>>93752948You brought up some things to review, I'll save your picture and screenshot the text and try to look over it beyond just responding.
I guess having Evilyn in that panel was kind of weird.
The cartoony picture does have weird anatomy. I had tried using several examples of cartoon art for inspiration and they had weird anatomy that I experimented with here.
I do try to draw out her body and then add the breasts. Sometimes things look weird, awkward, I make mistakes, or it seems like I intended for a shameless boob shot. It's certainly a lot harder to draw her than if she had smaller breasts. I think in retrospect I wouldn't have had her so busty. But that was kind of a point of the comic, that she's a excessively busty superhero.
Maybe I do focus too much on the women, I'll have to keep that more in mind. I've never thought it was a bad thing if people also liked to see the women in the comic. But it is a bad thing if it's hurting the other elements.
The explanation for the boobs. I did an older comic that was pure fan-service. Then comics later, I decided to restart that old comic and attempt to take that shallow comic and try to make it a semi-plausible superhero comic as a challenge. I thought it would be unique and interesting enough that it might work out.
I wanted to take the really cliche origin- that she got huge boobs when they tried to give her better powers, and follow certain rules- she's viewed as a little abnormal by the other characters, it didn't solve all her problems, it's a complication, it didn't destroy her life, not all the guys are after her, she doesn't have a severe love or hate reaction to the change.
It didn't though turn out the way I expected. Most comments are either from those that like the story but don't like her breasts, or from people who like the breasts but think she seems better suited for nudity.
