection that all have little to no documentation online and are mostly awful. I'll be doing actually good games later on but haven't really planned it out yet since I already have those other projects going on. The first actually well known games I'd review would definitely be 90s sci-fi though, and the system shock series is among my favorites.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:41:22 No.93890385 Report

Quoted By: >>93894234

>>93882556
Who?

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:46:06 No.93890499 Report

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>>93882726
It always changes according to what I'm doing. Right now I'm getting in the right mood for the challenge here >>93877481

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xiGKxCAg_0o

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:57:38 No.93890794 Report

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>>93882266
now this is something I can get behind

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 18:58:33 No.93890818 Report

Quoted By:

>>93890197
The 90's really were the best times man wish I had been in my 20's then :(

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 19:12:47 No.93891141 Report

Quoted By: >>93891431 >>93893555

>>93889772
>>93889458
>3rd grade tier drawings
>can't even spell
>retard level concepts
reminder you're posting with literal children in these threads. these are the people giving you advice and suggestions

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 19:24:07 No.93891431 Report

Quoted By:

>>93891141
Can confirm. As you show, there is no age limit for shitposting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 19:34:12 No.93891639 Report

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>>93889143
>Where- HOW do I sign?
hehehehe

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 20:20:32 No.93892651 Report

Quoted By: >>93894683

>>93889143
I guess I can see it.
Is it bad that I like the artstyle from the beginning more than the present one? I mean it improved a lot and it's nice and all, but there is something about the early one that I miss, not sure how to express it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 20:58:12 No.93893555 Report

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>>93891141
Just sit back and enjoy the show kiddo.

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:29:25 No.93894234 Report

Quoted By: >>93894481

>>93883171

>Is that a Pepe phone?

yes

>Hey man, save the dark humor for the comic!

ok, i will try senpai

>>93890057
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMM........

>>93890385
mfw

bones

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bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:35:18 No.93894376 Report

Quoted By: >>93894401 >>93894545 >>93903002

>>93882453

i made a video of me making this page: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mvnqqZHmeG4&feature=youtu.be

*pic related is what i mean by how these pages look on my new nigga-rigged laptop i frankensteined together and the screen resolution looks stretched out and on any other copmputer and deviced everything i drew looks super skinny... its a really confusing way to have to draw, i tried doing everything i could to fix this problem but never found a solution

bones

bones Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:36:25 No.93894401 Report

Quoted By:

>>93894376

*computer or device(tablet, cellphone, etc)

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:39:37 No.93894481 Report

Quoted By: >>93894603

>>93894234
>HMMMMMMMMMMMMMM........

Did i become linkara?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:42:08 No.93894545 Report

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>>93894376
you must be 18 or older to post here

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:44:36 No.93894603 Report

Quoted By: >>93899942

>>93894481
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:47:43 No.93894683 Report

Quoted By:

>>93892651
I love the art from chapter 1 and would have 0% problem with the whole comic looking like that, that said I think the color art is fantastic too. Really the biggest strength of the art is the characters acting, look at him rubbing his face in the second to last panel there.

jam

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jam Sat 15 Jul 2017 21:58:49 No.93894978 Report

Quoted By: >>93895248 >>93895299 >>93896305 >>93896398

Welcome to Singing-Rock!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:09:19 No.93895248 Report

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>>93894978

It looks so beautiful.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:10:53 No.93895299 Report

Quoted By:

>>93894978

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:47:46 No.93896305 Report

Quoted By:

>>93894978
dem huge mushrooms are makin me hungry

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:51:06 No.93896398 Report

Quoted By: >>93896430

>>93894978
LFG Underbog.

jam

jam Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:52:05 No.93896430 Report

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>>93896398
What

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:52:15 No.93896439 Report

Quoted By: >>93896597 >>93896613 >>93896710 >>93954693

I want to give my webcomic a website-that-belongs-to-a-fansub-group-who-scans-manga aesthetic.

Also I wonder if I should try to make incomplete stories, I wonder if anyone has tried this before, stories that start in chapter 8 and make references to things that were never ever be published.

I need to do stuff no one else has done or I won't break through this competitive world

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:55:34 No.93896540 Report

Quoted By:

>>93888718
>For my comic I sometimes make playlists for some of my characters with music they'd like in them
Huh. I should try this sometime.

I actually put together playlists to serve as a fake "soundtrack" to the events of the comic, but I've never thought about what kind of music each character would listen to.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:57:11 No.93896597 Report

Quoted By: >>93896856

>>93896439
Have the font in the meantime - http://www.blambot.com/font_animeace2.shtml

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 22:57:36 No.93896613 Report

Quoted By:

>>93896439
that's an okay way to read comics, i like them alright.
as for starting in the middle, that's fine and all, but don't CALL it chapter 8

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:00:59 No.93896710 Report

Quoted By: >>93896838 >>93896856

>>93896439
>I want to give my webcomic a website-that-belongs-to-a-fansub-group-who-scans-manga aesthetic.

any examples you got on this? Because most the ones I know are either forums or they look like a really old website from the early internet

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:05:55 No.93896838 Report

Quoted By:

>>93896710
I assume this person means the likes of Mangareader

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:06:43 No.93896856 Report

Quoted By:

>>93896710
I was checking how the pages looked, the bad scans and the crooked pages, also the recruit pages and the moe pictures on them.
It will probably look very obnoxious

>>93896597
that's the font I always use anyway

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:19:22 No.93897163 Report

Quoted By: >>93897230 >>93958199

>>93889053
if dewd's in this thread. Look. This is what a good John K style works. It has weigh and defined shapes. Your comic however feels nothing like that.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:20:38 No.93897198 Report

Quoted By:

>>93890057
cute as fuck, man. I wanna hug that Mary J doe.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:22:28 No.93897230 Report

Quoted By:

>>93897163
>weigh and defined shapes
of all the things you could praise about John K style, I don't think those are valid.
Dewd's shit looks more like gross Butch Hartman abominations anyway. all pointies everyhwere.

Dupe

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Dupe Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:36:11 No.93897529 Report

Quoted By: >>93908093 >>93936911

>>93889476
Finished a bio page image for Hyla as well.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 15 Jul 2017 23:58:16 No.93898039 Report

Quoted By: >>93898291

Still making that cute and silly webcomic about a fox and a cat going on adventures.
I'm trying to make it look a bit neater. Also, for moving on with the story faster while only doing three panels a week I decided to have more dialogue.

https://foxandcatadventures.tumblr.com/archive

I think I'm slowly getting into their world and their heads. It's like throwing things at them and watching them react.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:08:54 No.93898291 Report

Quoted By: >>93898377

>>93898039
so cute
just um, did the cat look that much like Pusheen before? I feel like it didn't

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:11:21 No.93898361 Report

Quoted By:

initial sketch for page 2 of my tcg themed web comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:11:44 No.93898377 Report

Quoted By: >>93898540

>>93898291
Yes, it did. Or maybe I was worse in the past. I want it to look like that cat but just with a slight spin. But it's a very conscious choice and will never make any money of it. I just want to tell cute stories about cute adventures.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:18:35 No.93898540 Report

Quoted By: >>93898746

>>93898377
ah well i wasnt super into it before, but now that you have this much of a story and i've read it all in a row.. yeah, i'm hooked. bookmark'd

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:26:39 No.93898746 Report

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>>93898540
Oh, boy. Thanks!

I know it's a bit slow but it's probably something you can read every two weeks and things move forward. I want it to be comfy while also ongoing. I'm still trying to find that nice balance.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:58:13 No.93899566 Report

Quoted By: >>93899586 >>93899645 >>93899918 >>93900126 >>93900199 >>93900670 >>93901766 >>93901951

QUICK!!!

What are the most used tropes in your story?

Dupe

Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 00:59:21 No.93899586 Report

Quoted By:

>>93899566
Mine is literally built on a trope

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RedOniBlueOni

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:01:26 No.93899645 Report

Quoted By: >>93899786

>>93899566
I actually don't know. It's been years since I've been actively readint TVTropes.

But people being confined in tiny universes that are all they know basically is a trope that I've personally found very satisfying. I will even write a short story book about people living on small islands.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:06:20 No.93899786 Report

Quoted By:

>>93899645
Reminds me of that mexican tribe that thinks their 5-mile area is the whole world, and refused to believe visitors that told them otherwise.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:11:13 No.93899918 Report

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>>93899566
Adrenaline / battle junkie I guess?

Lucy !wwaeC23A.o

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Lucy !wwaeC23A.o Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:12:16 No.93899942 Report

Quoted By:

>>93894603
Holy KEK

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gloryhol anon Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:18:30 No.93900126 Report

Quoted By: >>93900180 >>93900545 >>93922425

>>93899566
dominant girl. Ophélie's a fucking 1.93 meter tall amazon full of suppressed anger, tits and enjoys bossing the band around.

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gloryhol anon Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:20:40 No.93900180 Report

Quoted By: >>93922425

>>93900126
And first draft of the last page. not sure about the last panel. I like the composition, but anatomy needs work. Were's that redrawing anon who's been kind to me?

Also I don't want to be too obvious about the fact that these two are gonna be fuck buddies in the future

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:21:26 No.93900199 Report

Quoted By:

>>93899566
Power of friendship
By the Power of Grayskull!/Calling Out Attacks
Literally built the team off of the 2 boy 1 girl trope

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:34:50 No.93900545 Report

Quoted By:

>>93900126
>amazon
>twigs for limbs.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Sun 16 Jul 2017 01:39:41 No.93900670 Report

Quoted By:

>>93899566
in the story? Jeez.. uh.. there's a tad too much 'here we go again' and some semi-regular deus ex machina shit going on. It comes from learning to write from RPGs. Don't.. don't do that, kids. For some reason, I only notice the story in videogames. in TV i just see it as "things that happened" and don't think about the writing at all.

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Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:02:07 No.93901219 Report

Quoted By: >>93901440

How's it hangin' /hyw/?
Its been a while.
I'm starting to use Clip Studio Paint and I'm really liking it.
Your thoughts?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:11:36 No.93901440 Report

Quoted By: >>93901507

>>93901219
I need to switch to it. It's so much better.

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:14:25 No.93901507 Report

Quoted By: >>93901615 >>93901766

>>93901440
I recommend watching a few tutorials first, it can be a bit overwhelming if you dont know where everything is

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:18:37 No.93901611 Report

Quoted By: >>93901649 >>93901717

>MFW your analytics platform shows you there are Russians visiting your webcomic.
>MFW You don't know if they're bots or not.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:18:40 No.93901615 Report

Quoted By:

>>93901507
That's a great idea. It seems like it does exactly what I wish photoshop would (having a bunch of variations on things instead of requiring you to change all the settings and save a tool preset, and then it doesn't have its own icon), but because of that, it looks so daunting to try to learn it all

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:19:57 No.93901649 Report

Quoted By: >>93901695 >>93901717

>>93901611
I have found a lot of my art on russian websites that look to have been populated entirely by bots.. but it's hard to tell

Will Draw for Food Guy

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Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:21:30 No.93901695 Report

Quoted By:

>>93901649
Its pretty straight forward
To start, here is your pencil

There are several different kinds of pencils to use (think of them as REAL pencils)

And then some options to adjust it if you need to

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:22:15 No.93901717 Report

Quoted By:

>>93901611
>>93901649
>Russia is in fact populated only by Putin and a bunch of bots

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:24:21 No.93901766 Report

Quoted By: >>93901840 >>93903002

currently working on page 43, about to start recording and will post a wip tonight if my wifi stays on.

>>93901507

>will draw for food guy

holy shit i literally thought you were dead! where have you been all this time? vacation?

>>93899566

nice dubs! I dont know what counts as a trope exactly? like a boy falls in love with a girl type of thing? um, well the main goth girl character Trinity hates all jews but has a jewish best friend named Lillia(another goth girl, and a hardcore liberal) and likes several jewish celebrities like ron pearlman and seth rogan and adam carolla, she used to be heavy into jhon stewart until she got red pilled and became woke to all the jewish lies and deceptions in the world and realized that jon stewart is a hardcore liberal with one sided opinions she believes he deceived her on purpose because he is a jew, it all makes since to her! lol :D

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:25:44 No.93901799 Report

Quoted By:

Yes

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:27:25 No.93901840 Report

Quoted By: >>93901862 >>93901928 >>93940872

>>93901766

Moved to NYC, got a job as a graphic designer. Realized that shit like titles and income don't necessarily make you a better artist.
Realized the whole system is bullshit and started drawing for fun.

I've got a modest following on Webtoons and Tapastic for my comic. Getting tired of gag-a-day, want to draw an adventure comic sometime between now and when I die, so I may as well get started now since I dont necessarily when that latter part is gonna happen.

I've stayed away from /hyw/ because it can get pretty toxic, but I heard through the grapevine that its better now, so I figured I'd pop in.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:28:34 No.93901862 Report

Quoted By: >>93901876

>>93901840
>I've stayed away from /hyw/ because it can get pretty toxic
you just replied to Bones, dude

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:29:22 No.93901876 Report

Quoted By: >>93901902

>>93901862
Oh yeah, that was a thing, wasn't it?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:30:18 No.93901902 Report

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>>93901876
oh well. It's good to have you back, 'gardless.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:31:16 No.93901928 Report

Quoted By: >>93901952

>>93901840
>I've stayed away from /hyw/ because it can get pretty toxic, but I heard through the grapevine that its better now, so I figured I'd pop in.

We are trying our best. I only arrived when the threads were making some sort of revival so I can't speak much on it. We get some shitposters at some hours but other than that we try to be as helpful as we can.

Also welcome back!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:32:19 No.93901951 Report

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>>93899566
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ArchnemesisDad

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:32:19 No.93901952 Report

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>>93901928
Thanks!
Hopefully getting some good feedback on here can help me get this thing going.

Will Draw for Food Guy

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Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:34:45 No.93902008 Report

Quoted By: >>93902091 >>93902183

Oh god I've started inking it and its already ruined.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:38:58 No.93902091 Report

Quoted By:

>>93902008
Quickly! Ctrl+z and repeat!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:43:27 No.93902183 Report

Quoted By: >>93902475

>>93902008
tell you the truth, the proportions were a little woggly to begin with. Her arms and upper torso seem to be on one scale, while her head, hands, and everything below the waist are on a much larger one. Of course, it's a cartoon, so it's hard to say that's right

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:54:51 No.93902475 Report

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>>93902183
I'm more concerned with getting inking down and having the inks come out good in Clip Studio.

I'll probably watch a few videos first. I'm still new to the program.

ABDex

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ABDex Sun 16 Jul 2017 02:57:47 No.93902545 Report

Quoted By: >>93902599 >>93902622 >>93902801 >>93907164 >>93911086

First time posting here!
I wanted to get some advice about shading, and if its needed. Here are three different versions

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:00:19 No.93902599 Report

Quoted By: >>93909421

>>93902545
I suggest more shading detail the bigger the characters.. so the guy in the foreground can have his three-tone shading like at the bottom, but the guy he pushes aside looks weird with more than two-tone, and the background people should be unshaded

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:01:17 No.93902622 Report

Quoted By: >>93909421

>>93902545
I must admit I'm not good at giving specific advices over shading since it's one of my weakest points. I only know you must take into account from where the light(s) come from so the shadows don't look all over the place.

As for your examples, last one is really good, giving the scene a lot of depth with those shadow levels.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:06:26 No.93902759 Report

Quoted By: >>93902828 >>93902837

>Drew like 500 drawings a day when I was shit and thought I was good
>Been drawing in the same damn sketchbook for the past two years now that I'm good but aware that I could always be better
Ignorance truly was bliss. How to break the curse?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:08:05 No.93902801 Report

Quoted By: >>93909421

>>93902545
I'd go with the middle one.

I don't understand why you shaded it the way you did so I did a different take in the last panel. Also did some atmospheric perspective.

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:09:26 No.93902828 Report

Quoted By: >>93902957

>>93902759

Stop drawing for approval and start drawing to have fun.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:09:47 No.93902837 Report

Quoted By: >>93902957

>>93902759
you've gotta look at the things you're doing better and check on whether you're still doing it well or what

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:15:21 No.93902957 Report

Quoted By: >>93903214

>>93902828
You know, I really feel like this might be one of my biggest hurdles. I'm a slut for those Instagram likes.

>>93902837
Yeah, maybe I'm setting unrealistic expectations for myself. I'm not the best artist EVER, but I'm good at what I like to draw, and maybe I should just focus on improving naturally instead of wondering why the hell I fucked up on a tiny line in the corner of a drawing and letting that depress me out of drawing for a good few months. It's not that I don't love drawing. I love drawing. I can't stop doodling on my fucking work notes for example. I just can't produce quite like I used to anymore.

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:17:25 No.93903002 Report

Quoted By: >>93903874

>>93894376
>>93901766

hm, if i wasn't recording i could finish this page in an hour, hid the thumbnail chicken scratch layer because its literally stick figure chicken scratch that only makes since to me lol

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:25:43 No.93903214 Report

Quoted By: >>93903281 >>93903731

>>93902957

You gotta think, before the Digital Era, we didnt have social media, or big sites to post our work on for people to see and judge. You kinda just had to trust yourself.
The thing is, when you were a kid, you didn't draw for the approval of your peers, you drew because it was something you enjoyed doing, it was cool to see something you made yourself on the paper, even if it didnt look EXACTLY like the thing you wanted it to be.

You started to want to improve, so you sought out advice on social media and imageboards. As you grew, the opinions of your peers and contemporaries mattered much more to you, after all, it determines your social standing, and if you were a crap artist, you dont have much social standing at all.
So now we're driven to improve, but hesitant to show our work because it might not be "good enough," it might look bad, it might have an error.

Here's the thing, anon, it's gonna suck, its always gonna suck, and there will always be a critic somewhere out there in the world ready to tell you why it sucks.

Just keep drawing, dont worry how good or bad it is. Just have fun. And if you keep drawing, eventually it will start to suck less and less.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:26:52 No.93903247 Report

Quoted By: >>93903388 >>93903769 >>93903846

So how do you guys design your characters and how many notes do you have for them? Do you design based on the world or do you just kinda revise and revise until you find something that works? I'm not talking about clothing or body type either, I wanna know how you shape their personalities and very minor quirks.

I personally have about 20 pages of notes per character or more. They have everything from clothing fabric preference, to a timeline of injuries they've sustained, and detailed blueprints for any technology they might use. One of them even has a chart for skin graphed areas and their exact square cm measurements.
Pic related are some designs I'm playing around with. Any thoughts would be appreciated.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:28:20 No.93903281 Report

Quoted By: >>93903388

>>93903214
Thank you. I don't know how often I give this advice out to other people and no one has ever actually said it to me. I think I really needed this.

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:32:12 No.93903388 Report

Quoted By: >>93903860 >>93905440

>>93903247
Its always awesome to have meticulous notes so that you yourself know the character inside and out. But how is this important to the reader or plot?

There can be such a thing as going too overboard with details that are unnecessary. Unless its important to the story, theres no reason for the reader to know the character's meticulous preferences such as preferred fabric or square cm of a specific scar.

>>93903281
No prob my man! Drawing is an enjoyable process, have fun with it!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:41:31 No.93903731 Report

Quoted By: >>93903793

>>93903214
You are kind of ignoring the decade between the worldwide web and social media. there was a middle ground, remember? posting things online for yourself and real people, with no social media to coalesce people into crowds.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:42:34 No.93903769 Report

Quoted By:

>>93903247
I have occasionally thought about the anatomical distinctivenesses in my alien races, but almost never specific characters

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:43:07 No.93903793 Report

Quoted By:

>>93903731
I guess what I'm talking about is the Internet Age in general. Think anything pre-1990

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:44:37 No.93903846 Report

Quoted By:

>>93903247
I usually begin planning characters along with the setting of their story, and if one of those changes, the other does too.

I keep information about them by pretending I'm writing a wikia article. There I can keep every important aspect on a summarized way that lets me change them more easily later on and also check them quickly. Also keeps the "trivia" bits that nobody else but me thinks are important at hand.

As for character sheets I try to have on full size drawing and the rest play more on poses and expressions, mostly. Also if there is something important to highlight I may draw a close-up to that. I don't go with stuff like muscles tho, still a bit out of my general league.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:45:14 No.93903860 Report

Quoted By: >>93903898

>>93903388
Likely no reader will ever notice 90% of the things I have written down, but they make it easier to draw for me. Certain fabrics fold differently from other fabrics, characters might move differently it they have an injury on a certain limb or joint, etc etc. Plus it helps me add detail accurately when I need to actually draw panels showing scars or high detail character shots.

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:45:51 No.93903874 Report

Quoted By: >>93905560

>>93903002

bumpity bump!

as you can see here i redisigned Beats cousin Carla, this girl is on the highschools softball team and the first design i made didn't reflect that, she needed to be more tomboyish so i lost the skirt and removed the squid beany off her head and gave her a baseball cap instead, she keeps her sleeves rolled up and i think i did a good job of keeping her still very goth like and very softball(girls baseball) like!

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Sun 16 Jul 2017 03:46:28 No.93903898 Report

Quoted By:

>>93903860
If it makes it easier to draw, then yeah, go for it.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

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the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:30:52 No.93905378 Report

Quoted By: >>93905448 >>93905708

Sora's chubby.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:32:58 No.93905440 Report

Quoted By:

>>93903388
I just wanted to let you know that I just started my first drawing in weeks. I think I'll focus on art first, social media second. I'll make stuff and then maybe I'll post it, but I won't be making stuff just to post it anymore. Thanks again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:33:07 No.93905448 Report

Quoted By: >>93905971

>>93905378
Daw. Too many toilets. Man it just occurred to me she must be terrible at Rampage because when she sees the toilet she'd be like yeah eat that, instinctively.
also there seems to be something horribly, horribly wrong with her arms

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:37:17 No.93905560 Report

Quoted By: >>93906550 >>93915308

>>93903874

page arts basically done... just needs a little more background objects and a few things on carla is missing like her cufflings, then word balloons and then its done! ^^

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:42:05 No.93905708 Report

Quoted By:

>>93905378

what the fuck am i looking at? is she half aborted fetus? wtf man?

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:50:25 No.93905971 Report

Quoted By: >>93906125

>>93905448
That's just my default position for hands that I should probably change. Also what's Rampage? is that a game?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 04:54:59 No.93906125 Report

Quoted By:

>>93905971
sorry sometimes I forget you're younger than the n64. that fucks with my head, yknow?
it's an old, OLD game that's been revived every so often on newer hardware. you play kaiju destroying cities, punching holds in buildings, which will usually have something behind them, and then trying to eat that shit.. gaining or losing health depending what it is.. and fending off a bunch of tiny army guys, swatting at helicopters and whatnot. Just good basic fun.

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:08:16 No.93906550 Report

Quoted By: >>93907729

>>93905560

super close to being done, check out the little shopping buggy i drew in the bottom left panel! lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:26:31 No.93907164 Report

Quoted By: >>93909421

>>93902545
Middle one. It looks nicer than the top and cleaner than the bottom. The bottom is a bit noisy/distracting.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:29:41 No.93907253 Report

Quoted By: >>93907864 >>93932770

Finished the first sketch for the comic of the challenge. It's kinda late though so I will continue it tomorrow, good thing we are still on time.

Have a panel with the main character for now.

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:45:50 No.93907729 Report

Quoted By: >>93908555 >>93914550 >>93917310 >>93957471

>>93906550

and its done, I hope yall like it! Yall know where to read it at, peace!

Also FUN FACT: Beats real name is Beatrice!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:46:55 No.93907766 Report

Quoted By: >>93907894 >>93907987

completed first pass of lineart

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:50:08 No.93907864 Report

Quoted By: >>93907987

>>93907253
>not sure if private dick cthulhu or amish cthulhu
>intrigued either way

oh wait, filename. haha, awesome.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:51:10 No.93907894 Report

Quoted By: >>93908142

>>93907766
She's so great. Just.. so great. I love that she thinks people enjoy being disemboweled. I'm beginning to think she might be a wee bit brainwashed

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:53:51 No.93907987 Report

Quoted By: >>93908142

>>93907864
Thanks anon!

>amish cthulhu
kek that would be interesting too.

>>93907766
Seriously the cultist is too cute for her own sake

Dupe

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Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:57:43 No.93908093 Report

Quoted By: >>93908492

>>93897529
Now the bio page image for trype is done. Only one left.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 05:58:59 No.93908142 Report

Quoted By:

>>93907894
>>93907987
>she's even cuter when I add more lines
Also thanks! glad you guys like her!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:09:43 No.93908492 Report

Quoted By: >>93909012

>>93908093
shit i'm loving this guy, and it's neat seeing someone who really has some threedimensional shape. the shading really helps

bones

bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:12:00 No.93908555 Report

Quoted By:

>>93907729

fixed the spelling and the previous page to, updated on all websties except drunk duck where I havent uploaded any chapter 2 pages yet.

Dupe

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Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:27:14 No.93909012 Report

Quoted By: >>93909138 >>93910802 >>93922288 >>93922426 >>93939183

>>93908492
Thanks! I basically designed trype to help me plan out consistent anatomy for completely inhuman monsters. I'm very proud of her design, though it's the most difficult to draw. You said it's nice to see a character with 3 dimensional shape, do my other characters look too 2D?

Also here's them all together so far. Tobie Jr is the only one left.

bones

bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:32:03 No.93909138 Report

Quoted By: >>93909226 >>93909735

>>93909012

robot on the left is meh, the other 3 characters are pretty cool, the girl is the best so far. Never cared about the guy with 3d glasses to be honest.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:35:03 No.93909226 Report

Quoted By: >>93909735

>>93909138
>robot on the left is meh

The robot on the left is really cute! CUTE!

ABDex

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ABDex Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:41:51 No.93909421 Report

Quoted By:

>>93902599
>>93902622
>>93902801
>>93907164
Thanks for the advice, Im mainly trying to find a way to minimize the color process while not making it look like shit. I'll save the 3-tone shading for the more serious moments

Dupe

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Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:54:07 No.93909735 Report

Quoted By: >>93909854 >>93910802 >>93923334

>>93909138
>>93909226
Thanks! I wanted Tobie (the robot) to look comically primitive and janky. In the story they purchase Tobie from a vending machine under the description that it's a "Hospital droid" to aid in some injuries. Then they find out that the robot was literally just built to dispense suckers in the children's ward. Tobie still tries their best though. If you have any ideas on how to improve the design I'd like to hear them.

>Never cared about the guy with 3d glasses to be honest

Dupe isn't going to be in comic, he's just an in-universe avatar for myself I'm using for some game reviews to get my art some attention before starting the comic. I didn't really make him as an independent character, I just made him as a general mascot and a caricature to speak through. So it's understandable that he'd seem bland compared to others in-universe, I didn't want him to seem special at all in the context of the setting.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 06:58:38 No.93909854 Report

Quoted By: >>93910230

>>93909735
>Thanks! I wanted Tobie (the robot) to look comically primitive and janky. In the story they purchase Tobie from a vending machine under the description that it's a "Hospital droid" to aid in some injuries. Then they find out that the robot was literally just built to dispense suckers in the children's ward. Tobie still tries their best though.

Oh no he is even more adorable now.

I guess he looks a bit less interesting than the other because he isn't colored yet, I personally think the design (no coloring considered) is alright, you can see the robot is kind of ill-prepared yet he still tries.

Dupe

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Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 07:14:39 No.93910230 Report

Quoted By: >>93910572 >>93910802

>>93909854
Yeah, that's kind of a difficult thing to fix.

The three other characters have in depth pasts and motivations and every item on them has a reason behind it. They'll have character arcs and development. Tobie has a place in the story but is still just a simple appliance given life. Their character isn't deep. The extent of their depth is that they like to watch aquariums because they wish they were a fish. Tobie is mostly just there for jokes. They also stay on the ship usually when the rest of them go out on missions so they have far less screentime. I made a simple design to fit a simple role and can't really think of much more to add.

Also they're based on a little tomy robot in my collection that cleans my desk.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 07:30:35 No.93910572 Report

Quoted By:

>>93910230
I must resist the urge to call cute every little robot I see.

I don't think there is much to fix on Tobie, given your reasonings. Even if their role is the one of the buttmonkey. Not every character has to be extremely complex, in fact a simple character like Tobie in the middle of everything can even give room to take a breath. Even the more simple design may actually help them "outstand" on the group seeing the other have more overdesign (in a good sense) on them.

More opinions are welcome for the cute lil fellow, but I think they are good as they are. and now my recaptcha doesn't believe that I'm not a robot. Sasuga

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 07:43:30 No.93910802 Report

Quoted By: >>93910915 >>93914758

>>93909012
>>93909735
>>93910230

Dupe ive been watching you from the beginning and I dont think you have ever done any panel work, ive seen you do animated gifs and a ton of character art but you know actual panel work is a whole 'nother beast right?

So what are you going to do? Hire a panel guy to bring your comic to life? I could be that guy man, im available and I can mimic your style no problem, ive proven this in the past with some fan art of the green girl. I know her name, I just like calling her green girl. That was just for fun, I can do a million times better if im getting paid to do it.

Look man, when you go to hire anyone else besides me its going to be super expensive, here is my page rate just for you man because I want to help bring your world to life for you.

full color, backgrounds everything $10.00 a page

black and white $1.00 a page, and you color it yourself or hire someone to color it.

note me on deviantart man. lol

I promise you the cheapest rate your going to find with my skills or higher is 30 dollars a page minimum you might be able to negotiate 25 maybe even 20 dollars a page, im offering you 10 dollars a page full color and backgrounds and everything or just 1 dollar if you want to color it your self.

i offer speed and quality. ignore any haters that will tell you other wise.

bones

bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 07:49:58 No.93910915 Report

Quoted By: >>93914758

>>93910802

i forgot to mention i will do the first page for free. No script? No problem! I work well off ideas and stick figure chicken scratch story boards.

I remember now you saying that you were trying to mimic homestuck and i guess you dont need a panel guy if its going to be more of an online flash game than an actual webcomic... is that the case? You trying to do a prequel or homestuck kind of thing?

Sexyverse Comics !dc3GeUDg8U

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Sexyverse Comics !dc3GeUDg8U Sun 16 Jul 2017 07:54:27 No.93910990 Report

Quoted By: >>93925205

>>93884877

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Sun 16 Jul 2017 08:02:26 No.93911086 Report

Quoted By: >>93915802 >>93919219 >>93919251

>>93902545
either go with simple shading or no shading at all.
Your linework is super detailed and a ligne claire style like in blake and mortimer could do wonders to your work. Pic related.

Corto maltese is also a nice reference for your eventual work. It was so influential in europe that my dad became a mercenary in africa or something because he wanted to be like the dude in the comic.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 11:49:07 No.93913232 Report

Quoted By: >>93915247

now that the dust has settled who killed the thread?

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 13:44:21 No.93914550 Report

Quoted By: >>93917310

>>93907729

Hey my video of me making this has 120 minutes left to render in windows movie maker, so can yall keep the thread alive long enough for me to post it?

Dupe

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Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 14:00:39 No.93914758 Report

Quoted By: >>93914829 >>93917982 >>93923594 >>93948816

>>93910802
>>93910915
Lol, it's a "Quest" comic meaning there aren't pages. Even then I'm the kind of person to just make an effort to learn something I need rather than take the short cut and pay someone to help me. I don't think I've ever commissioned someone for digital art and I doubt I ever will. Only thing I'd pay for is music and voice acting but it'd have to be close to pro grade.

Everything in the comic is shown one panel at a time via a monitor on an "omniscope camera satellite" and all the text is written below the panels in a "xenovox alien translation device". The readers will be able to talk to the characters through their "Hexxtor navigation client" that vegabond noobs use to help them make decisions when they're still new to the galaxy. Unfortunately our team's copy is pretty corrupt which accounts for what I'm sure some of the submissions will be like.

This is why I'm making an effort to do a separate attention grabbing project before launching the comic. It can't run without an audience.

For example this image right here could be an entire "page".

Dupe

Dupe Sun 16 Jul 2017 14:06:17 No.93914829 Report

Quoted By:

>>93914758
Just noticed you actually mentioned quest comics near the end. I stopped reading when I saw talks about pricing.

The structure I'll be using specifically will be closest to the comic "awful hospital" where character expressions are shown next to their lines.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 14:37:52 No.93915247 Report

Quoted By:

>>93913232
That's a mystery for another time

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 14:42:14 No.93915308 Report

Quoted By:

>>93905560
These are high school characters? They all look like concept art for Flo from progressive.

ABDex

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ABDex Sun 16 Jul 2017 15:16:15 No.93915802 Report

Quoted By:

>>93911086
I do like that bottom style a lot, I have been wanting to go in a similar direction but I will be drawing a lot of tech/robots and I'll need to see how lighting comes into play. Thanks for this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 15:25:37 No.93915962 Report

Quoted By: >>93916120 >>93917288 >>93918060 >>93918287 >>93932553 >>93941218

Sorry if this kind of question gets posted often.
Would you say it's better to have a very clear outline of your whole story, how it ends, what the major events will be, what the main characters are like in detail, before you even start writing and drawing a comic?
Or that it's okay to just draw and write and build it as it goes, as long as you just have basic ideas? Also how important is it to make concept art before you start?
I'm worried that I will start and that after I make some progress I will get a lot of random ideas on events, what the characters look like, etc. that will make me want to start over again.

ABDex

ABDex Sun 16 Jul 2017 15:33:43 No.93916120 Report

Quoted By: >>93918088

>>93915962
I wouldnt say theres a better, just whatever works for you. For me, I like to have at least a few issues planned ahead before I do panel layout. And as ideas come to my head I will do concept art. So I'd say Im in the build as it goes camp, but I do have an end game that I always work towards.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 16:29:10 No.93917288 Report

Quoted By: >>93918088

>>93915962
There isn't a real guideline for these things because are the kind that needs to be tailored to each author. Some work better if they have everything planned from the very beginning, others are just fine going with the flow.

If anything, having everything already well planned out and having concept art works better for consistency. There are many cases of people drawing their own characters for months then look at the first appearances and discover they kept morphing them into a new entity.

On the other hand, you can have a sort of "mixed" method. Have a sort of clear outline and all, but keep it open to new additions on the march. That way you can add new ideas and events without having to retcon most of your already established story.

bones

bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 16:30:07 No.93917310 Report

Quoted By: >>93957471

>>93914550
>>93907729

and heres a video of me making this page from scratch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZDV3Jt-fkoM&feature=youtu.be

bones

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bones Sun 16 Jul 2017 17:06:21 No.93917982 Report

Quoted By: >>93918201 >>93927014 >>93927139

>>93914758
>Only thing I'd pay for is music and voice acting but it'd have to be close to pro grade.

well i just recorded these this mourning, its not as good as my recordings on my old hard drive before it broke, but its decent enough to share with the public, all raw unedited stuff: https://soundcloud.com/user-294632536

so if you ever need a wanna be black metal voice actor to voice act as a demon or something im your guy man, lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 17:09:27 No.93918060 Report

Quoted By: >>93918088

>>93915962
If your comic is more plot heavy than gag-heavy, I think it's better to have things planned out before drafting or storyboarding. As you progress to the drafting stage, things will change, dialogues, composition. Since my first script, I realized I had to add two more chapters to, though at first it seemed like I didn't need them.
It never hurts to make concept art, make them beforehand, make them during, any time, at the very least it'll cause you to think about designs and find out what works.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 17:10:52 No.93918088 Report

Quoted By:

>>93918060
>>93917288
>>93916120
Good advice, thanks!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 17:17:06 No.93918201 Report

Quoted By: >>93927014

>>93917982
>using soundcloud when it only has 2 months more of life tops

EtMotL

EtMotL Sun 16 Jul 2017 17:21:18 No.93918287 Report

Quoted By: >>93923619

>>93915962
At least have some kind of destination or end point in mind, as it's a goal for you to work towards. If not the end of the saga, then at least the first chapter (and each chapter or major section after that).

Otherwise the hobbits will be wandering aimlessly through the Shire, instead of making their way to Bree (never mind getting them all the way to Mordor).

Lucy !wwaeC23A.o

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Lucy !wwaeC23A.o Sun 16 Jul 2017 17:44:39 No.93918721 Report

Quoted By: >>93921624

>When you're about to sleep but realize you didn't make a single thing to progress your comic
>GET UP!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 18:08:42 No.93919219 Report

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>>93911086
>It was so influential in europe that my dad became a mercenary in africa or something because he wanted to be like the dude in the comic.

Damn that is indeed a lot of influence

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 18:09:45 No.93919251 Report

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>>93911086

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 18:23:24 No.93919506 Report

Quoted By: >>93919572

>>93877481
are those genres mandatory or optional?
i did some involving space but i took a different take on castaway

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 18:26:07 No.93919572 Report

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>>93919506
Those genres are the options to set your comic on, although the idea overall is to see the kind of approach you can take with either of them and the "castaway in space" theme, so feel free to twist it as you see fit.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 18:59:18 No.93920228 Report

Quoted By: >>93920367 >>93923664

I might after a long pause try my hand at comic making, but I'm a tad insecure about my artistic skills. Based on my quick sketch. Is there yet hope for me?

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 19:06:03 No.93920367 Report

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>>93920228
There is always room for improvement as long you are constant, practice a lot and have an open mind in regards of listening to advice.

As for your actual skill, you are ok enough.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:08:41 No.93921624 Report

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>>93918721
But there is always tomorrow

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:19:31 No.93921866 Report

Quoted By: >>93923664 >>93925431 >>93925970 >>93926235 >>93932726

First digital concept for Purple Dragon, can anyone give me some advice on making apealing faces? I'm kinda stuck

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:29:29 No.93922084 Report

Quoted By: >>93922255 >>93922259

I've been wanting to put together a short comic for the longest time, and I have a general story, but it's shit. It's shit and it doesn't have any substance. Should I just fucking do it anyway?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:36:21 No.93922255 Report

Quoted By: >>93922397 >>93923684

>>93922084
I'll leave a synopsis here for critique.

>girl almost gets hit by a truck while going to a coffee shop
>girl meets Death in the coffee shop, Death says she missed the girl and she should come with her
>the girl decides to trick Death into not taking her life by showing her things that she never gets to see on Earth, like chasing birds and eating ice cream
>later, the girl becomes depressed by being in such close proximity to Death for a long time
>tries to an hero
>doesn't die after several attempts
>turns on the news and realizes that Death stopped doing her job for the entire time she's been distracting her
>Death hasn't been taking ANYONE or ANYTHING for the entire time the girl's been distracting her
>Death tells her that death is unfortunate, but necessary
>the girl reluctantly accepts that she needs to die
>Death flashes them back to the coffee shop
>ends with the girl getting hit by the car and Death holding her hand and bringing her to the afterlife

I feel like this has no substance at all. It needs SOMETHING added to it, but I don't know what.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:36:30 No.93922259 Report

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>>93922084
You don't get better at making comics by not making comics.

Make the comic.

Then make the next one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:37:44 No.93922288 Report

Quoted By: >>93934355

>>93909012
I wouldn't say TOO 2d, but as we've all been saying, very 2000s nickelodeon. actually, as they go, they're getting a lot more 3d compared to your earlier drawings

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:42:36 No.93922397 Report

Quoted By: >>93922545 >>93922606 >>93922839 >>93923008 >>93923138 >>93923345 >>93923430 >>93923625 >>93923712 >>93924689 >>93932409 >>93944760

>>93922255
Why are literally all comic main characters female? (not saying that's a bad thing) Is it because people in general usually practice drawing women rather than men?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:43:28 No.93922425 Report

Quoted By: >>93923274

>>93900126
>>93900180
Hello! I had work yesterday, so I hope that excuses this late reply.
I think these pages are good, but pg9 has a lot of panels. It's not bad, it's still readable and the flow of word bubbles still works well. However, switching back to a 3/4ths shot of one character to the other I think is what is called the "180" rule. It get's a little boring to have to read through because there isn't a lot going on. To help break up the scene, I suggest a backup shot so that you can see both of them again, and that way your bubbles are also a little easier to read.
Pg10 is good too! But is still kind of lacking in the composition area (I struggle with that too in dialogue scenes). I think the last panel is really nice though.

I really did not expect them to fuck.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:43:38 No.93922426 Report

Quoted By: >>93934355

>>93909012
I really really like this art style

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:49:04 No.93922545 Report

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>>93922397
Because some people prefer writing women over men? The majority of comic leads are still male anyways, you have to have a pretty small reference pool to think "literally all" comic mcs are female.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 20:52:34 No.93922606 Report

Quoted By: >>93925164

>>93922397
waifu material

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:03:43 No.93922839 Report

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>>93922397
>Why are literally all comic main characters female?

Don't let marketing fool you, there are as many if not more male leads in comics

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:12:31 No.93923008 Report

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>>93922397
I can't draw men.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:18:34 No.93923138 Report

Quoted By: >>93923316

>>93922397

I got a male MC.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:24:18 No.93923274 Report

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>>93922425
You're a god amongst men. Forged in the fires lit by poor bystanders like the lot of us. Thanks for the help, man. Really, thanks.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:25:58 No.93923316 Report

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>>93923138
niceeeeee

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:26:51 No.93923334 Report

Quoted By: >>93934355

>>93909735
The concept of the unqualified medical droid sounds familiar to me.. did Red Dwarf do something like that? Sounds like their kind of humor. I love it. I also like the idea that someone would build a robot to do the job of a glass jar.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:27:30 No.93923345 Report

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>>93922397
my comic's main cast made of 2 males and one short, thick girl. Your argument may be invalid?

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:31:21 No.93923430 Report

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>>93922397
You write what you know and we are all little girls

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:40:46 No.93923594 Report

Quoted By:

>>93914758
I keep forgetting I need to send you an audition.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:42:10 No.93923619 Report

Quoted By:

>>93918287
But it turns out wandering through the shire was the real quest all along, and the treasure is the friends we made!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:42:21 No.93923625 Report

Quoted By:

>>93922397
all my men look like girls, so I gave up and made everyone a girl

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:44:10 No.93923664 Report

Quoted By: >>93924816 >>93924891 >>93925431 >>93925449

>>93920228
Many aspects of your art indicate that you are getting there.
>>93921866
she's cute. you have the appealing features thing down, what you don't have yet is knowledge on how to construct a face (except from the front). Quickly look at a skull, see how the bulgy-outy part of the back of the head stops at the ears? then in front of the ears, the jawline starts. And see how the nose and mouth portion sticks out a bit? not as much as most animals, but somewhat? try integrating those two things and you'll be right on your way

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:45:12 No.93923684 Report

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>>93922255
sounds very Twilight Zone and would be a fun read

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 21:46:22 No.93923712 Report

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>>93922397
my cast is nearly all female because i love cute girls so much that everyone in the old cast got a cute little sister or daughter. At the last minute, one of them adopted a son, so there's one guy, plus one guy they met.
I plan to rectify this in the future.

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:28:33 No.93924689 Report

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>>93922397
My main character was a dude for the first 600 pages.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:35:18 No.93924816 Report

Quoted By: >>93924913 >>93924983

>>93923664
Alright thanks, gotta work on those heads!
(And it's low key a guy by the way)

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:38:52 No.93924891 Report

Quoted By: >>93924983

>>93923664
ah, kind of a sokka with guns. well if it's a guy, you'll want to pull back the upper corners of the hairline, elongate the face and jaw, and eliminate the hourglass figure you've accidentally made here
Unless that stuff was intentional. But even if it was, that thigh holster has gotta be uncomfortable for a penis-haver, pulled that high up

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:39:38 No.93924913 Report

Quoted By:

>>93924816
Stop that

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:42:39 No.93924983 Report

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>>93924891
meant for >>93924816

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:51:18 No.93925164 Report

Quoted By:

>>93922606
This and only this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:53:28 No.93925205 Report

Quoted By: >>93925308

>>93910990
Porn doesn't count. Porn you pay people to make for you then resell especially doesn't count.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 22:58:59 No.93925308 Report

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>>93925205
>Resell
never really thought of that...

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:05:58 No.93925431 Report

Quoted By: >>93925625 >>93925970

>>93921866
I don't think >>93923664 is a good advice
the problem is that head and cartoony face don't match at all the more "realistic" proportions and style of the rest of the body and it looks reeeeally awkawrd, so I'd rather simplify the lineart and make the proportions to make it look more cartoon like or you can make his face more realistic

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:07:01 No.93925449 Report

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>>93923664
shut up coldfusion

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:15:24 No.93925625 Report

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>>93925431
It was only a first step, the next thing I was going to advise was working on the overdetailedness of the body, how there's no point doing all those cloth folds before you know how. I just didn't wanna lay a bunch on 'em at once

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:18:41 No.93925695 Report

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I have no memory of drawing this but the file was saved at 4:20 AM and there's about 200 extra words explaining the setting in an unsaved text file and they're all incoherent.
I kinda like what I can figure out though.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:32:10 No.93925970 Report

Quoted By: >>93926117 >>93926235

>>93921866
I find myself agreeing with >>93925431! The face and the body simply do not match. The head shape is a bit off too. The wrinkles and folds are drawn in such a way that make his arms appear too skinny.
How do you construct your people? Bodies/faces.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:39:16 No.93926117 Report

Quoted By:

>>93925970
Listen to this guy he knows his stuff

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 16 Jul 2017 23:44:26 No.93926235 Report

Quoted By:

>>93925970
>>93921866

Yeah lets get some more sketches from you ol partner, so we can feel you out a bit more.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:10:58 No.93926830 Report

Quoted By: >>93926939 >>93927123 >>93937272

Another thread question: do you think webcomics will be around for a long time? How do you see webcomics progressing in the future? to make it simpler, how does the future of webcomics look to you, personally?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:15:39 No.93926939 Report

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>>93926830
web comics are trash, dying soon

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:16:09 No.93926951 Report

Quoted By: >>93928045

I have always been a quickster when it comes to drawing since I can't concentrate in one project for a long period of time. Which is becoming a challenge when drawing comics. Also I'm changing and instead of using grayscale I'm using brighter colors which lets me lineart more easily after skecthing

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:19:19 No.93927014 Report

Quoted By: >>93927123 >>93927165

>>93917982

an attempt was made: https://soundcloud.com/user-294632536/sets/sunday-night-recordings-7-16-2017

r8 my megadeth vocal attempt! how close did i get to the real thing? i think sweating bullets was the closest i got.

>>93918201
what do you mean?

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:24:03 No.93927123 Report

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>>93926830
Seems media is opening more to the idea of webcomics as both a source for talent and a way to show some extra material (kinda like what Overwatch and Team Fortress 2 does) and just like any other media, it's kinda flooded with average and shitty works, even more so because technically publishing a webcomic is kinda free and doesn't need to get to a publisher nor editor. Still iirc a webcomic is getting a movie of sorts, everybody knows what happened to ONE. It's a slow path but webcomics have still room to grow.

>>93927014
I think anon means this
http://www.metalinjection.net/its-just-business/soundcloud-only-has-enough-funding-for-50-more-days-time-to-back-up-your-data

bones

bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:24:55 No.93927139 Report

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>>93917982

*damn it got buried under new stuff, original intended link: https://soundcloud.com/user-294632536/sets/sunday-mourning-recordings

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:26:05 No.93927165 Report

Quoted By: >>93927631 >>93927752

>>93927014
>repressing your breath
>spanish accent
>more room sound than actual voice

I wanted to believe that you could not suck at something but heck are you doomed.

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:45:48 No.93927631 Report

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>>93927165

theres no spanish accent anywhere in this: https://soundcloud.com/user-294632536/sets/sunday-night-recordings-7-16-2017

i only deleted my post because i decided this is way off topic from webcomics but it was just this link to these new recordings i just uploaded if anyone was wondering

repressing my breath, what does that even mean man?

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 00:52:08 No.93927752 Report

Quoted By: >>93928120

>>93927165

>more room sound than actual voice

yeah well it was triple digit heat today in texas, its hot as fuck in texas in the summer so i had three fans running and my big ass ac unit in the window

i aint turning none of that shit off just to record my wannabe metal/black metal voice for fun, way to fucking hot, im a winter guy, i hate the heat, i wish i was born in norway during the prime of black metal, i belong in the lands of snow, and vikings, and dark black devil music, lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 01:05:06 No.93928045 Report

Quoted By: >>93929540

>>93926951
Likin the look of this a lot. Please tell me she wears those cool little boxing boots

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Mon 17 Jul 2017 01:09:17 No.93928120 Report

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>>93927752
>https://soundcloud.com/user-294632536
to be honest mate, it's not very good. You whisper the whole thing and it's nasal as fuck.

I'm a bit of a growler as well and took a lesson or two with some bands.

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Mon 17 Jul 2017 01:10:57 No.93928151 Report

Quoted By: >>93928644 >>93929035

by the way, i'm starting to ink my stuff. trying different stuff compared to my previous endeavors. I'm happy with that one. Waddyatink?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 01:35:46 No.93928644 Report

Quoted By: >>93928675

>>93928151
pretty good, but the way the letters touch the panel borders makes them seem like they aren't meant to be read

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Mon 17 Jul 2017 01:37:05 No.93928675 Report

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>>93928644
desu the lettering is going to be redone

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 01:53:49 No.93929035 Report

Quoted By:

>>93928151
as long as you fix the lettering I am on board. The only thing im not crazy about is the gradient on panel three

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 02:16:10 No.93929540 Report

Quoted By:

>>93928045
Hadn't thought of that but might as well draw them

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 02:36:47 No.93930018 Report

Quoted By:

>>93878546
i can do that, tell me more

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 02:46:34 No.93930214 Report

Quoted By: >>93930460 >>93930694 >>93935662 >>93936826 >>93936911

what are your mc's favorite bands? is he/she a pleb or patrician?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 02:57:37 No.93930460 Report

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>>93930214
I have plans for the next MC to be a music fan, and some names of bands he would be into
>Pallas in Chains
>HP/MP
>Permadeth
stuff like that.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:10:32 No.93930694 Report

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>>93930214
That's a good question actually, kinda funny that I didn't think much of it for my main MC.

Life would take a liking on Globus I think. Death likes Voltaire and pretty much anything jazzy.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:22:11 No.93930919 Report

Quoted By: >>93931044 >>93931096 >>93931352

Here's the first chapter of my webcomic
It's meta story about these webcomic threads

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:28:29 No.93931044 Report

Quoted By: >>93931096 >>93931380 >>93932503 >>93934344

>>93930919
A webcomic about the daily lives of
>Autistic child dewd
>His creepy uncle coldfusion
>the Mexican gardener bones

I would read the fuck outta this

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:31:14 No.93931096 Report

Quoted By:

>>93930919
>>93931044
kek can we just make the weekly challenges about this instead. an /hyw/ anthology of sorts

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:39:44 No.93931295 Report

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nothing done.

I just posting comic cover.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:42:15 No.93931352 Report

Quoted By:

>>93930919
Here's chapter two which is also the end of the webcomic.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 03:43:45 No.93931380 Report

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>>93931044
pretty spot on

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:20:42 No.93932093 Report

Quoted By: >>93932573

On the last stretch, but I honestly cannot focus. Just need to do the words, effects, and a few touch ups, but I'm just getting side-tracked by other things. I should have been done by today.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:38:03 No.93932409 Report

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>>93922397
One of my main characters is actually a boy, but his body was altered to look feminine.

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:42:51 No.93932503 Report

Quoted By: >>93932596 >>93934344

>>93931044

>im the mexican gardner

mfw i literally cut peoples grass for money on the side, not even joking!

also why are you assuming im the only mexican out of that group of webcomic creators you dont like? how do you know what race codfusion is? or dewd? Also how did you people even find out i was a mexican? i changed my last name from garza to G. on deviantart to throw you people off the trail of what my nationality is, what are you people? fucking internet detectives with no lives? fucking weaponised autism man, baka, lol :DDDDDD

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:45:29 No.93932553 Report

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>>93915962
I think what works best, at least for me, is to come up with a clear and defined ending. You should come up with the ending first and then you create the journey to that ending. However, this is only one way to make a story, there's no real "right" way to create one.

You should take into account the '4 Ws"
Who?
What?
Where?
When?
How?

It's a stupid exercise I hated doing in middle school for reading class, but it really helps simplify the story process and summarizes the plot.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:46:48 No.93932573 Report

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>>93932093
waifu alert.

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:47:54 No.93932596 Report

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>>93932503

yall know im just joking with all this mexican stuff right? im only half mexican, im literally just a white guy in a mexican guys body, like i look like a mexican dude on the outside, but on the inside im white as fuck, ya know? lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:48:28 No.93932612 Report

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Not even replying to anyone, but mexican webcomic artists are great. They all grew up on the best anime and have no compunctions about mild amusing lewdness.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:54:34 No.93932726 Report

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>>93921866
Your jawline is really glaring. makes her head look squashed.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:57:24 No.93932770 Report

Quoted By: >>93932814 >>93932860

>>93907253
At least you've started drawing. I was going to today, but my brother was binging on Game of Thrones.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 04:59:52 No.93932814 Report

Quoted By: >>93932872

>>93932770
There is still time anon, good luck!
Today's episode was pretty meh

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 05:02:38 No.93932860 Report

Quoted By: >>93932956

>>93932770
what does that have to do with anything

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 05:03:23 No.93932872 Report

Quoted By: >>93932956 >>93937272

>>93932814
I liked Sandor's part, and seeing Arya murderlate the Freys gave me a good feeling. Honestly though, I don't even really like the show and just stick with the book mostly.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 05:07:12 No.93932956 Report

Quoted By: >>93933022 >>93937272

>>93932872
Yeah same here with Arya's intro scene. To be quite honest I'm just still watching because I already spent all these years watching the show, may as well stay until the end and enjoy the memes. Also is a good way to learn what not to do on storytelling, with all the inconsistency and plotholes and retcons D&D pull. The Sinfest of TV if you will.

>>93932860
Sometimes you must make sacrifices for family time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 05:11:56 No.93933022 Report

Quoted By: >>93933062

>>93932956
no I mean why couldn't you draw

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 05:14:10 No.93933062 Report

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>>93933022
Oh sorry I was just playing devil's advocate for that anon since I have kinda been on that situation of needing to stop doing my stuff to spend time with the family even just watching TV. Thought anon was on a similar position.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:01:44 No.93933846 Report

Quoted By:

Bump

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:10:52 No.93934019 Report

Quoted By: >>93934227 >>93934478

The girls try on bathing suits and display Freudian theory of the ID(eris) the EGO(sarah) and the SUPEREGO(alley)....

romanpen.blogspot.com

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:22:46 No.93934227 Report

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>>93934019
Gotta love some freudian trios once in a while

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:29:40 No.93934344 Report

Quoted By: >>93934431 >>93934496

>>93931044
kek would definitely read

>>93932503
Because I mexican myself consider you a fucking disgrace man, you're a shame to your own people. Texan trash. If you get deported don't even come crying back. We don't want trash like you here. We already have enough with the pochos, paisas and chilangos.

Dupe

Dupe Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:30:06 No.93934355 Report

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>>93922426
Thanks! I'm pretty proud of it myself.

>>93922288
I see, yeah it makes sense since 90s-2000s cartoons are on of my biggest inspirations.

>>93923334
I've never watched red dwarf but I just thought it would be a funny idea. Kind of like Zoidberg in Futurama.

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:32:42 No.93934408 Report

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tfw i could be working on my webcomic right now, but instead im playing daggerfall and listening to podcasts and shit, i will regret this one day, but for now i feel pretty fine about it! :DDDD

bones

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bones Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:34:25 No.93934431 Report

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>>93934344

you sound upset friend

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:35:55 No.93934459 Report

Quoted By: >>93934496

>the autists are always the mexicans

As a mexican myself I'm worried why almost every clinically retarded on 4chan boards happens to be mexican or chicano. Is this what years of Dragon Ball Z reruns do to our people?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:36:24 No.93934470 Report

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My comic is coming along pretty well now, I'm sketching a few pages and taking breaks. I can't post pages right now since some are technically unreadable. But after lineart they look rather decent. Guess training with all those porn comics gave a good result.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:36:59 No.93934478 Report

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>>93934019
always love this comic
oh man, #1 fat girl mistake. always stick with the one-piece. a properly constructed one can make your chubs look streamlined and healthy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:38:22 No.93934496 Report

Quoted By: >>93934528 >>93934637 >>93934731

>>93934344
I love how, other than puta, all mexican insults and subcultures sound like delicious foods
if i saw 'cholos' on a menu, I would order them in a snap.
>>93934459
you do realize you're the majority, right? it'd be like being shocked to see a bunch of retarded white people. Law of averages.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:39:40 No.93934528 Report

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>>93934496
chimichangas m8

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:47:23 No.93934637 Report

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>>93934496
I guess I place too much faith in my countrymen

Also it's the magic of the "ch". Is the sound of it, it makes everything sound funnier. Some of our insults having "ch" on it too.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 06:54:08 No.93934731 Report

Quoted By: >>93934856

>>93934496
kek Those weren't insults, they're racial slangs. And depending on the region they have different interpretation.
Chilangos = Brown weird accent people from the center of the country
Paisas = Short term for "paisano" which is a person the comes from the south of the republic, usually to try to jump the border
Pochos= People who were born in the USA but are of mexican origin, usually these are a second generation and are pretty stupid (they take the worst of both cultures) and tend to create the pathetic stereotypes we have in the US. If they manage to come to Mexico they be treating people like shit. Calling themselves superior for being "american". We don't usually like them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 07:02:23 No.93934856 Report

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>>93934731
Chilango is the funniest thing when it comes to interpretation.

For the people of Mexico City it means "province people who came to live here", for the rest of Mexico it means "people who come from Mexico City".

Hell even some friends from Estado de Mexico used the chilango slang for people from CDMX, and taking it as the worst offense of someone confused them for one.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 08:09:23 No.93935662 Report

Quoted By: >>93938564

>>93930214
>make a character that really likes music
>am not into music myself
i try.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Mon 17 Jul 2017 10:03:19 No.93936826 Report

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>>93930214
motorhead

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 10:12:14 No.93936911 Report

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>>93930214
Hyla's (>>93897529) favorite song would be Atom Bomb by Fluke. Mostly because her character was heavily inspired by it's ridiculous 90s music video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PHMzCpy0fXc

She'd probably like Orbital, The chemical Brothers, The Prodigy, KT & Hex and the jet set radio soundtrack. She'd also listen to DDR tier eurodance in secret.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 10:49:38 No.93937272 Report

Quoted By: >>93937378 >>93941761

>>93926830
Webcomics are just comics on the web. Like any art, people will be making comics whereever and whenever they can. As long as there is a web, there will be webcomics.

>>93932872
>>93932956
Hadn't seen it yet, and wasn't expecting to see unspoilered discussion here, in an unrelated thread on an unrelated board. Thanks for that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 11:02:21 No.93937378 Report

Quoted By:

>>93937272
Woop de fucking doo, cry more faggot

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 12:58:43 No.93938564 Report

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>>93935662
I remember you! That room is looking great so far

Dupe

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Dupe Mon 17 Jul 2017 13:48:43 No.93939183 Report

Quoted By: >>93939198

>>93909012
Finished Tobie Jr!

They ended up looking way more complex than I anticipated.

Dupe

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Dupe Mon 17 Jul 2017 13:50:04 No.93939198 Report

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>>93939183
Here's all of them together. Now to make bio pages for them...

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 13:54:50 No.93939267 Report

Quoted By: >>93939299

Quick who wants a cameo for my hyw challenge submission

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 13:57:35 No.93939299 Report

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>>93939267
Also, it should be human

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 14:16:53 No.93939543 Report

Quoted By: >>93943023 >>93961068

After 3 months of working on this version of the comic, and another 3 of rewriting/drafting I've finally finished chapter 1.
posted pic related cause I believe a thank you is in order.
you can read it on comic fury
http://delrubydawn.cfw.me/comics/first

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 14:18:13 No.93939567 Report

Quoted By: >>93939832 >>93940031 >>93940064 >>93941428 >>93941761 >>93941859 >>93942423 >>93948417

QUICK,

Describe all of your Important characters in one sentence each.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 14:40:13 No.93939832 Report

Quoted By: >>93941237

>>93939567
>He only wants to be left alone but they won't leave him alone!
>Bitch with a mighty need for sex
>Crybaby in the process of becoming a badass
>Help my grandfather is a psycho nazi

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 14:53:58 No.93940031 Report

Quoted By: >>93940161 >>93941188

>>93939567
>Angel with memory loss
>Newly enlisted soldier still filled with naivety.
>Mercenary who had the toughest life of all.
>A Hothead who runs into situations without thinking, also a racist.
>Rockefeller and Carnegie combined
>Gaius Marius

Dupe

Dupe Mon 17 Jul 2017 14:55:46 No.93940064 Report

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>>93939567
Dupe-He's an enigmatic recluse who collects retro junk.

Hyla-She's an immature runaway who's trying to become an action hero.

CIN-He's a hypocritical cyborg who strives to bring balance and peace to the galaxy.

Trype-She's an egotistical ex-supermodel who was outcast from her own species for her technological pursuits.

Tobie Jr-They're a childlike robot who does their best with their primitive hardware.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 15:02:39 No.93940161 Report

Quoted By: >>93940302

>>93940031
>Gaius Marius

Explain.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 15:10:50 No.93940302 Report

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>>93940161
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gaius_Marius
Not much to explain. He's essentially a carbon copy of Gaius Marius. He reforms the army of the country he's a part of, eventually becomes a dictator and he's related to the person who eventually is crowned Emperor

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 15:46:27 No.93940872 Report

Quoted By: >>93940937 >>93954500

>>93901840
>I've stayed away from /hyw/ because it can get pretty toxic
Aww, did people not endlessly complimenting your comic hurt your feewings?

>Realized the whole system is bullshit
Poor baby, you couldn't hack it in the real world.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 15:49:54 No.93940937 Report

Quoted By:

>>93940872
Mansa Musa? Is that you?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:06:46 No.93941188 Report

Quoted By:

>>93940031
>Rockefeller and Carnegie combined

How does he even exist? That combination can only end nuclear, like Edison and Tesla

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:07:04 No.93941195 Report

Quoted By: >>93941234

Some people here are retarded, other, not so much. It's not toxic as long as it's genuine criticism and that can actually help you. If you don't want anything to change, it's your problem, then.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:08:43 No.93941218 Report

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>>93915962
If you're a good writer it doesn't matter.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:09:58 No.93941234 Report

Quoted By: >>93941254

>>93941195
>Some people here are retarded
You mean like you, when you constantly insisted that character's enormous tits wasn't a fetish?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:10:02 No.93941237 Report

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>>93939832
Damn that is a good description

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:11:12 No.93941254 Report

Quoted By:

>>93941234
lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:23:05 No.93941428 Report

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>>93939567
>sword-swinging babysitter making up for a wasted adolescence
>dorky love interest prince guy who plans ahead and always comes prepared with adequate equipment
>somewhat timid thermodynamics-wielding half-alien nerd
>cocky cabbage-haired elemental that just can't win
>laidback cavewoman werewolf that lucks into pretty good gear pretty often come to think of it
>feisty, avaricious kemonomimi magical girl with more hormones than patience
>air-headed genki halfling with the world's most positive attitude and, at best, tenuous control over her magic

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:45:35 No.93941761 Report

Quoted By: >>93942030

>>93939567
Life - What happens when you start as an idealistic artist and as time passes you get jaded and don't really care anymore about anything.

Death - AND IT'S ALL SO EASY WHEN YOU'RE EVIL AND I DO IT ALL FOR FREE YOUR TEARS ARE ALL THE PAY I'LL EVER NEED

Mystery - No-nonsense boss who only cares for seeing you meeting your cuotas.

>>93937272
Oops, sorry.
Arya's bit was a given since last season's finale eitherway. Still sorry.

ABDex

ABDex Mon 17 Jul 2017 16:52:06 No.93941859 Report

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>>93939567
Ezra Tavana- Self destructive Soldier who hides his feelings of inferiority behind a cocky persona.

Erra Tavana- Soldier who plans to over throw the very Government he is meant to protect.

Benny Bruzer- Loud mouthed and opinionated rebel who cares more for blood shed than making peace.

Arnold Festier- Rebel leader who hides his desire for revenge behind altruistic intentions.

Marshal Tweede- Military gloryhound who was once an idealistic hopeful, and still struggles with it today.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 17:02:30 No.93942030 Report

Quoted By: >>93942125

>>93941761
by the way, it's spelled quota
Just in case that comes up

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 17:08:25 No.93942125 Report

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>>93942030
Oh damn it's true. Thanks anon, I got confused there with the spelling.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 17:25:06 No.93942423 Report

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>>93939567
>Love for fighting and science but most importantly, peace
>Sweet little cinnamon roll with extra beef
>Training hard not always gives you glory but it gives respect
>Knowing your enemy is crucial to fighting them
>Taking bad decisions doesn't make you a bad person
>To find peace of heart you must learn to love yourself

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 17:58:36 No.93943023 Report

Quoted By: >>93944319

>>93939543
Are you going to make whole chapter updates or was this just a sort of special update?

Still good luck out there! Now you just need to keep it going.

duplo

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duplo Mon 17 Jul 2017 18:17:00 No.93943346 Report

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>>93877481
REMINDER THAT IN TWO DAYS WILL BE THE FIRST HYW CHALLENGE anyone can participate, so be ready! it's not late to join!

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:09:37 No.93944319 Report

Quoted By: >>93944596

>>93943023
chapter by chapter, with small side page updates filling the gaps

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:23:59 No.93944596 Report

Quoted By: >>93945971

>>93944319
How did you make the decision to post your comic on this website? Were there other sites you had in mind?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:32:29 No.93944760 Report

Quoted By: >>93944788 >>93947376

>>93922397
I don't know. Waifu material? I just wrote the story and somehow a girl ended up as a protag. I didn't intend for it, it just fit. I suppose in my case I was looking for a character who was sweet and innocent and a young girl gets that across easier. Pic semi related: its the comic, but not the protag (and an edit)

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:33:42 No.93944788 Report

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>>93944760
that is an important magical rune

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:42:32 No.93944959 Report

Quoted By: >>93945124 >>93945274 >>93945298 >>93945439 >>93945764 >>93945971

Would you make a webcomic if your art is still rough around the edges? Or not entirely anatomicly accurate? I've shown my art to artists at conventions, and was told that i still need to work on things. But I want to work on a comic even if my art isn't 100 percent where I want it to be. A friend told me to check out the original one punch man comic, and they said that I dhoulfnt worry too much about bad art.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:50:50 No.93945124 Report

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>>93944959
>A friend told me to check out the original one punch man comic, and they said that I dhoulfnt worry too much about bad art.
ya man , art isn't that important nowadays in comics. just focus on doing what you love

ABDex

ABDex Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:58:21 No.93945274 Report

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>>93944959
So long as proportions arent grossly inaccurate or distracting, it should be fine. I keep in mind that viewers will skim through and dont usually nitpick the way the artist might. However, i think getting such things to perfection would be greatly appreciated by those who notice and will only add to your work. With time, your art will improve so long as you put forth the effort.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 19:59:12 No.93945298 Report

Quoted By: >>93946017

>>93944959
Webcomics have the advantage that you can actively practice your art skills on actual work instead of just doing poses with no real context. If you start working until you have a perfect artstyle, you will be on an eternal path of never feeling you reached that perfect state. You can always improve and learn on the march.

Pic related is an example. I'm aware Bleedman is not the best example because he is a hack, but he started doing webcomics when his artstyle was that of the left and nowadays it's more like the one on the right.

Take all criticism as a way to imrpove your craft though, don't think that you don't need to improve just because you start without being a pro.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:07:43 No.93945439 Report

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>>93944959
Comics aren't like... commissions, or trying to create frameable art to sell. You don't have to be perfect, just good enough to tell a story. Half the guys in the funny pages can't draw for shit. The ones who can, choose not to.

duplo

duplo Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:25:01 No.93945764 Report

Quoted By: >>93945996

>>93944959
one punch man webcomic's art IS good, one had understanding of basic shading, perspective, proportions and gesture if anything you can use it as an example of how UNPOLISHED art can also be appealing

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:32:17 No.93945899 Report

Quoted By: >>93945926 >>93945984

Does anywhere know where I can find screentone textures like the crosshatching in the top and bottom panels of this page? I swear, I saw this pattern once before on Clip Studio Paint but I can't remember how to access it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:33:33 No.93945926 Report

Quoted By: >>93946441

>>93945899
http://www.clipstudio.net/en/promotion/trial_tour/022/

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:35:46 No.93945971 Report

Quoted By: >>93946017

>>93944596
every site I've seen, everyone has some sort of problem with, but with comic fury, people just complain that it's primitive, the html edit feature is nice, and got me off my ass with learning html.

If I find a site that I find superior to comicfury ill consider moving, or if I get good enough to make my own site, I will.
but for now comic fury is my discussing old air conditioner, its old but it works.

>>93944959
I spent along time telling myself to become a god of art before making my comic. but realized with that mindset Id never begin working on the comic that I wanted to make, a lot of my pages have serious problems >pic related
but I don't mind very much, especially since a lot of my inspirations have terrible art in their first few chapters.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:36:40 No.93945984 Report

Quoted By:

>>93945899
Checking my copy, it's in
Materials - Monochromatic - Crosshatching - crosshatching x 1

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:37:07 No.93945996 Report

Quoted By: >>93946046 >>93947214 >>93947258

>>93945764
What drew in readers to One Punch Man to get it its popularity? Was the creator well known before or did the lore draw in readers?

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:38:19 No.93946017 Report

Quoted By: >>93948149

>>93945298
man, I liked it better before.
>>93945971
the only drawbacks to comicgenesis are A) it seems to be all-but-abandoned and B) you can't do alt-text (on comics. you can on separate images) or click-to-advance-to-the-next-page

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:39:40 No.93946046 Report

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>>93945996
it's a fun comic

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 20:59:27 No.93946441 Report

Quoted By:

>>93945926
Thanks

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 21:33:45 No.93947214 Report

Quoted By:

>>93945996
Just the usual sharing people do when they find some fun story out there.
Later on Murata

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 21:35:33 No.93947258 Report

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>>93945996
It's funny and entertaining, and the action read well even without the art upgrade

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 21:40:28 No.93947376 Report

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>>93944760
Found a pic of the protag of my comic. I only have edits saved on my mobile cuz im a mobilefag and I save edits people make. I find it flattering when people make fun edits of my comic because they spent time on it instead of skimming and forgetting.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 22:14:53 No.93948149 Report

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>>93946017
Yeah I agree.

I think his middle work is one of the best. He got some better grasp at anatomy and the like and although it looked more new anime-ish it still felt like there was effort on it.

Nowadays it just feels like he does them in the most lazy of ways, while also taken a lot of steps back on all the progress he did.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 22:29:08 No.93948417 Report

Quoted By:

>>93939567
Hecktor: A small demon, with no one and nothing, looking for work as a detective.

Percy: A neurotic bat who serves as Hecktor's detective partner, despite being more keen.

Toby: A female spider who attempts to help Hecktor and Percy, despite usually getting ignored.

Theo: A gruff fish monster who serves as Hecktor's landlord and handyman.

Andy: A 10 year old ghost who recently died and is seeking some answers with Hecktor and Percy's help.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 22:50:33 No.93948816 Report

Quoted By: >>93960895

>>93914758
Would you rather voice tryouts for non-humans have voice filters on them, or just be raw takes?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Mon 17 Jul 2017 23:33:53 No.93949862 Report

Quoted By: >>93950945

This is today's page, working on both characters personal dynamics. Although on these first pages I'm resorting to jokes for the cliffhanger, I'm not planning on doing it forever; but I suppose it's a necessity at the beginning of the story, until the action starts.

I think I'm slowly getting into a regular schedule mentality, but, alas, I'm not there yet.

exeivier

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exeivier Mon 17 Jul 2017 23:44:01 No.93950153 Report

Quoted By: >>93950501 >>93951973 >>93955019

>I missed the mexican banter
damn, anyway who's a Mexico anon and who a mexico-living in the us one? I have things to discuss with both groups.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Mon 17 Jul 2017 23:54:10 No.93950501 Report

Quoted By: >>93951973 >>93956066

>>93950153
100% mexican curious here. What you have to discuss though?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 00:07:46 No.93950945 Report

Quoted By:

>>93949862
getting a real Gunsmith Cats vibe from these, appropriately enough. buuut.. no tails?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 00:44:10 No.93951973 Report

Quoted By: >>93956066

>>93950153
>>93950501
Mexican here too. Pure blooded, not like that bastard of "bones"

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:05:54 No.93952585 Report

Quoted By: >>93952671 >>93952827 >>93952846

would it be better to kill off a mentor to the mc or to let them live. said mentor and mc have this disagreement with each other until they fianlly get to know each other and until close to the end of the story they get killed for whatever reason.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:09:06 No.93952671 Report

Quoted By: >>93952791

>>93952585
Think of what the mentor's role is in the story. Is it important that he stays alive? It would be any different if he stayed alive or if he died? Would his death move the plot or would be like "eh whatever one less person to draw"? Would his death bring any new motivation and conflict that helps my story and mc's development?

gloryhol anon

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gloryhol anon Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:13:36 No.93952791 Report

Quoted By: >>93952827 >>93953265

>>93952671
depends on the context of the story and importance on the mentor. Look at DBZ, Roshi's useless, then look at Mob Psycho 100. Reigen has nothing to teach to Mob, but his relationship with the kid is strong, it'd change everything in the comic if the mentor died. It really depends on the realtionship they have.

inked like 3 pages today. God i'm tired; feast your eyes on the parisian metro. I'm proud of some of these panels.

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:14:50 No.93952827 Report

Quoted By:

>>93952791
oops, meant to >>93952585

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:15:29 No.93952846 Report

Quoted By:

>>93952585
Oh wow, I love the idea of the Yoda-wan living instead of dying, and it ending on a shitty disagreement between them. That's.... special.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:15:49 No.93952853 Report

Quoted By: >>93956894

Fixed the small couch and added some backgrounds. Also thanks for the English fix, anons.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:29:48 No.93953265 Report

Quoted By: >>93953853

>>93952791
>Roshi's useless
he's pretty good at groping kurilin's wife right in front of him and their daughter. That was impressive when it was a normal woman with a gun, he's now doing it to a woman who could blow the planet up 20 times over.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 01:53:06 No.93953853 Report

Quoted By: >>93954780

>>93953265
Kill yourself coldfusion

Will Draw for Food Guy

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Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:20:25 No.93954500 Report

Quoted By: >>93954523 >>93954785 >>93955196

Whaddup /hyw/?
Mind giving me some feedback on this (very) rough character sketches?

>>93940872
That sort of attitude will get you nowhere in this industry.

Will Draw for Food Guy

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Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:21:28 No.93954523 Report

Quoted By: >>93954577 >>93954785

>>93954500

Will Draw for Food Guy

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Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:23:29 No.93954577 Report

Quoted By: >>93954604 >>93954785

>>93954523

Will Draw for Food Guy

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Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:24:32 No.93954604 Report

Quoted By: >>93954785

>>93954577

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:28:11 No.93954693 Report

Quoted By:

>>93896439
So are you going to draw it digitally, print it out, then rescan it? I'm liking these ideas. Start in chapter 8 and have chapter 9 be entirely a flashback to chapter 7

Then after you finish the story, post 'remastered' versions of the missing chapters that recontextualize everything, with commentary that constantly compares them to the nonexistent originals

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:28:41 No.93954706 Report

Quoted By: >>93954758 >>93954785 >>93954794

Opinion needed.

I have a character who's essentially an angel and I need a way to show them tapping into their Angelic powers. Is having their eyes glow Red, Gold or Purple a good way to show this? As I thought about it, it seemed a little animey to me. Am I just overthinking this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:30:50 No.93954758 Report

Quoted By: >>93954807

>>93954706
Red and purple aren't very angelic. How about a classical painting halo that shows up behind their head? Maybe a stylized one that factors into other motifs in your story.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:31:43 No.93954780 Report

Quoted By:

>>93953853
haha you spotted him alright. His style is unmistakable.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:31:53 No.93954785 Report

Quoted By: >>93954807 >>93954891

>>93954706
Red usually is more related to demonic forces more than angelic, I think gold would be better. Or blue.

>>93954604
>>93954577
>>93954523
>>93954500

I envy people who have no problems to do feet. Dunno what can I say on this though, seems you got your stuff well.

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:32:23 No.93954794 Report

Quoted By:

>>93954706
White. yellow, and blue are good angelic color schemes to use. If not glowing eyes, which seems pretty standard, you could envelop them in an aura.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:32:47 No.93954807 Report

Quoted By: >>93954831

>>93954785
>>93954758
Ok, but does the concept of the glowing eyes seem a little to /a/?

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:33:44 No.93954831 Report

Quoted By:

>>93954807
Glowing eyes of power as a concept is older than anything /a/ can offer.

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:36:06 No.93954891 Report

Quoted By:

>>93954785
Haha, I still need to work on them, hands too, I'm far from good with them.
I sort of imagine them as sloped triangles/ pyramids with a ball at the point connecting them to the leg. Held in place with ankle joints (which I draw quite pronounce because I dunno I just do)

Then you just add the big toe, and sprinkle in the little ones. As for the bottom of the foot, just remember that its one rounded heel arching towards another less rounded part of the foot, from which the toes come from.

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:41:54 No.93955019 Report

Quoted By: >>93956066

>>93950153

half spic reporting in

think im going to do a new page tonight, because sure why not? lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:49:36 No.93955196 Report

Quoted By: >>93955358

>>93954500
Feels weird to say this, but he needs a longer crotch. I know it's just prelim, but keeping an eye on your proportions because I love your shit but sometimes the proports get outta control a bit. His right arm is too long too.
He's a cool little pirate lad. what's his deal?

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:57:18 No.93955358 Report

Quoted By: >>93955881

>>93955196
I think you mean his left arm? (our right)
Yeah, I was noticing that before, I think I overshot that point where the wrist meets the hip, or maybe its just that the waist seems almost nonexistent?
He's the main character, so I'm trying to get in the habit of being able to draw him quickly, I should slow down a bit and make sure that part gets rendered well.

As for his story? He's just your run of the mill ne'er-do-well kid from the slums of a bustling port city. He gets in trouble a lot, but the town's officials usually let him off since he's the son of the late Captain of the the Guard, trying to prod him to try becoming the man his father was, but he's not having any of that.
One day, he takes it too far, and ends up with a light punishment of guard duty of some government official. The government official ends up transporting a big, ornate and mysterious chest via smuggler ship. The protagonist's mischievousness gets the better of him and he opens the chest while no one is looking. What's inside sets his life onto an adventure he never imagined.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 02:59:19 No.93955402 Report

Quoted By: >>93955435 >>93955451 >>93955512 >>93955531 >>93955698 >>93955903

>try to work on comic
>urge to play video games or watch shows overpowers my will in 10 minutes
>end up playing for hours
>tell myself I'll work on it tomorrow
s-slow and steady right guys?

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:01:07 No.93955435 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955402
No anon, uninstall that shit.

As a video game junkie myself, I cant tell you how many hours I've lost to video games that I coulda spent on comics.

If your gaming obsession is as great as mine was, my only advice to you is to take drastic measures and uninstall your games right the fuck now.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:01:55 No.93955451 Report

Quoted By: >>93955512 >>93955525

>>93955402
>Finished a chapter of my book
>Take a break
>Break lasts 5 days
>Was gonna work on it tonight
>Watch baseball instead
>mfw

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:04:34 No.93955512 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955402
>>93955451

There are no consequences to procrastination.
But we do all die eventually.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:05:06 No.93955525 Report

Quoted By: >>93955551

>>93955451
>Watch baseball
isn't it bed time for you by now grandpa?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:05:28 No.93955531 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955402
Give yourself a schedule, regiment yourself. Decide you'll spend 2 hours playing video games after spending 4 hours drawing, or that you'll only let yourself watch TV after finishing xyz pages.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:06:20 No.93955551 Report

Quoted By: >>93955598 >>93958652

>>93955525
>not watching baseball

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:08:02 No.93955598 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955551
>watching grown men playing toss ball

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:11:26 No.93955698 Report

Quoted By: >>93955918

>>93955402
>Parents leave the house alone for the weekend and 2 extra days.
>Finally some time for myself and work on comics I think.
>Except I have to take care alone of 7 dogs, 3 turtles and now everyfuckingbody in my family makes phone calls or send texts to know how everything's going and I'm a failure at multitasking so it steals my time.
>Time at computer is spent shitposting and here at /hyw/
>Parents come back tomorrow night and that means I must clean the whole house early on.

A-at least I'm lettering the challenge comic now that the calls have stopped.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:19:10 No.93955881 Report

Quoted By: >>93955995

>>93955358
nope, his right. his elbow is going clear down to his waist, while the other arm correctly has the elbow at ribcage level
man that's a great backstory. I canna wait

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:20:12 No.93955903 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955402
stop resisting the 2nd step and the 3rd step won't have 'hours' in it.
I've been the most productive in my life when I take 10 minute gaming breaks every hour, or half hour breaks every 5 hours, or whatever. It only works when I'm just so distracted that I can't draw anyway, and then once i've been playing for a little while i get the urge to draw so badly I can't play anymore.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:21:14 No.93955918 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955698
I know most of that feel.

Will Draw for Food Guy

Will Draw for Food Guy Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:25:09 No.93955995 Report

Quoted By:

>>93955881
Oh oooh, I see it now

But yeah man! Glad to hear you're hyped! That was just the short hand version!

exeivier

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exeivier Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:28:20 No.93956066 Report

Quoted By: >>93956701 >>93956790

>>93955019
>>93951973
>>93950501

Well this is going to be kind of sad

I was looking forward to anyone who went into that animation festival contest in Mexico. apparently i had really good chances but i did'nt make the cut.

coldfusion helped me with an eglish version and i'm planning on sending it to oni-press (it's a short graphic novel and they told me to send them portfolio updates whenever possible) but yeah. at least i am free to print/publish the comic now instead of having to wait one whole year

this was gonna be the cherry on top of opening my store today for physical/digital content, oh well.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 03:55:47 No.93956549 Report

Quoted By: >>93957274 >>93957396

characters

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:03:25 No.93956701 Report

Quoted By: >>93957015

>>93956066
I'm sorry to hear that anon, I'm not too sure what that's all about but your comic looks super interesting and your art is great, I'd love to see more

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:08:28 No.93956790 Report

Quoted By: >>93957015

>>93956066
Oh yeah I heard about that contest, sorry to hear that anon.

Your art looks really nice. Good luck out there with oni-press!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:14:03 No.93956894 Report

Quoted By: >>93961000

>>93952853
1. Don't align the words to one side.
2. I'd use a more organic font. make your own or look up blambot or dafont.

exeivier

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exeivier Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:20:50 No.93957015 Report

Quoted By: >>93957208

>>93956701
>>93956790

thanks, i guess is your typical "misterious character appears over the summer vacations and changes our lives" trope, but I really liked rescuing the shitty pages but great story my friend did some years ago.

for now i'm gonna meditate on making it public on tapastic, it's a good candidate for a kickstarter even tho i don't have that fanbase yet. but it would be nice to print it in english too.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:32:15 No.93957208 Report

Quoted By: >>93957290

>>93957015
como se llamaba el concurso?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:36:20 No.93957274 Report

Quoted By:

>>93956549
cool guy, waifu, waifu, and cool heiho casey jones

exeivier

exeivier Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:37:25 No.93957290 Report

Quoted By: >>93957396

>>93957208
contest's secuanciarte, event is pixelatl, check it out some really big names on animation/cinema will be attending.

I'm the anterra guy btw, i'll update with a new chapter again in a couple days
anterrachronicles.com

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:39:12 No.93957321 Report

Quoted By: >>93957448 >>93958169

I just realized I can upload the first page of my porn comic since it lacks penises or any real sexual thematic

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:44:16 No.93957396 Report

Quoted By:

Well the actual script is finally there. Now to work on making at least some better sketches because my pencil ones are quite vague and I ended up adding some more panels.

>>93956549
Shy Guy and smile girl are quite cute.

>>93957290
>anterrachronicles.com
Hey that looks quite cool! I will check it out.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:45:55 No.93957418 Report

Quoted By: >>93957447

>>93877360
>ITT /co/ hates on west tree

Makes me sad you guys hate him work.

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

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marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:48:02 No.93957447 Report

Quoted By: >>93958199

>>93957418
What are you talking about? I doubt anyone here would have any big complaints about their services.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:48:06 No.93957448 Report

Quoted By: >>93959169

>>93957321

well there be any futa going on? plus, also link to the porn comic!

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 04:49:50 No.93957471 Report

Quoted By: >>93959448

>>93907729
>>93917310

i dont know im pretty sleepy yall, i think i might just play some games and go to sleep, u.u <(zzz)

i dont know maybe i will do a page, let me drink a cup of coffee and see how awake i feel after...

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 05:40:41 No.93958169 Report

Quoted By: >>93959169

>>93957321
Why are you always blueballing us, Lucy?

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

the dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Tue 18 Jul 2017 05:44:02 No.93958199 Report

Quoted By:

>>93897163
Yeah that's true, but john K.'s style is a little too crazy all the time and just looks weird in general, I'm not a big fan of it at all.

also yes i know this reply is late.

>>93957447
I'm glad these guys haven't sued me yet.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 06:17:37 No.93958652 Report

Quoted By: >>93958688 >>93958755

>>93955551
>Watching any sports

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 06:20:02 No.93958688 Report

Quoted By:

>>93958652
wrong pic, oh well free bump

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 06:26:01 No.93958755 Report

Quoted By: >>93959082

>>93958652
What about esports ?

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Tue 18 Jul 2017 06:31:53 No.93958854 Report

Quoted By: >>93959448

IT SMELLS LIKE
ROBIN'S UPSIDE-DOWN

blah blah took longer than it should blah. Special effects blah. more fighting to come

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 06:47:54 No.93959082 Report

Quoted By:

>>93958755
>ANY
>SPORTS

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 06:55:58 No.93959169 Report

Quoted By:

>>93957448
No futa planned... yet.
And I have only 3 pages done, wait until I finish atleast 9

>>93958169
I'm a porn artist, that's what I do.

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 07:25:44 No.93959448 Report

Quoted By: >>93959493 >>93959648 >>93959758 >>93962270 >>93962837

>>93958854

>blahblahblah

wow you sound so excited and passionate about your project coldfusion.

>t.i dont even care about this comic anymore but im just going to keep churning it out for attention because ive got nothing else going on in my life
>t.never gonna make it

unlike you i actually care about my comics and my characters! thats why im going to make it one day and your still going to be stuck here with these... other, so called, webcomic.... """"artist""""

please dont take that as an insult anybody, because, see, what you all fail to realize is unlike professional comic book artist, you dont actually need skill or talent to be considered good or make it, all you need as a webcomic artist is persistence and passion, seriously, look at the most popular webcomic... """"artists""" that have made it and have a huge fan base, your gonna see some awful ass fetish tier shit or just awful art in general, but even shit as bad as one punch man can make it and have their own anime because that dude was persistent, and passionate. thats it. webcomics are all about quantity and not quality, i have seen some really amazing artist, better than professional comic book artist have their webcomic die because they werent persistent enough with it because of the amount of skill and talent required to make pages they are not as autistic enough to spam the internet with thousands of pages of literal stick figure shit like homestuck so those super good artist with amazing page art was dead on arrival. thats just the way it is yall.

>>93957471

on my 5th cup of coffee, im woke as fuck yall, recording this now as i draw, get hype! cuz im hype as fuck about it, i love my comic and my characters and can keep goth grillz going forever if i wanted to, but dont worry every major arc will have an ending so every long ass arc will have meaning to it and be going somewhere ya know? lol

Dustin

Dustin Tue 18 Jul 2017 07:30:18 No.93959482 Report

Quoted By: >>93959758

Been awhile since I've seen these threads.

But, hey, I finished my first comic!

https://tapas.io/series/Urchin

Currently thinking about how to do things with the next one, gonna try to iron out some details before I start.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 07:32:04 No.93959493 Report

Quoted By: >>93959758

>>93959448
>A shit tier artist calling out a low tier artist

gloryhol anon

gloryhol anon Tue 18 Jul 2017 07:50:43 No.93959648 Report

Quoted By: >>93959693 >>93959758 >>93961025

>>93959448
... ONE has a career because One Punch Man has stellar writing and Webcomics and manga in Japan are an actual industry much more different than in the US. It's far easier to work well there than in the west...

Face it, no one here will have an career as proficient as ONE.

I aim to be published one day, but I don't even know if it might happen, even in france, where the comic book industry and manga is bigger than any other country in europe.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 07:56:12 No.93959693 Report

Quoted By:

>>93959648
My actual goal is to make a comic to make myself happy, not even to please others, I just want my characters to live.

And for money making I already have a part time job and do commissions so it has me set.

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:06:19 No.93959758 Report

Quoted By: >>93959831 >>93959925 >>93960085

>>93959448

almost done with the page art, just needs some clothes colored in and some background and some word balloons and its done!

>>93959482

very cool stuff man!

>>93959493

>implying im not pretty damn close to pro tier already

yeah sure whatever kid, lol

>>93959648

>Face it, no one here will have an career as proficient as ONE.

we'll see :) ;3 XD :'D

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:17:00 No.93959831 Report

Quoted By: >>93959925

>>93959758

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:31:24 No.93959925 Report

Quoted By: >>93959971 >>93960494

>>93959758

bump

>>93959831
???????????

future bones

future bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:36:43 No.93959971 Report

Quoted By: >>93960021 >>93960055 >>93960065 >>93960089

>>93959925
hey stop this! I'm warning you, you will just put ourself in shame like you've done (well actually do) for the next following years. Your comic is so bad I have come here to stop me, aka you so this shit never happens. I actually suggest you to become a gay prostitute since that will still let you more dignity than making this comic and humiliating me, that means you, in this site. Please, reconsider your life! Save us!

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:41:25 No.93960021 Report

Quoted By: >>93960080

>>93959971

you tried

try harder next time kid.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:45:29 No.93960055 Report

Quoted By: >>93960089

>>93959971

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:46:44 No.93960065 Report

Quoted By: >>93960089

>>93959971
Bones BTFO

future bones

future bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:49:38 No.93960080 Report

Quoted By: >>93960089

>>93960021
gosh why am i so retarded? why didn't i kill myself when i was your age

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:50:19 No.93960085 Report

Quoted By: >>93960104

>>93959758
I think you missed the goth trend by about 15 years.

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:50:54 No.93960089 Report

Quoted By: >>93960096 >>93960119

>>93959971
>>93960055
>>93960065
>>93960080

samefag

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:51:58 No.93960096 Report

Quoted By:

>>93960089
as you wish senpai

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:53:30 No.93960104 Report

Quoted By: >>93960131 >>93960181

>>93960085

ungothing believable.

goth culture will never die, i wont let it!

future bones

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future bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:55:30 No.93960119 Report

Quoted By:

>>93960089
it seems that two versions of ourselves from different timelines are trying to stop you. please kill yourself and end our misery

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 08:56:53 No.93960131 Report

Quoted By:

>>93960104
Well, I guess Jhonen is still getting work...

future mtf trans bones

future mtf trans bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 09:06:15 No.93960181 Report

Quoted By: >>93960234

>>93960104
you did it all wrong, my past self. our comics are shit and no one cares about them.

in order to get attention, you have to become trans. hrt is pretty cheap even on your timeline.
using women restroom even when you're in boymode is also a good start.

it's good man, now everyone is paying attention to me! being trans is GREAT

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 09:14:52 No.93960234 Report

Quoted By:

>>93960181

>trans

so me, an alt right mexican trump support becomes a mentally ill brainwashed far left leaning liberal in the future huh anon? i dont think so kid, its time to stop roleplaying as me.

bone's mr meeseeks

bone's mr meeseeks Tue 18 Jul 2017 09:16:38 No.93960242 Report

Quoted By:

HEY I'M MISTER MEESEEKS LOOK AT ME, I'VE BEEN TRYING TO HELP BONES TO FUCKING IMPROVE FOR YEARS, AN ETERNITY IN MEESEEKS TIME AND NOTHING HAS WORKED, I FEAR THE WORST!

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:04:37 No.93960494 Report

Quoted By: >>93960515 >>93960639 >>93962657

>>93959925

ok, its done, i hope yall like it, yall know where to read it at, alright im up out of here, peace! (actually i might stick around to reply to trolls cuz why not? lol!)

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:10:31 No.93960515 Report

Quoted By: >>93960612

>>93960494
Haha, what if the cheerleader turned into a goth from dating the goth grill?

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:26:28 No.93960612 Report

Quoted By: >>93960726

>>93960515

well, actually, Nina does dress her up as a goth for fun one day/page in the future, but she never goes full goth in any story arcs I have planned out so far

its still in its first arc which is 12 episodes/chapters long, which is about the average number of episodes in a season of a tv show or animated tv show.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:28:47 No.93960629 Report

Quoted By: >>93960725 >>93960741 >>93960964

this bones shitposting needs to fucking stop guys,

future bones

future bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:30:01 No.93960639 Report

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>>93960494
FOOL! You have sentenced us to a life of misery and autism! I haven't dissapeared yet so this means my timeline still exists! You idiot! Fuck you edgy teen me!

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:42:06 No.93960725 Report

Quoted By: >>93960778

>>93960629

>anon thinks im shitposting
>anon thinks im an edgy teen
>anon thinks I should stop, ever. lol

mfw

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:42:17 No.93960726 Report

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>>93960612
It could be a disguise for when the gang goes to a goth convention and no preppies are allowed, haha.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:44:52 No.93960741 Report

Quoted By: >>93960778 >>93960788

>>93960629
Bones is either a very dedicated troll, or just a very retarded mexican kid with dellusions of grandeur

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:45:03 No.93960744 Report

Quoted By: >>93960763

your not getting anymore (you's) from me future bones, your dead to me loser, lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:47:47 No.93960763 Report

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>>93960744
just stop. You're making a fool of yourself.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:49:25 No.93960778 Report

Quoted By: >>93960964

>>93960725
I genuinely want you to die.
I don't care if you're shitposting, or just think you're posting quality content,
go away, you ruin every fucking thread we make at this point.

>>93960741
I just want to go back to posting comics rather than whatever the fuck is happening here.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:50:35 No.93960784 Report

Quoted By: >>93960813

I'm the writer of a writer/artist duo.

This is our site:http://www.capeworldcomics.com/.

We do superhero stories.

Every Monday there's an illustrated text story and every Friday a comic. When my artist isn't feeling so hot I put up pages from public domain comics and write re-imaginings of public domain superheros. The current text story is about substitute teachers taking a group of super-powered kids to a museum on superheroes. The comic story is about the first superhumans in the setting, two cavemen at the dawn of time, one destined to be the world's first superhero and the other destined to be his supervillian.

I appreciate any feedback about the art or stories you guys could give.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:50:51 No.93960788 Report

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>>93960741
Post your comic.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:52:48 No.93960813 Report

Quoted By: >>93960845

>>93960784

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 10:57:22 No.93960845 Report

Quoted By: >>93960877

>>93960813
We've just started so there's not a lot on the site right now.

That's the comic, and this is from the illustrated text story about the kids and the museum.

One of their substitute teachers is a paranormal investigator. Her name is Ms. Cryptic, and she's a giant moth-owl-thing based on cryptids such as the Flatwoods Monster and Mothman.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

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Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:02:01 No.93960877 Report

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>>93960845
And the filler is a re-imagining of public domain darling Daredevil!

He's currently sharing backstory with guest star Airboy (http://pdsh.wikia.com/wiki/Airboy), so there's not much action...yet.

But the next filler update has Daredevil fight the Luftwaffe...by jumping between the wings of their planes.

Dupe

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Dupe Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:03:36 No.93960895 Report

Quoted By: >>93960901 >>93960934

>>93948816
Whatever works. A lot of the alien characters I'm commissioning use filters and effects. For example this is the voice actor for my antagonist "Grawllux".

Dupe

Dupe Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:04:38 No.93960901 Report

Quoted By: >>93960934

>>93960895
ugh, forgot the link somehow
http://vocaroo.com/i/s056TnY5adnJ

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:08:18 No.93960934 Report

Quoted By: >>93961008

>>93960901
>>93960895
Neat! So let me see if I got this straight: your webcomic is going to be sort of like one of those old text adventure games? People click around and get new images and play new sounds?

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:10:47 No.93960964 Report

Quoted By: >>93961068

>>93960778
>>93960629

>I just want to go back to posting comics rather than whatever the fuck is happening here.

did you even post any comics in this thread? if you did your comic, style, and thread presence isn't very rememberable im sorry to say, because I looked at everyones comic in this thread, even dewdes shit, dewd may be the worst artist here but atleast his stuff is rememberable and he has a huge thread presence. But you... who are you? What was the name of your comic? Do you even have a comic?

Also work on your anatomy and stop being such an obvious weeb. Your welcome for the free advice.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:15:11 No.93961000 Report

Quoted By:

Page 2 in the works. I'm gonna take a break now.
Drawing a detailed background is a pain.
>>93956894
Thanks bruh.

Dupe

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Dupe Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:15:50 No.93961008 Report

Quoted By:

>>93960934
Nah, there'll be cutscenes with dialog in them amidst the comic. I have a soundtrack for it as well. Making something interactive like a game would be too time consuming for else I'd do that.

For instance this image when implemented will be an animation background that starts at the top and scrolls down to the entrance with various things animated like the sign, ships and characters, then cuts to a scene of dialogue taking place indoors.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:18:04 No.93961025 Report

Quoted By: >>93961100

>>93959648
Relatively new to HYW threads. Who's ONE? If anyone has any of his work pls post.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:21:50 No.93961065 Report

Quoted By: >>93961074

HOLY SHIT! BONES IS HITTING MEME LEVELS I DIDN'T EVEN THINK WAS POSSIBLE! HOLLLLLLYYYYYY SHEEEEEEEIT!!!!!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:22:00 No.93961068 Report

Quoted By: >>93961231

>>93960964
>did you even post any comics in this thread?

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME BONES
if you actually read the thread rather than shitposting you would see >>93939543
I just finished 3 months of fucking work, and have already started work on chapter 2

>stop being such an obvious weeb
no

>Your welcome for the free advice.
this isn't advice, and any advice you could give me, would be meaningless to me.

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:23:11 No.93961074 Report

Quoted By: >>93961100

>>93961065
I'm new here. Is this something that happens often?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:25:56 No.93961100 Report

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>>93961074
unfortunately yes

>>93961025
'One' is a Japanese webcomic creator, he made one punch man, and mob psycho 100. he's known for having awful art, but in return can write incredible stories.
his art has gotten alot better as of recent.

Tib

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Tib Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:31:39 No.93961147 Report

Quoted By: >>93961177

I've been drawing for awhile and I've finally decided to get a start on my comic. I only have a cover page done and I'm still writing my story, but it's a start!
And yes I know the cover isn't the best, it isn't finalized yet, but it's something...

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:35:53 No.93961177 Report

Quoted By: >>93961239

>>93961147
So what's your comic about?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:44:00 No.93961231 Report

Quoted By: >>93961530

>>93961068
Please don't come back until you've studied anatomy and construction and put those lessons to use. Your characters are constantly uncanny valley because they're not quite drawn right, every time.

Tib

Tib Tue 18 Jul 2017 11:44:24 No.93961239 Report

Quoted By: >>93961812

>>93961177

Everyone in the world that my comic takes place in has a gem/jewel, and it represents their souls. Each person wears their gem, mostly, through earrings or rings. The girl in the picture, who I still haven't decided a name on yet, wakes up in a field on a small island. She has no recollection of who she is, except for her name and that the jewel she has isn't hers.
It's mostly just going to be about her traveling around the world trying to find her gem, and figuring out who's gem she has.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 12:20:22 No.93961530 Report

Quoted By: >>93961625 >>93962657

>>93961231
fuck off bones.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 12:30:54 No.93961625 Report

Quoted By: >>93961831

>>93961530
>I don't want to improve

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 12:50:52 No.93961812 Report

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>>93961239
Neat idea! Do the soul gems take on different forms depending on the personality? Like a soldier gets a wet stone that could sharpen his blade or a scholar gets a gem that works like glasses to help him read smaller text?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 12:52:02 No.93961831 Report

Quoted By: >>93962657

>>93961625
I've told you guys this multiple times, I make comics to pass my time, since video games stopped being enjoyable for me.

If there's something that I see that actually needs improvement (my old background for instance used to be awful) I will. but the art quality takes a backseat to just enjoying doing the drawing.

I don't have a patreon, I don't take commissions, I do this as a hobby, not a job.

people ask why I post them if I do it for fun...

what the fuck else am I going to do with them when they're done?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 13:28:04 No.93962270 Report

Quoted By: >>93962383 >>93962657

>>93959448
>unlike you i actually care about my comics and my characters!
Believe it! I'm Bonesruto Uzamaki and my dream is to become the next Hokage of Webcomics!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 13:38:05 No.93962383 Report

Quoted By: >>93962657

>>93962270
Opps left out some of part of the quote
>unlike you i actually care about my comics and my characters! thats why im going to make it one day and your still going to be stuck here with these... other, so called, webcomic.... """"artist""""

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE

Capeworld !118LTnv3DE Tue 18 Jul 2017 13:55:44 No.93962586 Report

Quoted By: >>93962764

So...what do you guys feel about illustrated text stories? Has anyone tried making something like that, something in-between a webnovel and webcomic?

bones

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bones Tue 18 Jul 2017 14:02:06 No.93962657 Report

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>>93960494

video has 30 minutes left to render in windows movie maker. will post it here once its finished and on YouTube.

>>93962270
>>93962383

what the hell is wrong with you man?

>>93961530

wasn't me.

>>93961831

>all this mental gymnastics to avoid the fact that your art is really bad, you have no style, and couldn't get paid or patreon bucks even if you wanted to, so you try to take the moral high ground by saying you do it for free and for fun when really your in deep denial about how ass terrible bad you are.

am i right or am i right?

marawis !obIZfqTkYI

marawis !obIZfqTkYI Tue 18 Jul 2017 14:10:49 No.93962764 Report

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So this is why people said in the past that we shouldn't give (You)s to bones. How scary.

>>93962586
Erfworld does that time to time, here is an example
http://archives.erfworld.com/Book+3/274
They do either these or normal comic strips, depending on what it's covered. Although it being saved as a .jpg means you won't quote anything without writing it yourself.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 14:17:45 No.93962837 Report

Quoted By:

>>93959448
>BTFOing the creepy uncle
nice, still like bones better than the other 2 retards.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 18 Jul 2017 14:19:20 No.93962860 Report

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Move to the next thread!
>>93962794
>>93962794
>>93962794

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