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How's Your Webcomic? #366

Anonymous Tue 16 May 05:40:55 2017 No.92424841 View Reply Original Report

Quoted By: >>92429572 >>92433058 >>92443874 >>92458250 >>92459763 >>92462139

You've got a webcomic, right? Share your WIPs, concept art, pages, scripts, story ideas, whatever. Give and get comments and critique.

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Name some favorites about your comic. What's your favorite page you've made so far? Which character of yours do you like the best? And so forth! Name your favorite webcomic/traditional comic as well!

Previous Thread: >>92278899

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 05:42:32 No.92424869 Report

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Scrub Authors GOODIE Bag
Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:
>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
http://www.myscriptfont.com/

>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://www.quickposes.com/pages/timed

>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: http://www.shutterstock.com/

>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
http://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ (surprisingly not a typo)

>Links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV
>Contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#

>DISCORD CHAT going on: https://discord.gg/rXMbdqP

>Wise words from John Cleese:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xPvvPTQaMI

>Invisible Ink:
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf

>Paper Wings
http://chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
https://web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/

>Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
http://www.blambot.com/

>Writing Resources:
http://www.cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf

>Guide to promoting your comic:
http://miss-melee.tumblr.com/post/143483233951/

>Comics for makin' comics!
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/9pf1nwwa92lbp/Comics_for_making_Comics

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Rotten strawbles Tue 16 May 2017 05:57:27 No.92425112 Report

Quoted By: >>92436466 >>92454587

posted the goodie bag this time, good on ya OP

Reposting progress on redesigns

TPDATS

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TPDATS Tue 16 May 2017 06:00:28 No.92425146 Report

Quoted By: >>92425176 >>92454587

>left the notebook where I draw Lido at my uncle's house
Whoops. I'm going back on Wednesday but might have to duck by tomorrow to grab that.

I'm pretty close to done on this one. SAI's been fucking up so that I can't save PNGs directly anymore, so I've been converting from the PSDs, which works alright but is a bit of a jerry-rig.

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 06:02:55 No.92425175 Report

Quoted By: >>92425213 >>92454587

finished this yesterday

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 06:02:56 No.92425176 Report

Quoted By: >>92425203 >>92454587

>>92425146
how long has it been doing that? because I find photoshop starts to choke on pngs from time to time and i just have to reopen the fucker.

TPDATS

TPDATS Tue 16 May 2017 06:04:35 No.92425203 Report

Quoted By: >>92425227 >>92454587

>>92425176
The last few times I opened it. It's also been rejecting me saving it as .sai, with a pretty plain "Saving canvas failed" pop-up.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 06:05:17 No.92425213 Report

Quoted By: >>92425386 >>92454587

>>92425175
saw! sawesome.
you really need to get on that new discord

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 06:06:18 No.92425227 Report

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>>92425203
oh yeah that's pretty significant. boo. guess it's time for a reinstall or something. why must bad glitches happen to good artists.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 06:18:52 No.92425386 Report

Quoted By: >>92425928 >>92438624

>>92425213
I'm on the old discord, what's the difference

pic is draft 1 of one of the coffee mugs

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 06:57:00 No.92425928 Report

Quoted By: >>92427262 >>92429120

>>92425386
my experience in the webcomic land discord.
>@everyone to join voice chat
>@everyone weekly challenge reminder once a day
>@everyone nsfw weekly challenge reminder once a day
>split web comic posts and general art posts into two different channels for some reason.
>people advertising their own shitty servers
>sitting by, watching assholes piss on rookies, driving away a few of them.

only redeeming factor is not having bots, and the old midnight readings of cntl/alt/del

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 07:04:20 No.92426011 Report

Quoted By: >>92426229

Been fucking around with a copy/paste jam comic lately while my PC is being fixed.

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boysland_crew Tue 16 May 2017 07:11:24 No.92426076 Report

Quoted By: >>92426229 >>92426247 >>92440808

Hey guys, we got a new chapter of Boys Land up!
We're starting to get into some exciting stuff

http://boysland.thewebcomic.com/archive/#ch_98870

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 07:29:25 No.92426229 Report

Quoted By: >>92426530

>>92426011
you get points for the title
>>92426076
you are great!!!

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Rotten strawbles Tue 16 May 2017 07:32:03 No.92426247 Report

Quoted By: >>92440616

>>92426076
I really like this. will share around.

boysland_crew

boysland_crew Tue 16 May 2017 08:00:08 No.92426530 Report

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>>92426229

Wow! Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far.

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Nessie Tue 16 May 2017 08:55:50 No.92427019 Report

Quoted By: >>92429017

tfw you take a break for one week and forget how to draw comics

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 09:23:36 No.92427262 Report

Quoted By: >>92427360 >>92427835 >>92435098

>>92425928
sure, but what's going on in the other one that I should be there for

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 09:35:11 No.92427360 Report

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>>92427262
Capybaras are going on. It's mostly chill and friendly.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 10:00:19 No.92427589 Report

Quoted By: >>92427835

>>92427360
What's the name of other chat?

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 10:21:27 No.92427804 Report

Quoted By: >>92427835 >>92427909

:^)

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Rotten strawbles Tue 16 May 2017 10:24:20 No.92427835 Report

Quoted By: >>92427941 >>92429117

I finished this cancer, and started playing stardew valley rather than working.

>>92427262
not that anon but
>It's more rookie friendly,
>a lot smaller population/less channels, less of a backlog to check on (I'm not joking when I say the pet posting channel is the most active.)
>Mods hold off on the @everyones, there's maybe 1 a week

There's a bot which I was against adding, but I forgot it was there until writing this out so It isn't too bad.

>>92427589
Right now it's just called hyw
https://discord.gg/a34FHz

>>92427804
this is fantastic

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 10:33:50 No.92427909 Report

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>>92427804
accurate

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 10:37:19 No.92427941 Report

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>>92427835
You're not anon at all, actually. Regardless, why are there two now? Wasn't one insufferable enough? Who's on the other one that is not in wcl?

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Rotten strawbles Tue 16 May 2017 10:54:10 No.92428079 Report

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>>92427941
I was saying I WASNT that anon he was replying to.

the second one was made cause the server owner didn't like webcomic land.

I don't like webcomic land as well so I joined this one.

I don't know why that anon is trying to shill the server when we have a fine population right now, but I do wish pet posting wasn't the only active channel so I guess the shilling is fine.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 11:00:42 No.92428135 Report

Quoted By: >>92428165 >>92432341 >>92441165 >>92455651

>>92428079
I guess wcl became a bit draconian, I remember when Scribbs got the hammer, we all voted for it, then I heard dewd got banned without even asking the rest, and who knows how many others, I was long gone by then, I'm sure I'm banned too.

Is the other private too?

Rotten strawbles

Rotten strawbles Tue 16 May 2017 11:03:56 No.92428165 Report

Quoted By: >>92428253 >>92428806

>>92428135
it isn't private, the link just isn't posted to much.

I left WCL a few months ago, it was too toxic for me, and towards me. since then working on my comic has become a lot more fun.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 11:17:01 No.92428253 Report

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>>92428165
that's the spirit, keep doing you and having fun. don't listen to the haters

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 12:10:46 No.92428806 Report

Quoted By: >>92429522

>>92428165
Shut the fuck up Mabel, your content was criticized and you were too autistic to handle it because you spent a lot of time on it

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 12:30:15 No.92429017 Report

Quoted By: >>92437984

>>92427019
Looks good as always! any idea on when your going to start your other projects?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 12:40:40 No.92429117 Report

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>>92427835
You seriously need to work on your feet, dude. That and your forearms are what's holding you back from being decent-tier.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 12:40:50 No.92429120 Report

Quoted By: >>92429423

>>92425928
>sitting by, watching assholes piss on rookies, driving away a few of them
"I don't want actual critique, I just want people to praise me!"
I could even point fingers at specific people.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 13:07:43 No.92429423 Report

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>>92429120
No one's stopping you.

PipSQK

PipSQK Tue 16 May 2017 13:10:11 No.92429452 Report

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This is one of the main reasons I don't talk much in social media (Discord)... no offense to webcomic land (I usually lurk to find interesting pieces of art to look at) and the other place well I just don't know if I should bother joining...

I feel if I start chatting on these servers and spend too much time there, that I'll spend less time actually getting better at my craft...

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Rotten strawbles Tue 16 May 2017 13:15:07 No.92429522 Report

Quoted By: >>92430099 >>92430171 >>92430510 >>92437556 >>92437901

>>92428806
thinking I ignore/hate crit is retarded
It helps me make my comics better, I redrew days of work just
cause someone here thought it could be better, I have the screenshots of their posts
because what they said has pushed me through not having motivation to redo this fucking page.

I left because that chats members made what I have done to be a waste of time
I've spent months locked away in my room drawing these stupid pictures
trying to make something I could be proud of/enjoy reading.
when I got here, I was drawing circles on top of triangles.
A year and a half later, I can actually be somewhat proud of what ive created.

but then the conversation would come up
>it would start with someone criticizing the art
>Id explain where that problem came from, someone would say i'm not handling crit right, even though id say I would try to fix it
>more and more people would pile up and try to tell me i'm doing it wrong,
>then they would tell me I haven't improved since day one, some saying I've gotten worse

I love what I work on, I've never put more thought into anything than Pam, and Hiroes story
I do it to pass my time, I do this cause I want to make stuff I think is cool.
I hate my life, but drawing keeps me doing.
I'm proud of it.
before I left that chat, I couldn't feel proud of any of it.

fuck anyone in that chat, or in this general who thought It
was okay to make this last year out to be completely worthless

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 13:19:25 No.92429572 Report

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>>92424841
I got the protagonist and antagonist created, to adegree. Now I just need a story. I'm thinking of doing something Samurai Jackish with a technologically achronic setting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 13:55:57 No.92430099 Report

Quoted By: >>92430185 >>92439914 >>92505948

>>92429522
mate, a hug and a kiss don't make an artist draw better.
a slap on the face to reality and a drawing guide does.
Take me for example, im Vutiendung. few month ago, I couldn't even draw right.
I have no style
I can't draw anatomy right
No one like my stuff
Zero fanart
Can't paint a decent background
and I have no understanding of the color theory whatsoever.
but after criticism, I take it and learn from it rather than think people hate me.
Now I can draw even better than before and it only took few months.
I got fanart
I can draw muscle, fat, thin, short and tall people
I was able to get a style of my own
I can draw and design costume and make money out of it
I was able to paint and get a better understanding of colors.
And all that was accomplished by listening to what other have to say and not just dismissed it. Mabel, you got potential, don't waste it like this, come back to WCL, I and the rest will glad to have you back and would help you improve, if you need encouragement, we will give you.
And my friend, don't hate on your life, you got talent, and you should be proud of it, but you can make it even better than before, just listen and learn, I promise you, you will become better than before and when you look back, you will not regret swallowing your pride.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:01:42 No.92430171 Report

Quoted By: >>92435950 >>92439914

>>92429522
>then they would tell me I haven't improved since day one, some saying I've gotten worse

Are you just trying to get a pity party? That never happened, I even specifically remember telling you that you had made a lot of good improvement, also if you had not wanted critique you could've said pls don't crit me guys I'm working on it, because we're trying to help each other get better by giving constructive criticism but no instead you would get really rude to most the members.

Inb4 h8r, I dont hate you strawbles I just wish you would stop being a spaz when it came to critique and advice, you could get really good and it seems leaving helped so good for you, but seriously stop the full muh webcomicland boogeyman thats middle school shit.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:02:01 No.92430176 Report

Quoted By: >>92430195 >>92430541 >>92433146

A bit of a problem /co/. I really want to draw my comic. I really do and can. But. I want to write shojo animu shit because ive actually liked some shoujo ive read in the past. And holy fuck, i cringe at every single panel i put down. Last night, i finished only 4 panels, and needed to lie down in bed and to reflect upon how cringy and weebish it was.

How do i get over this? I still like the overrall plot of my story. But just the beginning, makes me want to cry like I have to be drunk while drawing it.

PipSQK

PipSQK Tue 16 May 2017 14:02:35 No.92430185 Report

Quoted By: >>92430208

>>92430099
He's somewhat correct, you have to be willing to get harshly criticized in art.

Man learns from his mistakes and the experience of others. To be honest I haven't been harshly critiqued on here that's why I know that I need to get better.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:03:35 No.92430195 Report

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>>92430176
redraw it, see how well you can improve it this time

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:04:56 No.92430208 Report

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>>92430185
Thanks, man, for agree with me.
You will forget a compliment as soon as it pass you but a punch in the gut, you will remember it forever

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:27:09 No.92430510 Report

Quoted By: >>92431007 >>92439914

>>92429522
Congratulations retard, your shitty anime ripoff style got a little bit more refined over an entire fucking year. Its still the same, the glaring issues still exist.

I hope your new hugbox will see through your bullshit like everyone else does. All you did is prove my point.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:28:53 No.92430541 Report

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>>92430176

There's nothing that says you have to be all-or-nothing for one particular style or story or method of delivering your imagery to your readers.

Frankly, while I love anime and manga myself, I find I'm also disenfranchised with an awful lot of it. Sugary sweet moe bullshit is generally awful..

So take some of the elements you do like, and try to combine them with elements from other styles/methods of story telling to make it fit better.

People tend to forget that that is what storytelling is about. Making something your own and telling a story you want to tell, out of the things you like. Not making a 1:1 of something that already exists, or pulling whatever shit you think no one else has ever done before just in an effort to hope someone hasn't done it before.

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Megawacky Max Tue 16 May 2017 14:52:12 No.92430961 Report

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Wilfreda the Wanna-Be Witch 117: Victor has some problems with homework.

Mostly a copy-paste strip this time, but I wanted to focus on the dialogue. Michelle is a very patient teacher.

Read more Wilfreda at http://wilfredacomic.tumblr.com/

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 14:55:05 No.92431007 Report

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>>92430510
Damn, son. Calm down

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:03:50 No.92432310 Report

Quoted By: >>92432627 >>92436688

Working on concept piece about a community of little people (think Borrowers/Littles) that's devastated by the rotting corpse of a "fallen God." I want to set some hard limits on this one when it comes to size, format, and length. Maybe 100 pages or so max.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:05:16 No.92432341 Report

Quoted By: >>92455432

>>92428135
wow, Scribs got perma'd?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:19:39 No.92432627 Report

Quoted By: >>92432728

>>92432310
interesting but maybe a bit too similar to beautiful darkness?

also if that's the corpse in the background then the eye shouldn't be pointing in that direction, i think. it's not glazed enough.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:24:35 No.92432728 Report

Quoted By: >>92432768

>>92432627
Beautiful Darkness is a bit of inspiration, and the shot is totally stolen from End of Evangelion, but narratively it's closer to Gulliver's Travels. The little people are wandering refugees and along the way run into thinly veiled allegories of modern day racism, nihilism, xenophobia, and bureaucracy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:26:39 No.92432768 Report

Quoted By: >>92432890

>>92432728
i'd have to see the full story to judge it but probably but honestly so far i have no reason to expect it'd be anything but a beautiful darkness clone. so perhaps think of a better way to introduce this.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:31:56 No.92432890 Report

Quoted By: >>92432925 >>92432957

>>92432768
The only similarities are a human corpse and little people.

But honestly I am not worried about being thought of as a clone, ripoff, whatever. A lot of stories start off similar, it's the journey that separates them. Like every cyberpunk looks like Blade Runner in the opening scenes.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:33:25 No.92432925 Report

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>>92432890
it's just something to keep in mind, i'm still interested in this so good luck!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:34:48 No.92432957 Report

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>>92432890
post more if you have it, i'm curious about the corpse.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:39:43 No.92433058 Report

Quoted By: >>92433123

>>92424841
i'm a huge faggot and want to make a webcomic, but don't know how to start or where to post it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:43:22 No.92433123 Report

Quoted By: >>92433708 >>92433730

>>92433058
post some art and we'll tell you where to go from there.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 16:44:56 No.92433146 Report

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>>92430176
Do you mind posting it? What part of it is embarrassing? Is it the dialogue? Plot? Design? Story?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:01:30 No.92433491 Report

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>people last thread thinking BD could be redeemed

"I want to know what she thinks we're going to do with her... Because I want to do something even worse"

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:12:33 No.92433708 Report

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>>92433123

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:13:54 No.92433730 Report

Quoted By: >>92434656

>>92433123

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:15:07 No.92433756 Report

Quoted By: >>92433881

>>92433708
Bottom left isn't terrible for the style you've got going on, but you should start by studying art a bit more seriously and practicing more. I'd suggest Hampton's book on figure drawing, or Draw a Box if you want to start from the absolute basics.

Also, you should probably invest in a tablet if you don't have one.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:22:03 No.92433881 Report

Quoted By: >>92434122

>>92433756
thanks for the advice.
yeah i should get a tablet, i've been using my laptops touch screen to make shitty ms paint drawings

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:34:43 No.92434122 Report

Quoted By: >>92434185

>>92433881
Yeah, that definitely won't cut it. A nice quality intuos tablet will only run you about 100 bucks, but it'll definitely be worth it if you're serious about drawing a webcomic. A lot of people will tell you that you HAVE to start by studying realism, and that's certainly true if you want to see the best results, but honestly you can just keep drawing what you enjoy as long as you learn the proper foundations of construction and anatomy. In my experience, learning as you go and then focusing your studies on the areas you're lacking in is infinitely more enjoyable than grinding on fruit for a year.

Note that this isn't giving you the go ahead to just draw chibi stuff forever, but for you to start incorporating what you learn into your art gradually as your eyes become better trained to spotting your mistakes.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:36:52 No.92434168 Report

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:38:01 No.92434185 Report

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>>92434122
aight

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:38:09 No.92434187 Report

Quoted By: >>92434213 >>92434355 >>92435950

>>92434168
how much of a gaffe is to just pause your comic and start a new one midway through?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:39:18 No.92434213 Report

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>>92434187

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:40:36 No.92434252 Report

Quoted By: >>92434275

>>92434213

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:41:45 No.92434275 Report

Quoted By: >>92434305 >>92434355

>>92434252

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:43:36 No.92434305 Report

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>>92434275

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:44:55 No.92434326 Report

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EtMotL

EtMotL Tue 16 May 2017 17:46:21 No.92434355 Report

Quoted By: >>92434423

>>92434187
If you're in the middle of an ongoing serial that had the last part end in a cliffhanger: a big one.

If it's individual self-contained gag strips with low continuity and any storylines have wrapped up: not at all.

If you're all out of ideas for Old Thing and are bursting with enthusiasm for New Thing, then go and do New Thing.

>>92434275
I think panels 2 and 3 could use some movement lines and sound effects (like "huk huk" "Hwah!"), but otherwise I'm liking the look of this series.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:48:22 No.92434399 Report

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>>92434326

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:49:31 No.92434423 Report

Quoted By: >>92434466

>>92434355
yeah, that was preety much what i though

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 17:51:07 No.92434466 Report

Quoted By: >>92435978

>>92434423
and that's it for now

Juice

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Juice Tue 16 May 2017 17:56:29 No.92434590 Report

Quoted By: >>92439823

Latest page is up.

PipSQK

PipSQK Tue 16 May 2017 17:59:41 No.92434656 Report

Quoted By:

>>92433730
Kek
Good dammit /ic/! This meme will never stop.

>>92433730
I find it odd (and amusing) I mention this book once and now its /hyw/'s "git gud" Bible.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 18:22:14 No.92435098 Report

Quoted By:

>>92427262
it's actually HYW instead of piggybacking on some bigger thing, so we actually recognize each other from here

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:00:38 No.92435950 Report

Quoted By:

>>92430171
>That never happened
actually it did. we have some shitposters in here who tend to say that about whomever they think it will get the goat of. And it often works.
>>92434187
I've been enjoying the hell out of it. and not just because the kid is a cute scruffy little guy and I feel for him. though I do wonder why the mom ACTS like a bird when, as she put it, she's "a bird now"

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:02:11 No.92435978 Report

Quoted By: >>92436195

>>92434466
oh fuck, we're actually going to find out huh? I like how your comic doesn't just stay mindlessly funny, but goes places. you also toe a lot of lines that probably should, but don't, piss me off.. because of how you do it

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:11:50 No.92436195 Report

Quoted By: >>92436233

>>92435978
> you also toe a lot of lines that probably should, but don't, piss me off
like what?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:13:34 No.92436233 Report

Quoted By:

>>92436195
oh I think you know.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:24:52 No.92436466 Report

Quoted By:

>>92425112
>literally joins the crew

Is he named Rorenol Rozzo?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:32:01 No.92436645 Report

Quoted By:

A panel. I've had little time to actually work on my comic. Between school and work, I've been getting some time in, but not enough. A page a day is my goal, but I've been falling behind.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 19:33:43 No.92436688 Report

Quoted By: >>92438371

>>92432310
sounds great. nice art, too. are you going to use water colors for the webcomic too?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:09:04 No.92437556 Report

Quoted By: >>92437646 >>92437848 >>92439914

>>92429522
You do ignore crit though, people were telling you last year to stop doing vertical speech bubbles and you were still doing them a couple weeks ago and people called you out on it again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:13:18 No.92437646 Report

Quoted By: >>92437848

>>92437556
Choosing not to obey crit doesn't mean you ignored it.
That said, yeah, the vertical speech bubbles really don't work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:21:12 No.92437848 Report

Quoted By: >>92438291 >>92438754

>>92437556
>>92437646
vertical bubbles are fine, it's called experimenting

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:23:23 No.92437898 Report

Quoted By:

bump

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:23:31 No.92437901 Report

Quoted By: >>92438639 >>92439914

>>92429522
>progress
>implying there's ANY progress

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:24:43 No.92437935 Report

Quoted By: >>92441298 >>92441322 >>92441809 >>92486065

took some time off from my shitty batman comic i posted a week or two ago to practice drawing. this is a lady with boobies I drew today.

Nessie

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Nessie Tue 16 May 2017 20:26:19 No.92437984 Report

Quoted By: >>92441547

>>92429017
Thanks. Other projects are still in the planning stages, still working on scripts on thumbnails but they're coming along

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:39:37 No.92438291 Report

Quoted By:

>>92437848
there's nothing wrong with experimenting, but not every experiment is a success

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:42:45 No.92438371 Report

Quoted By:

>>92436688
Yes, but mainly because I don't know how to work with anything but traditional media

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:53:55 No.92438624 Report

Quoted By: >>92440111

>>92425386
The difference is Cold Fusion made it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:54:24 No.92438639 Report

Quoted By:

>>92437901
No-one likes you, Dobson. Go away.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 20:59:19 No.92438754 Report

Quoted By: >>92438803

>>92437848
They're fine when you're writing in kanji which is read vertically. Not in English, which is read horizontally.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:00:53 No.92438803 Report

Quoted By: >>92438938

>>92438754
looks fine to me

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:06:46 No.92438938 Report

Quoted By: >>92439064 >>92439099 >>92440157

>>92438803
It's not necessarily the vertical shape of the bubble themselves but the execution. The vertical bubbles cause the words to be as low as one per line which confuses most English readers. We're not used to reading vertically. It slows us down. They could make the font smaller and it could work out.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:11:34 No.92439064 Report

Quoted By:

>>92438938
Eh, personally I can read it just fine. I don't think it's nearly as big of an issue as you're making it out to be.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:12:52 No.92439099 Report

Quoted By:

>>92438938
sounds like a personal issue, most people are used to stuff like this from manga. it's not an impediment

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:41:49 No.92439823 Report

Quoted By:

>>92434590
is that lucio?

LEPARADOXE

LEPARADOXE Tue 16 May 2017 21:45:28 No.92439914 Report

Quoted By: >>92441150

>>92430099
>>92430171
>>92430510
>>92437556
>>92437901
post your art then you can talk

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Tue 16 May 2017 21:53:31 No.92440111 Report

Quoted By:

>>92438624
I know this is some trollmarolls, but just for the record.. not only did I not make it, I don't know how. i barely understand Discord or any technology made after 2003. Credit ought to go where it's due

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:54:59 No.92440157 Report

Quoted By:

>>92438938
I wouldn't say confuses, it just ends up choppy
like
this
when
it's
one
word
per
line
the cadence is totally lost.
By all means if you've planned out a great panel and there's no room left for anything but a vertical bubble, go for it. But don't go out of your way to do it, and don't use the excuse of another writing system using it, that doesn't wash.

or hey, if you just WANT to, yknow, own that. I'll back you up.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 21:58:18 No.92440250 Report

Quoted By: >>92443001 >>92444621

https://foxandcatadventures.tumblr.com/

I usually make overly dark stuff but this is a webcomic about a cat and a fox living on a hut in the middle of an ocean. They will go on adventures soon.
I can't draw if my life depended on it so I keep it as naive and simple as possible. I make it in Paint.

boysland_crew

boysland_crew Tue 16 May 2017 22:11:00 No.92440616 Report

Quoted By:

>>92426247

You're the best! We really appreciate it!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:18:28 No.92440808 Report

Quoted By: >>92440892 >>92442562

>>92426076

Holy shit you update a lot, that's a lot of pages man. I like that. More to read at a time is cool.

But why should I read this? Besides quantity what does it offer?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:21:26 No.92440892 Report

Quoted By: >>92442562

>>92440808
allow someone who isnt that guy to give an unbiased review:
it's just FUN. it's a taste of saturday mornings in the early to mid 00s when every channel had a few toyetic anime they'd gotten the license for, and you were trying to piece together how their universe worked, since the internet wasn't really that good at telling you yet.
the action is great, the comedy is effective without being cliche, and so far the pacing is alright. and yeah the update schedule is super impressive

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:32:09 No.92441150 Report

Quoted By:

>>92439914
k http://vutiendung.deviantart.com/

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Tue 16 May 2017 22:32:45 No.92441165 Report

Quoted By: >>92441779 >>92442056 >>92442078 >>92442103 >>92454549 >>92455432

>>92428135
No, I actually remember getting banned from the discord by miss melee i think for talking about how depressed I was at the time.

It's the stupidest fucking reason for getting banned ever.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:38:48 No.92441298 Report

Quoted By: >>92443581

>>92437935
My fucking nigga hell yea this is the type of progress I want to see from you. Keep it up!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:39:51 No.92441322 Report

Quoted By: >>92443581

>>92437935
To clarify that face needs work though! But still, I see you.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:49:32 No.92441547 Report

Quoted By:

>>92437984
Looking good, can't wait.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 22:58:50 No.92441779 Report

Quoted By: >>92442169

>>92441165
As far as I can tell, people don't really miss you there. Just saying.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:00:01 No.92441809 Report

Quoted By: >>92443581

>>92437935
Reminder that the more lines you add to a woman's face, the older she looks. You should also try to round it out a lot more in the future if you're going for a more typical image of beauty. A squareish man-jaw would work fine if you're going for a brutish warrior woman though. Also, shrink the eyes. they're too big for the style you have going. You shouldn't mix anime with pseudo-realism/caricature. Overall nice improvements though!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:09:05 No.92442056 Report

Quoted By: >>92442113 >>92442169 >>92454549

>>92441165
Nobody wanted to hear you blog about how you wanted to kill yourself.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:10:05 No.92442078 Report

Quoted By: >>92442169

>>92441165

It wasn't him.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:11:26 No.92442103 Report

Quoted By: >>92454549

>>92441165
I guess that's fitting for the fucking stupidest member that was in there

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:11:50 No.92442113 Report

Quoted By: >>92454549

>>92442056
Nobody wanted to hear about wanting to kill yourself nor about hairy pusspuss

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:12:15 No.92442125 Report

Quoted By: >>92442836

C-can we please get back to talking about comics instead of circlejerking?

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Tue 16 May 2017 23:14:05 No.92442169 Report

Quoted By: >>92442423

>>92441779
I really don't expect them to, I hated more than half od the people there by the end of my time there anywho.

Either way, it doesn't seem like those people I'm thinking of really appear here anymore.

>>92442056
I wasn't planning on doing so, I was just talking about how I felt down in the dumps that day.

>>92442078
Meh.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:22:53 No.92442358 Report

Quoted By: >>92442418

Finished my piece for the newly released issue of Premier Comics (Which you should read at http://premiercomics.com/archives/1414) and got some feedback from the recent dump of the issue on here that my entry seemed sort of unpolished and unremarkable, which I feel is fair.

At this point I suppose I need to figure out a way to ramp up the work I'm doing while being able to produce it within a reasonable timeframe...Anyone have any experience with this? I'm planning on launching this as a webcomic sometime over the next few months and being able to produce content within a reasonably short span of time is going to be a big factor.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:25:07 No.92442418 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442358
>extremely underrepresented pterosaur, the kind with the weird circle at the end of the beak
awesome
>those legs and feet and the two-fingered wings
.. anyway I like your comics and I'm glad this kind of shit happens. also nice job on the buildin's

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:25:16 No.92442423 Report

Quoted By: >>92442564 >>92442607 >>92442969

>>92442169
Regardless, most people are in there to have a good time between working on their comic, art or writing.

Someone coming in being all dramatic and depressing isn't really enjoyable to be around.
Same thing with how Mabel always blog posted personal stuff and emotions all of the time.
Having to share a chat with that isn't fun.

boysland_crew

boysland_crew Tue 16 May 2017 23:31:17 No.92442562 Report

Quoted By:

>>92440808

I feel weird answering this about my own comic because since it's mine, I can't really give you a truly honest answer because I'm too close to it.

But here goes; it's an homage to the stuff we grew up watching in the late 90's and early 2000's mixed with saturday morning cartoons and shounen manga. It's literally everything we like. (We being the artist and myself.)

>>92440892

Thank you so much! I really appreciate this review even though it wasn't really meant for me. I would love to hear any critiques from you specifically if you have the time. Either way thanks for reading!

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:31:18 No.92442564 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442423
it's kinda hilarious how similar they are, down to their need to namefag.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:32:50 No.92442607 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442423
that's why this discord has an offtopic room as well as a 'webcomic autism' room for posting your emotional shit. most of the time though people PM that shit if I encourage them to talk about some shit while I have the time to listen.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:42:53 No.92442836 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442125
No. This is where we are now.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:48:14 No.92442959 Report

Quoted By: >>92443001 >>92443119 >>92443152 >>92443760 >>92447819 >>92454479 >>92454630 >>92479209

>tfw you spend weeks on loomis and you still draw like shit
what's the secret?

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Tue 16 May 2017 23:48:33 No.92442969 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442423
Well, I mean, it's not like I constantly did it, it was just a one time thing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:49:41 No.92443001 Report

Quoted By: >>92443200

>>92442959
Draw like shit and just call it your style like >>92440250 does.

Just do your thing, man.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:54:26 No.92443119 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442959
Don't just study Loomis, draw stuff you enjoy and want to draw as well. Plus, improving your art could take months to years of work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:55:45 No.92443152 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442959
Feedback is your best friend. Get feedback from people that are better than you, so they can tell you what you're doing wrong, because odds are they had the same bad habits/mistakes you're having at one point.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 16 May 2017 23:57:38 No.92443200 Report

Quoted By: >>92443387 >>92444051 >>92444121

>>92443001
Why are we shitting on each other so much in this thread, just make some damn comics.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:05:28 No.92443387 Report

Quoted By: >>92444351

>>92443200
Too many people keep fighting advice in an advice thread. People get pissed at said behavior.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:12:16 No.92443581 Report

Quoted By:

>>92441298
>>92441322
>>92441809
appreciate it immensely guys. I've been really trying to get better and you definitely gave me good stuff to keep in mind going forward so thank you!

I'll keep popping in with some progress as i can make it.

LEPARADOXE

LEPARADOXE Wed 17 May 2017 00:19:28 No.92443760 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442959
you need to get taste and make your bad drawings as appealing as posible

bones

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bones Wed 17 May 2017 00:23:54 No.92443874 Report

Quoted By: >>92468745

>>92424841

hey every body i just got finished making a brand new page of FATES CHAOS! I hope yall like it! I just finished it literally a few minutes ago, so its super hot and fresh! ^^

heres a video of me making this page: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b2M2lG6RYr8

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:24:16 No.92443886 Report

Quoted By: >>92444359 >>92444680 >>92444749 >>92444800 >>92445484 >>92449016

What does /co/ think of this webcomic?

A boy falls in love with a girl.

Unable to confess, he is gifted by a deus ex machina with the girl's phone number. Never minding the strange area code, he immediately calls her, and is overjoyed to find out that she has a crush on him as well.

But, the next day, when he recounts the previous day's confessions to the girl, she only looks at him with a perplexed expression. After some investigation, he finds out that the girl he called is not the same girl he fell in love with. In fact, she doesn't exist in this universe at all. She is the girl's alternate universe counterpart, who has fallen in love with the MC's own AU self, who too is blissfully unaware of her crush.

Hijinks ensue as the two strike up a deal to give each other their darkest, most private secrets in order to equip the other with the weapons they need to conquer the heart of their other selves. While the two chase their respective loved ones, DRAMA ensues as they begin to fall in love with each other instead and question the NATURE of LOVE.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:29:21 No.92444051 Report

Quoted By: >>92444121

>>92443200
some are trying to get a rise out of others
others are trying to make the threads as good as possible
still others are trying to modify what some of the others did, to try to temper it a bit, so it doesn't get too carried away.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:31:19 No.92444121 Report

Quoted By:

>>92444051
>>92443200
Actually, I called myself shit. Because it's true.
I still enjoy what I do and it's great to see others like it as well even though it is not "up there" regarding the talent.

LEPARADOXE

LEPARADOXE Wed 17 May 2017 00:38:24 No.92444351 Report

Quoted By: >>92445459

>>92443387
maybe you're giving bad advice

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:38:33 No.92444359 Report

Quoted By: >>92444421 >>92444453 >>92444716 >>92449016

>>92443886
At first I was like
>A boy falls in love with a girl.
>MEH
But then your storyline actually sounds really interesting if you can write it. Your art is nice, too. I'll happily read it, ya weeb.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:40:14 No.92444421 Report

Quoted By:

>>92444359
that's not the comic's creator, but it is a pretty good comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:41:15 No.92444453 Report

Quoted By:

>>92444359
It's a meme you dip

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:46:22 No.92444621 Report

Quoted By: >>92444699

>>92440250
A comic on /hyw/ I actually like, that doesn't happen everyday. Good job.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:48:15 No.92444680 Report

Quoted By:

>>92443886

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:48:57 No.92444699 Report

Quoted By: >>92444731

>>92444621
I think you're making a compliment. Thanks.
What is /hyw/? Did I get meme'd on?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:49:19 No.92444716 Report

Quoted By:

>>92444359
Found the newfag.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:49:51 No.92444731 Report

Quoted By: >>92444781 >>92445295

>>92444699

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:50:22 No.92444749 Report

Quoted By:

>>92443886
Already a thing.

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3206139/1/
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/keit-ai-finds-a-way/
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebOriginal/KeitAi
http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/keit-ai/list?title_no=36825

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:51:18 No.92444781 Report

Quoted By: >>92445295

>>92444731
pls don do this to me

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 00:51:44 No.92444800 Report

Quoted By:

>>92443886
Has this been updated yet? Post the link at least.

http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/keit-ai/list?title_no=36825

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 01:07:27 No.92445295 Report

Quoted By:

>>92444731
>>92444781
Oh, shit, I read it as "A comic /hyw/ would like". Now I feel stupid.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 01:13:14 No.92445459 Report

Quoted By:

>>92444351
Maybe so. Then ignore it. Quit fighting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 01:13:53 No.92445484 Report

Quoted By:

>>92443886
Is this still a bannable offense on /a/?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 01:59:43 No.92446820 Report

Quoted By: >>92446866 >>92447733 >>92448264

Let's breathe some life back into the purpose of this thread. What are your methods for designing characters' outfits? Personally, I like trolling through Pinterest to find new fashion and designs I feel would fit well.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:01:31 No.92446866 Report

Quoted By:

>>92446820
it's over jimmy, let it die

Dupe

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Dupe Wed 17 May 2017 02:27:14 No.92447580 Report

Quoted By: >>92447799 >>92453830

trying to make a basic "shape" for my comic's Logo. Trying to decide on a subheading for it as well. So far I got.

-Vegabond: Cracking the Omnisphere
-Vegabond: Sphere of influence
-Vegabond: Initiation

If you have any ideas that would pertain to snakes, outer space, all seeing eyes, black holes, spheres, illuminati, a villain named GRAWLLUX, starting a new way of life or polar opposites I'd like to hear them.

I would just call it "vegabond" but I have a bit more planned for this universe and don't want any of them to be definitive or have a chronological order.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:32:14 No.92447733 Report

Quoted By:

>>92446820
I tend to zero in on a single thing, like a particular kind of collar or boots or something offbeat like capelets/caplets, and then make a note to myself to start integrating those into otherwise normal outfits. the best clothes are only partially offbeat.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:34:29 No.92447799 Report

Quoted By: >>92448145

>>92447580
what does the subheading represent this time? also I thought the comic's name was duplex
hmm things relating to snakes and crazy cosmic space shit... i feel like you can work ophidian into there, possibly combining it with something

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:35:09 No.92447819 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442959
>weeks
That's not a long time, my dude. you gotta be patient with yourself and accept learning as a process, don't pin your gold star on one method or a fantasy of success. study techniques, study different artists that you like, study life, study form, and place pencil to paper (or pen to tablet, whatever) at least 5 times a day.

again:
>weeks

learning something hard takes years.

Dupe

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Dupe Wed 17 May 2017 02:45:49 No.92448145 Report

Quoted By: >>92448192

>>92447799
I've been posting stuff from my comic project Vegabond, and my animation project Forgotten Gaming. My username is Duplexide though and my narrative/mascot character is named Dupe. I used to use Duplex as a name on here before I solidified all that.

And as for the subheading the story is about a small group of people who run away from their homes in search of a better life among a sparse faction called the vegabonds that balances between two massive opposing factions with opposite agendas. The group's plans are ruined by a horrible snake like beast called Grawllux who much like them is trying to join a faction except his is much more malignant and evil and is a sort of space Illuminati that's trying to control everything through surveillance and time alteration.

So something that kind of ties into that rough plot is what I'm looking for.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:47:55 No.92448192 Report

Quoted By: >>92448340

>>92448145
I just could have sworn we'd seen a different logo before, and the name vegabond isn't ringing any bells.
>that description
sphere of influence, then. definitely.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:50:22 No.92448264 Report

Quoted By:

>>92446820
Most of my characters are teenaged girls so I used to go to Wet Seal but it died. I guess Forever 21 will do.

Dupe

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Dupe Wed 17 May 2017 02:52:31 No.92448340 Report

Quoted By: >>92448538

>>92448192
You're probably thinking of this animation background I did for Forgotten Gaming a while back.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 02:59:20 No.92448538 Report

Quoted By: >>92448759

>>92448340
yeah that was it
so that's basically just for the website, not for the comic itself then?

Dupe

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Dupe Wed 17 May 2017 03:07:39 No.92448759 Report

Quoted By: >>92449144 >>92449237 >>92506310

>>92448538
That background is for some partially animated game reviews I'm doing with the same visual aesthetic as the comic I have planned. It's called Forgotten Gaming and in it I'll be reviewing my immense collection of shareware and abandonware games from the 90s. After I get some kind of following for my art via the game reviews I'll be launching the Vegabond comic itself. It's a "quest" style comic that needs audience input so doing it before having any kind of significant readership would just be depressing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 03:17:37 No.92449016 Report

Quoted By: >>92449129

>>92443886
>>92444359
>there are people on this board right now who don't know about the Keit-ai meme

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 03:22:13 No.92449129 Report

Quoted By:

>>92449016
/co/ is filled with normans and tumblrites

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 03:22:54 No.92449144 Report

Quoted By: >>92449455

>>92448759
that's.. a really clever idea. kinda like how there were a few homestar cartoons before the strong bad emails started up

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 03:26:48 No.92449237 Report

Quoted By: >>92449455

>>92448759
nice that you have a plan, keep at it, you're gonna make it. pic unrelated

Dupe

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Dupe Wed 17 May 2017 03:34:54 No.92449455 Report

Quoted By:

>>92449144
>>92449237
Thanks! And yeah, I figure unfortunately there aren't a lot of people who avidly look for webcomics but there are loads of people who watch video game reviews on youtube so it's a viable "advertisement" in a way. And also If I have 2 projects going then I'm twice as likely to have something take off. If the video reviews get popular but the comic doesn't then I still have a successful project on my hands.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 04:30:39 No.92451015 Report

Quoted By:

bump

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

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The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Wed 17 May 2017 04:38:59 No.92451212 Report

Quoted By: >>92451267 >>92451285

Finished this page!

I actually had to cut a page from the script right before I started working on this one.

The origional page 24 was just some stupid fanservice of Annabeth landing on Jack and noticing he has a boner. then awkwardly getting off of him. Either way, this is what page 25 would be. I just switched up some dialouge that reffered to the cut page and fixed up actions that happened and it's like nothing was cut at all.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 04:41:25 No.92451267 Report

Quoted By: >>92451428

>>92451212
cords*
preposterous*
somewhat* one word
courteous*

i'm kind of liking this new anna, whatever's posessing him or her.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 04:42:09 No.92451285 Report

Quoted By: >>92451416

>>92451212
>4 years
>art still an awful mess
this is why you don't neglect your Loomis studies, take heed /hyw/

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 04:48:03 No.92451416 Report

Quoted By:

>>92451285
>Loomis
Are we just going to turn into a second /ic/ now

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Wed 17 May 2017 04:48:26 No.92451428 Report

Quoted By: >>92451486

>>92451267
Well that's good, I wanted annabeth to be the same, but also different at the same time, And I'm glad people are not totally missing red eyed annabeth

Because it's gonna be a few years until we see that again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 04:50:44 No.92451486 Report

Quoted By: >>92451649

>>92451428
I didn't say I didn't miss regular anna, and I don't see any even remote similarities here. I thought the idea was posession or something

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Wed 17 May 2017 04:58:38 No.92451649 Report

Quoted By: >>92451834

>>92451486
This Anna, while still being posessed is stil there own person, just smarter.

But the basics are still there, the slightly longer, but still short temper, addiction to biting, the bloodlust, it's just more mellowed out and calmer than before.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 05:06:10 No.92451834 Report

Quoted By:

>>92451649
oh okay. if you put it that way.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 05:31:54 No.92452418 Report

Quoted By: >>92452530 >>92452815 >>92453359

Working on simplifying character designs. I seem to just be slowly moving towards Douman Seiman style though. Not sure if this is what I want honestly, but at least it's good practice.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 05:37:07 No.92452530 Report

Quoted By:

>>92452418
lmfao

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 05:51:13 No.92452815 Report

Quoted By:

>>92452418
wwell I love the face

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 06:10:33 No.92453173 Report

Quoted By: >>92453265 >>92453590 >>92490175

i made a comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 06:15:51 No.92453265 Report

Quoted By:

>>92453173
snert

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 06:21:01 No.92453359 Report

Quoted By: >>92454139

>>92452418

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 06:35:01 No.92453590 Report

Quoted By:

>>92453173
Heh
I'm liking your stuff so far

Dupe

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Dupe Wed 17 May 2017 06:49:36 No.92453830 Report

Quoted By: >>92454234

>>92447580
Developed this a bit more. subheading is still gibberish for the time being.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:09:50 No.92454139 Report

Quoted By:

>>92453359
waifu

Nessie

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Nessie Wed 17 May 2017 07:19:44 No.92454234 Report

Quoted By: >>92454535 >>92454549 >>92479260

Might as well drop this colored version of a pic of my mc I posted last thread. Colors are very fun but I really want to stick with greyscale for this project

>>92453830
Noice, are the characters for that gibberish actually a code or something?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:39:41 No.92454479 Report

Quoted By: >>92454508

>>92442959
made an accuracy tweak

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:42:02 No.92454508 Report

Quoted By:

>>92454479
Now he's crying tears of joy

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:43:53 No.92454535 Report

Quoted By: >>92454689

>>92454234
Did you draw this? She's beautiful.

>>92454234
Wait, hold on. That's just... no.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:45:40 No.92454549 Report

Quoted By: >>92454689 >>92458170 >>92460308

>>92454234
Nessie?

I leave for one second and you guys do this shit.
>>92442103
Fuck you.>>92442113
Fuck you.>>92442056
FUCK YOU.

>>92441165
You're good, idiot, keep it up, but don't get focused on the fucking details. I tell you every time I come here, god damn it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:48:55 No.92454587 Report

Quoted By:

>>92425112
This fucking rules. You rule.
>>92425146
I can't read this, but it's good. You've got the idea.>>92425175
Good!>>92425176
>>92425203
JHave you tried going slower, idiot?

>>92425213
Don't force things, you fucking idiot.

You're all doing really well, ok?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:52:25 No.92454630 Report

Quoted By: >>92454655

>>92442959
>spend weeks trying to draw some good stuff
>pic related happens

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 07:54:23 No.92454655 Report

Quoted By:

>>92454630
FUCK! I GOTTA GO TO BED! I LEFT MY BOY BY ACCIDENT! I'M SORRY! g-gotta fly

Nessie

Nessie Wed 17 May 2017 07:56:39 No.92454689 Report

Quoted By: >>92454757

>>92454535
Yep, thanks

>>92454549
I'm Household Slime Mold guy, but since I started posting about a second comic here I figured I might as well namefag with my actual handle instead of my comic's name.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:01:00 No.92454757 Report

Quoted By: >>92455097

>>92454689
Hmm. Do you have to say that word? I understand if you do, but it's really okay.

I need to go to bed, okay? You're doing great, and so is, um, um, um, Victoria.

You're all doing really well, okay? You're going to make really wonderful things. I love you all, but I can't be here anymore.

Sayonara. You know where to find me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:08:30 No.92454848 Report

Quoted By: >>92454932

what the fuck is going on

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:08:47 No.92454850 Report

Quoted By: >>92455097

What's your opinion on newspaper-style half tone coloring?

Can a webcomic pull it off well? Or does it come across as being too tryhard?

Is there a secret to it because I want to start doing color but I can't make it look good

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:14:04 No.92454932 Report

Quoted By: >>92455035 >>92455574

>>92454848
a triggered autist is going full retard to try to manage his butthurt

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:20:52 No.92455035 Report

Quoted By:

>>92454932
I forgot to eat today. I forgot to eat. But my... my boy is making me eggs. Okay? He's a good boy. He's a little guy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:24:41 No.92455097 Report

Quoted By: >>92461360 >>92461389

>>92454757
What

>>92454850
You mean like the kind used in sunday strips? I suppose it could work, but why would you want to use it? It seems more difficult than doing normal colors, especially if coloring is already difficult for you. If you showed us some of your coloring we could probably give you some pointers and hook you up with some tutorials/guides.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:25:05 No.92455102 Report

Quoted By:

I'm sorry. I gotta get outta here.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:48:59 No.92455432 Report

Quoted By: >>92458170

>>92432341
I was there when it happened. I remember he had that stupid idea of only taking crits in private while in the threads, and we had a good fun at his expense, but I don't recall him being that insufferable on the chat, still, we all voted for him to leave because we didn't want drama in the chat.
Right now, I've been told the chat is stale as fuck, that only a handful post their works, and the rest are just too busy blowing each other off.

>>92441165
Last time I was there, people was trying to shield you from that guy sean or something, because he was a super sperg, so when I heard you got the boot, I was thinking what the fuck did you do to get the boot too.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 08:59:06 No.92455574 Report

Quoted By:

>>92454932
Be more specific, that's going on in like 90% of the threads at any given time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 09:05:15 No.92455651 Report

Quoted By: >>92478589

>>92428135
As someone who left a while ago, I've never seen the mods on WCL ban anyone who didn't fully deserve it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 11:55:47 No.92457775 Report

Quoted By: >>92457909

I can't draw very well, I am much more of a writer than a penciler. Should I Marvel method some storyboards for people/artists or should I just focus on making good scripts? Some combination of both? What would you artist types rather get from a writer?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 12:06:02 No.92457909 Report

Quoted By: >>92458032

>>92457775
If you're only a writer, don't storyboard anything. Let the artist read the script and see the page in their head. If something's not at all how you envisioned it, obviously you can ask them to change it, but trust the visual storyteller to know how to visually tell a story.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 15:13:57 No.92458032 Report

Quoted By: >>92458101

>>92457909
I would do both. A comic book writer should know how to storyboard just like a cartoon writer should know how to storyboard.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 15:22:03 No.92458101 Report

Quoted By: >>92468410

>>92458032
I've talked to an artist and they said they'd rather have storyboards so they know what exactly they're drawing, and it helps the writer so he can just draw the basics and imagine it in the artist's style.

I've read up on how Stan Lee and other people used the Marvel method to just make plot points and write the dialogue, then ship it off to an artist. I was wondering if I should do that and compliment it with page-by-page storyboards, and give that to an artist instead of a script?

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Wed 17 May 2017 15:27:20 No.92458170 Report

Quoted By: >>92478589

>>92454549
:)
>>92455432
>sean
Oh yeah, I almost forgot about that guy, he was quite the goofball.

He was also the first and only person I've ever blocked on discord.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 15:30:12 No.92458215 Report

Quoted By: >>92458630 >>92458715 >>92458803 >>92459088 >>92459809 >>92460167 >>92466906

Quick,

describe the important groups and factions in your setting. How do they interact with each other?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 15:32:21 No.92458250 Report

Quoted By:

>>92424841
Yesterday i finally finished the first page that has been holding me for so long to start my webcomic, first time posting in these threads btw

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 15:56:34 No.92458630 Report

Quoted By:

>>92458215
There is a cat and a fox. They have to get along with each other because all they know is each other. And then there is the great unknown.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 16:03:05 No.92458715 Report

Quoted By: >>92458739

>>92458215
The nutkins live in the grove by the lake. They're a simple, rustic folk.

The valleykin live beyond the boundary, where the grass is thick and predators roam. They find the nutkins too sentimental and the hillkin soft.

The hillkin live on the coast where they collect salt from the cliffs. Some claim they've seen gods in the distant, giants that number 30 littles tall or more. They're technologically advanced, "sophisticated," and care little for the simple folk who live in the trees and grass.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 16:04:38 No.92458739 Report

Quoted By:

>>92458715
I wish I could upload my picture but 4chan isn't letting me so great.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 16:09:31 No.92458803 Report

Quoted By:

>>92458215

>The Children of Autumn - A Group of people who's main ideology is that the only way for humanity to survive in the harsh world is through machine enhancements. I.E. Replacing damaged limbs and organs with machines. Are indifferent about The Land Dancers so long as they leave them alone.

>The Land Dancers - The main religion in the world. Believe that only through worship of the Gods and nature itself can humanity flourish. believe that the Children of Autumn are heretical.

>The Godless - The extremist side of the Children of Autumn. Took machine enhancements to the ultimate level by completely replacing vast amounts of flesh with metal. Most were driven mad by the process. Everyone hates them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 16:30:41 No.92459088 Report

Quoted By:

>>92458215
They just really like to throw drinking parties together.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 16:48:05 No.92459355 Report

Quoted By: >>92459482

Trying to upload something, but 4Chan failing the upload no matter what. :(

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 16:57:06 No.92459482 Report

Quoted By: >>92459669

>>92459355
yeah it's been like that.

Before, nobody could post anything. Use imgur.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:11:29 No.92459669 Report

Quoted By: >>92459767 >>92460005

>>92459482
Alright then.

http://i.imgur.com/RCcotPe.jpg

I'm trying out that "Mobile Friendly" comic format, it's kind of weird, but i figured it'd be better to storyboard directly for it, instead of butchering a normal page to fit the vertical style.
Here's intro sequence from a very short story (about 10 pages) i'm working on, mostly as a technical test, as you can see it's a WiP (have to add balloons, as well as polish up some stuff, panel borders, color the outlines, etc).
Just posting to get some opinions.

Earthfield

Earthfield Wed 17 May 2017 17:17:57 No.92459763 Report

Quoted By: >>92460188 >>92478589

Good to know, then, here's what I did today. Hoping to wrap this one up soon.

http://i.imgur.com/yqsCNAB.png

>>92424841
My favourite page was from an older work (2008) called Selenite, which kinda started the introduction, and then pretty much stopped- In any case, in this page, both MCs mock a side character for being a computer/technology illiterate. I don't think it's my best work, or the funniest, but I love this page regardless.

http://img2.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/4/d/8/4d8089a13jMo1.jpg

As for character, I'd say Leslie from my current work, but her shinier points come from lampshading Johnny's shittiness, so, without him, she'd be a pretty boring character, I guess.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:18:17 No.92459767 Report

Quoted By: >>92460065

>>92459669
that's pretty fuckin' beautiful anon, evocative backgrounds+lighting are something i think go ignored in a lot of work, and the characters are easy on the eye

the kind of stock expressions take me out of the moment though

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:21:23 No.92459809 Report

Quoted By:

>>92458215
The chozen- they keep tabs on which catagory of ghost that they are possesed by (usually catagorized by color) and they sometimes give them tasks to complete.

The dark guild- group of villians who are organized by how much of a threat they are (ranked from levels 1-10) and rank heroes they oberve and then match them up with a villian of the same rank to make the hero suffer as much as they can with out killing them for there dark lord who feeds off of suffering.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:35:28 No.92460005 Report

Quoted By: >>92460449

>>92459669
Nice job! what's next? for making comics I mean.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:38:33 No.92460065 Report

Quoted By: >>92460270

>>92459767
Oh, thanks.
By "Stock expressions" you mean the face she does when shot from below? Or just in general? I forgot to mention that the moment is supposed to be (as hinted at, by the last two panels, i guess) a bit of a parody of anime romance, the story is actually primarily action (which is why the title card is the way it is), so that's why i pushed a bit the "uguu" factor, but i don't know if that's what you meant.

Also, i should add that my usual style tends to be a tad more realistic, so i had to adapt a bit here (bigger heads, simpler shapes, and all that).
Some of those hands close ups are still a bit out of place, for that reason.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:46:40 No.92460167 Report

Quoted By:

>>92458215
Uhh.. well there's different kingdoms and stuff, but generally it's every man for himself.. carving out a niche in the world however he can.. there's adventurers handling quests of varying sizes, but there's also just mercenaries doing normal guard work for lower-level shit below that that doesn't qualify as a quest.. and then there's fuckin wizards and shit above both of those levels who take care of the major crazy cosmic whatnot so nobody else has to. then there's other planets.. and also hell.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Wed 17 May 2017 17:48:05 No.92460188 Report

Quoted By: >>92460590

>>92459763
Whoa, you managed the pixel sword! awesome! did you do it the same way I did, or did you do it the smart way?
>Selenite
oh hey I really like this

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:54:59 No.92460270 Report

Quoted By: >>92460449

>>92460065
yeah, the shot from below, your style is great otherwise

i suppose if you're trying to use the classic "confession at sundown" scene with all the trappings, then it's fine. given that you're kind of segueing into some "N-NANI'-type reveal

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 17:58:16 No.92460308 Report

Quoted By:

>>92454549
>telling dewd he's good
loving every laugh

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 18:07:51 No.92460449 Report

Quoted By:

>>92460005
You mean what i'm doing after this short story? I have a bunch of stories i was sitting on for a while, so i'll do one of those.
Before i jumped in them i wanted to test the pipeline with something lighter.
And i'm still not 100% sold on this vertical format thing.

You can do interesting "endless" vertical pans, but you lose a lot of things you could do on a regular page, too.

>>92460270
Yeah that's the idea, although i don't want it to sound like "lol, it's SUPPOSED to be bad!"

Earthfield

Earthfield Wed 17 May 2017 18:18:22 No.92460590 Report

Quoted By: >>92460625

>>92460188
I made a pixel sword, Duplicate its layer, move the lower layer down-left, unify the edges to give depth, and colour the lower layer all grey. I'm sure there are easier ways to do it, but that's what I came up with back then.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Wed 17 May 2017 18:20:10 No.92460625 Report

Quoted By:

>>92460590
Haha! that's exactly what I did!!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 19:24:22 No.92461360 Report

Quoted By:

>>92455097
Yeah, like those. My original concept was that it was styled like a newspaper comic, and I figured this might be a good way to do it.
It's not so much that normal coloring is "difficult" for me per say, it's just that I'm not sure how to make it look less generic, since giving the color a bunch of shading/highlighting/detail looked really out of place when I tried it. Curse my cartoony drawing style.

One the one side is how I'd usually go about coloring it, and on the other was experimenting in photoshop, that being the best result I could get. Ignore the speech bubbles missing.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 19:25:41 No.92461389 Report

Quoted By: >>92461435

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 19:27:52 No.92461435 Report

Quoted By: >>92461460

>>92461389
it really doesnt go with color. especially this way, where it lightens everything.
if you are going to do tones, make it the way newspaper comics do, with the dots being one color and the background being another (it's amazing thinking that people used to have to do that by hand, cutting out each color shape)

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 19:28:54 No.92461460 Report

Quoted By:

>>92461435
and also yknow thinking about the tone combinations they had available.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 19:55:32 No.92462139 Report

Quoted By: >>92462431 >>92462446

>>92424841
Meant to post this earlier but the site went weird, finally finished my first webcomic page, first time posting on these threads too~

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:07:55 No.92462431 Report

Quoted By: >>92468475

>>92462139
cant make heads or tails of it, but the clean chunky style is pretty cool

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:08:45 No.92462446 Report

Quoted By: >>92468475

>>92462139
The style is cool, but I literally can't tell what's going on

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:10:27 No.92462486 Report

Quoted By: >>92462501 >>92462521

I'm a failure, aren't I?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:11:07 No.92462501 Report

Quoted By:

>>92462486
nice interface

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:11:45 No.92462521 Report

Quoted By:

>>92462486
>not drawing right now this instant

Yes, you are.

DRAW ALREADY WHY ARE YOU WAITING DO IT NOW

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:16:10 No.92462612 Report

Quoted By: >>92462689

I'm trying to convince my friend to let me post her comic, its pretty funny and is about a Minotaur girl living in a modern day fantasy world. Shes a slacker, awkward, nerdy girl who is perpetually single, and is best friends with an extremely sexy vampire girl.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:19:21 No.92462689 Report

Quoted By: >>92462816

>>92462612
I fucking love that idea. Tell her I love it and I'll probably draw fanart.

wait it's a proper minotaur, right? not just a humanoid cow. i mean I'll still read it, but I'll be disappoint

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:23:19 No.92462816 Report

Quoted By: >>92463865

>>92462689
Shes a proper minotaur, big, bulky, kinda dumb.
I doubt she'll let me though, all she does is draw porn on /b/ lol. Let me see if she'll at least let me post a pic of the character.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:58:45 No.92463865 Report

Quoted By: >>92465184

>>92462816
excellent. not that i dont like humanoid cows too, it's just not the same thing.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 20:58:53 No.92463872 Report

Quoted By: >>92464921

Is the uploaded working?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 21:34:07 No.92464921 Report

Quoted By:

>>92463872
twould seem so

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 21:43:16 No.92465184 Report

Quoted By: >>92465263 >>92465496 >>92465777

>>92463865
My friend corrected me, Shes something called a Maulotaur.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 21:46:06 No.92465263 Report

Quoted By:

>>92465184
it's shit, fuck your friend

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 21:46:56 No.92465286 Report

Quoted By: >>92465809

Like my characters /co/?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 21:54:33 No.92465496 Report

Quoted By: >>92465532

>>92465184
Wonky anatomy, but charming. I think your friend should try to polish up her lineart and anatomy skills and she could really make this into a memorable character.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 21:55:42 No.92465532 Report

Quoted By: >>92465701 >>92466532

>>92465496
She just sketched it out for me really quickly, she doesn't finish much of her work anymore since she lost her job as an animator.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:02:18 No.92465701 Report

Quoted By: >>92465809 >>92465812

>>92465532
>job as an animator.
lmfao are you both 13?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:04:36 No.92465777 Report

Quoted By:

>>92465184
well that IS a humanoid cow, but oh well. still a comic i'd read. she looks really cute and awkward and nerdy

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:05:53 No.92465809 Report

Quoted By:

>>92465286
left guy kinda, right guy yeah!
>>92465701
jealous kids are taking all our jobs?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:05:56 No.92465812 Report

Quoted By:

>>92465701
She was a 3D animator for a small game company.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:06:22 No.92465823 Report

Quoted By: >>92466238 >>92466419 >>92469293

>drawing with perspective in mind

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:21:31 No.92466238 Report

Quoted By: >>92466671

>>92465823
did you draw that with your tongue?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:29:44 No.92466419 Report

Quoted By: >>92466671

>>92465823

I think you misunderstood what perspective means

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:34:18 No.92466532 Report

Quoted By:

>>92465532
>she lost her job
no wonder when she draws like that

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:39:37 No.92466671 Report

Quoted By:

>>92466238
Nah, I used my Bamboo tablet.

>>92466419
My perspective is looking forward to see this panel finished.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 22:49:38 No.92466906 Report

Quoted By: >>92478589

>>92458215
>Aleutian Military Land Forces Reconnaissance Command - Research and Intelligence Group
main characters' faction, hired as foreign advisers to aide a government transition.

>Soyus Ministry of Intelligence
works primarily with the main characters while they are in-country. they use the king and queen as figureheads to gain support for the new government they are trying to establish from under them.

>New Monarchy Loyalists
terrorist group who are loyal to the old monarchy, and are very close to causing armed conflict to preserve it against the new government.

>mercenaries
hired guns by the real estate companies who are expanding in Soyus.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 23:13:03 No.92467531 Report

Quoted By: >>92468230 >>92468410 >>92469033

why is digital painting so hard anons?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 23:38:29 No.92468230 Report

Quoted By: >>92468410

>>92467531
it's hard to get the blending settings right. There's two basic kinds you'd like: either soft mixing as if airbrushing, or a kind of smearing as if you were using thick paints. art programs dont seem to want to do the former, and the latter is hard to use anyway because you dont have sort of directional knife control, plus it's incredibly resource-intensive

i had a program whose painting ability was fucking great. I mean, I still have it.. but it's shit. but the painting was great.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 23:44:53 No.92468410 Report

Quoted By: >>92469055 >>92469771 >>92469910

>>92458101
If the artist needs storyboards they're not a very good artist. In that case, you will probably have to do it for them.

There's a part early in Bakuman (basically an autobiography of the creators of Death Note) where they can't understand why the comic keeps coming out so bland. Eventually they work out it's because the writer is putting scribbles for how the page will look despite having no knowledge of composition, eye flow, perspective, etc. When he stops doing that and the artist tries just reading the script and seeing it in his head, it comes out more interesting.

>>92467531
Values are WAY too dark. I assume this is all supposed to be metal, so look at metal. It SHINES.

>>92468230
the heck are you talking about

Anonymous

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Anonymous Wed 17 May 2017 23:47:31 No.92468475 Report

Quoted By: >>92471700 >>92490268

>>92462446
>>92462431
Thanks bros, that one's a flashback and the comic is going to have kind of an ongoing mistery, so that page is more weird and disjointed and intented to make full sense until later in the story, my next pages have more traditional, lless cryptic narrative tho!

bones

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bones Wed 17 May 2017 23:57:22 No.92468745 Report

Quoted By: >>92468772

>>92443874

is 4chan working again yet? been trying all day, finished a new page but first heres a fixed version of this page.

bones

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bones Wed 17 May 2017 23:58:26 No.92468772 Report

Quoted By: >>92468817 >>92468836 >>92484871

>>92468745

ok, its working, check this out yall, a brand spanking new page of FATES CHAOS i just finished a few seconds ago!

*And heres the video of me making this page: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CXDYkU4b2LQ

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:00:08 No.92468817 Report

Quoted By: >>92469051

>>92468772
Those last two panels are gold

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:00:46 No.92468836 Report

Quoted By: >>92469018

>>92468772
Those scribbly-scrawly outlines make it look worse than it actually is.

bones

bones Thu 18 May 2017 00:06:41 No.92469018 Report

Quoted By: >>92469062 >>92469410

>>92468836

the wild scribbly lines are on purpose because i want it to look and feel like the wild west, ay know?

so do you like it now?

video related: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m59UM1iFu-c

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:07:06 No.92469033 Report

Quoted By: >>92469258

>>92467531
I tried doing a paintover to give you some tips, hope you don't mind. The first thing I noticed about this painting was that you had a fairly limited value range, which can often result in your painting looking a bit muddy. Using a wider range of values can help make the forms of your subject clearer as well as help the whole composition pop better.
Secondly, I noticed you had some variance in your hue choices, though they were very limited. I honestly first though this painting was in greyscale when I first saw it because the hues are so desaturated and unvaried. if you're going to use color and not just greyscale, try varying up the hues some more to bring out the contrast between your highlights and shadows.
Lastly, you seem to be working with an unnecessarily small brush for some of this painting. Areas like the shading and the helmet and collar seem to have been scribbled in with a tiny brush. When painting, always work large to small, use large brushes to cover large areas, and go smaller and smaller as you fill in the details. If you use a small brush for everything your shading will look rather messy.

bones

bones Thu 18 May 2017 00:07:43 No.92469051 Report

Quoted By:

>>92468817

thanks ^^

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:07:52 No.92469055 Report

Quoted By:

>>92468410
What part didn't you understand?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:08:13 No.92469062 Report

Quoted By:

>>92469018
_No

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:15:44 No.92469258 Report

Quoted By:

>>92469033
Holy shit anon, thanks! i've only ever done sketches, so all of this is pretty new to me, saving your tips for later use

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:16:59 No.92469293 Report

Quoted By: >>92474699

>>92465823
Alright, alright. That shelf is even too wonky for what I'm going for.

bones

bones Thu 18 May 2017 00:21:35 No.92469410 Report

Quoted By:

>>92469018

ya know*

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:35:41 No.92469771 Report

Quoted By:

>>92468410
ironically the writer of Bakuman creates storyboards for that very manga. you can always make shots more efficient or interesting from the initial draft. a comic writer should be able to storyboard in my opinion, even if they and the artist decide to work the way you proposed. there are skilled illustrators that don't have comic specific knowledge. if you can board as a writer you will have better chances at finding a partner. you will also be able to review the flow, pacing and page composition. a comic writer who can't do that is not a partner i would want to work with

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 00:40:51 No.92469910 Report

Quoted By:

>>92468410
>If the artist needs storyboards they're not a very good artist
I don't think that's a very hard and fast rule. some will work well with storyboards or thumbnails, while other won't depending on how the artist chooses to work, or like you mentioned, how well they are trained with composition, eye flow, perspective, etc.

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

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The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Thu 18 May 2017 01:07:42 No.92470620 Report

Quoted By: >>92480374

I hope you guys are hyped for the West Tree OVA coming out 2018 animated by A-1 studios!

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 01:28:56 No.92471085 Report

Quoted By: >>92471202 >>92471447

So I was thinking of starting a webcomic for quite some time.
Pic related is a group of characters I drew recently but not the actual character from the story I want to webcomic.
Should I work on my anatomy and backgrounds more and publish a webcomic later, or just jump in now that I completed thumbnailing the first chapter?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 01:34:19 No.92471202 Report

Quoted By:

>>92471085
jump in, get experience

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 01:47:06 No.92471447 Report

Quoted By:

>>92471085
you're good enough right now. you can draw serviceable 3/4ths characters. now it's time to work on various anatomical things, other poses, and all that, and all that. i already like these people
one thing is you're drawing arms slightly too short. remember, elbow is at the bottom of the ribcage, and hand is in the right position to masturbate. slightly below crotch level at your sides, which obviously shortens as the arm moves inwards because a diagonal distance is always longer than a direct distance, Billy!

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 01:58:10 No.92471700 Report

Quoted By:

>>92468475
Damn, that looks nice. The only thing convincing me it's not some official published artwork is the fact it's got phone rotation syndrome.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 02:40:50 No.92472727 Report

Quoted By: >>92472973 >>92474016 >>92480068

Does anyone else despise lining? It's a lengthy process, and feel like at this point everything in development slows to a crawl because you're left highlighting all the mistakes you've made. I feel like I'm spending hours lining one figure trying to get everything looking as presentable as possible, but in the end it's just holding me off from working on my other characters.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 02:53:22 No.92472973 Report

Quoted By:

>>92472727
you mean like inking? i kind of enjoy it, it kind of allows me to do things like correct mistakes or define areas that i couldnt get in the initial penciling stage.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 03:43:07 No.92474016 Report

Quoted By:

>>92472727
It's the part I like best actually.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:06:11 No.92474509 Report

Quoted By: >>92475268

fuck inking and fuck comics

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:16:13 No.92474699 Report

Quoted By: >>92474747

>>92469293
My nigga what is point perspective omg get it together and try again.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:19:06 No.92474747 Report

Quoted By: >>92474854 >>92474871 >>92474922

>>92474699
fuck perspective, picasso didn't need it

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:24:15 No.92474854 Report

Quoted By: >>92475005

>>92474747
Don't make my post Picasso the dude had a third eye for this shit since he was a youngin mane you can't compare, sorry.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:25:10 No.92474871 Report

Quoted By: >>92474922 >>92475005 >>92475112

>>92474747
>picasso didnt need it
he sure as shit took the time to understand it before butchering it. not knowing how2perspective is no excuse to not learn it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:27:37 No.92474922 Report

Quoted By: >>92475005

>>92474747
>>92474871
Plus it'll make your work look more professional like something right out of wind Waker bro.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:31:33 No.92475005 Report

Quoted By: >>92475116 >>92475241

>>92474854
>>92474871
>>92474922
Perspective is fun, you dirtbags, don't make it sound like a chore. Just go through perspective made easy, and once you get a feel for it, just draw by eye, don't measure out perspective lines every time you draw. You can experiment with it and have fun. For example I like to curve the lines coming from the vanishing points to make a psuedo-fisheye-lens thing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:36:51 No.92475112 Report

Quoted By:

>>92474871
that doesn't really help. it just made it more infuriating
he should have said van gogh didnt need it. then we'd point out he was probably stereoblind and definitely mentally ill, and died penniless

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:37:06 No.92475116 Report

Quoted By:

>>92475005
Life is a fucking chore

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:43:35 No.92475241 Report

Quoted By:

>>92475005
i actually hate that effect but I know just what you mean. perspective can be fun! but it's a lot easier to bullshit it in a simpler comic. anything less than perfection doesn't mesh well with realism

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:44:37 No.92475268 Report

Quoted By:

>>92474509
"I am down to a pencil, a pen, and a bottle of ink. I hope one day to eliminate the pencil. "

-Al Hirschfeld

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 04:51:36 No.92475401 Report

Quoted By:

How to get good at perspective

-Learn Sketchup or other simple 3D modeler
-Model your environment in 3D using simple shapes; boxes and spheres and shit
-Set the perspective/angle you want
-Trace over it

Perfect perspective every time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 05:20:29 No.92475979 Report

Quoted By: >>92476014 >>92476028 >>92481489 >>92483664 >>92483935

I finished my first draft. 352 boards total. I never want to draw again, Jesus Christ.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 05:22:28 No.92476014 Report

Quoted By: >>92476039

>>92475979
NGMI

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 05:23:12 No.92476028 Report

Quoted By:

>>92475979
are you sure that's the wise way to go? you're going to feel bad if any of that effort was wasted. if you're a pro though then obviously no problem

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 05:23:52 No.92476039 Report

Quoted By: >>92476128

>>92476014
I should clarify that I am not the artist. I'm the writer.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 05:28:05 No.92476128 Report

Quoted By:

>>92476039
ah okay then. well i hope nothing major comes along during the art and revising process that means you need to revise a ton of it

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 05:42:25 No.92476378 Report

Quoted By:

>line wasnt closed
>accidentally blackface a character
>it looks great
no wonder that was so popular

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 06:08:22 No.92476791 Report

Quoted By: >>92476869 >>92476871 >>92477732

>Thought I can freehand perspective
>Can't

Fuck

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 06:14:36 No.92476869 Report

Quoted By:

>>92476791
other than the shelf on the left, which merely looks like it's crooked in-universe, looks to me like you succeeded. what's lookin wrong?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 06:14:44 No.92476871 Report

Quoted By:

>>92476791
looks fine to me

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 06:41:45 No.92477165 Report

Quoted By: >>92477194

I'm thinking I may need to come up with some different proportions but I'm liking this direction.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 06:45:24 No.92477194 Report

Quoted By: >>92477429

>>92477165
whoa, a wild cutie appears. i love your style and instantly want fanart from you
it's not the proportions though, it's more... the joints and how they're set up. her elbows are too far down the arms and obviously you were just sketching out because you didn't finish the hands, that's fine.. but really that's one hell of a bowleg syndrome. i think it's kind of hot actually, but it's sticking out like a sore bum. i mean i like a thigh gap but that's ridiculous

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 07:14:46 No.92477429 Report

Quoted By: >>92477590

>>92477194
Yeah I'm trying to figure out proportions that I can draw consistently. The wide gap style is easy and quick but I'm not used to it so I'm kinda iffy on weather or not I should use more realistic proportions have have it take longer or not.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 07:31:49 No.92477590 Report

Quoted By: >>92477814

>>92477429
yeah i can see you have only a loose grasp on proportions since this one is way more off than the other one.. but that's okay. you're clearly in the 'working on poses' mode right now. proportions are really easy to fix digitally.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 07:47:33 No.92477732 Report

Quoted By:

>>92476791
First panel looks good enough, but why free hand it, when many programs have perspective tools? Clip Art is also pretty cheap, often around 20$.
It's just Photoshop that is shit and boneheaded in that regard, so people stick to absurd methods just to not jump ship. (like using the star tool)

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

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ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Thu 18 May 2017 07:52:21 No.92477789 Report

Quoted By:

yay comic
crammed a lot of dialogue snips in here I'd been wanting to use.
I'm fucking sick of drawing these cenotes now.
this isnt much of a joke but it was a lot more boring before I inserted a lot of last minute dialogue that I think peps it up. plus that last panel had almost none of that in it until the last minute when I saw blank space and panic'd. almost asked you guys for advice. yknow for a COMIC strip, I often forget that random physical comedy is always welcome.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 07:54:34 No.92477814 Report

Quoted By: >>92477846

>>92477590
I'm actually pretty good with proportions but I've been slacking on figure drawing lately so I'm trying to get back into that. When I eventually finish a page everything will be way more refined.

The real thing I have trouble with is fight scenes/poses.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 07:57:49 No.92477846 Report

Quoted By:

>>92477814
that's a trick and a half too.
I've posted it ad nauseum but I really believe in this particular reference book right here. it covers all the important shit about motion and reaction
http://www.slideshare.net/bruno13marques/how-to-draw-manga-vol-23-illustrating-battles

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 08:50:57 No.92478257 Report

Quoted By:

I'm not sure where else to post this, but does Gobolatula actively post on /co/? I just binge read all of It Hurts and I want to tell him he better bring back best girl Aurora.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 09:56:42 No.92478589 Report

Quoted By: >>92487873

>>92455651
I left a long time ago too, but I remember that starting on the second ban, admin/mods never asked for everyone opinion. They may have the authority, but it reeks of drunk with power, which sounds hilarious for a place like a chat.

>>92458170
>Goofball
That's one funny way of saying asshole.

>>92459763
This is too animu for me.

>>92466906
Nice job, dude

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 11:17:05 No.92479209 Report

Quoted By:

>>92442959
>what's the secret?

Speding years on Loomis.

On the bright side, you will likely still be relatively young in your late 30’s or 40’s when you master it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 11:22:17 No.92479260 Report

Quoted By: >>92481438 >>92483664

>>92454234
Who the fuck wear labcoat and miniskirt?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 11:46:54 No.92479502 Report

Quoted By: >>92480287 >>92491848 >>92492391

sketch i completed, not done yet but can you guys critique me as hard as possible

Megawacky Max

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Megawacky Max Thu 18 May 2017 12:42:23 No.92479988 Report

Quoted By: >>92485454

Here's a new Wilfreda the Wanna-Be Witch strip. Show and Tell time at school. Wilfreda brings her pet at class.

Her pet is a cactus.

Read more Wilfreda at http://wilfredacomic.tumblr.com/

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 12:53:59 No.92480068 Report

Quoted By:

>>92472727
Have you tried just colouring in the sketch layer?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 13:14:06 No.92480287 Report

Quoted By: >>92480482

>>92479502
If this was meant to be just a very rough sketch you'd then draw over, you went too hard with those lines, it'll be a bitch to see anything when you're done with everything.
Aside from that, i'd say just use a ruler next time, and maybe if you're feeling ambitious, try to apply a camera angle that requires a bit more perspective work, it's gonna be that much harder, but that's how you actually improve, by trying to do things out of your depth, and learning from the inevitable failure.

If this was supposed to be an imposing moment for example, a 3 point perspective with vertical lines converging upwards, would've sold it much better than a flat shot like this one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 13:22:22 No.92480374 Report

Quoted By: >>92485054

>>92470620
Is he supposed to be half nigger

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 13:34:23 No.92480482 Report

Quoted By:

>>92480287
thanks anon, i was also thinking of making greentexts into comics so i can improve drawing without worrying about story yet

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 14:08:59 No.92480862 Report

Quoted By: >>92483475

Finished the lines for my space pirate. Looking for critique here, especially tips on line consistency and speed since this took way too long to finish. I gave her a simple outfit since I know she's going to be the pseudo main character and I'll be drawing her very often, but it still took me probably around 4+ hours just to finish this without even getting into colors.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 14:47:02 No.92481438 Report

Quoted By:

>>92479260
A sexy scientist with a fashion sense. don't think to hard about it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 14:51:07 No.92481489 Report

Quoted By: >>92482042 >>92483283

>>92475979
Post some, I hope it's shit so you learn your lesson.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 15:28:05 No.92482042 Report

Quoted By:

>>92481489
No ,then you'll bully me and I'll be discouraged

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 16:06:16 No.92482729 Report

Quoted By: >>92483546 >>92485899

Hmm, a little bit too big. Need to shrink down to 3-inches. I'm creating paper cutouts of my little people as size reference for drawing.

I'm probably not going to publish this as a scheduled webcomic. I'll just release finished pages here and there then post a huge chunk of them online when I'm confident I'll actually finish it.

drawfeg

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drawfeg Thu 18 May 2017 16:16:06 No.92482895 Report

Quoted By: >>92485942

Before roasting me consider:
This is still a scrap, I am also the artist so I don't have to give detailed explanation and this is only part 1 of my story. I'm also open to criticism and I like to hear opinions

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m0opPOKOWPUJYZGNAbURxf2MItAxZapbCmPx6ZoqPYU/edit?usp=sharing

Here we go:
<- Pic slightly related, it's Daya

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 16:35:54 No.92483283 Report

Quoted By:

>>92481489
Rude. And it is definitely shit. It is the literal first draft.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 16:45:37 No.92483475 Report

Quoted By: >>92496910

>>92480862
How do you line your pieces right now? From the way each line seems to taper, it looks as though you're using the pentool + stroke. As for consistency, I think it looks good! Especially on the lapels of her coat and legs.
To quicken the pace of drawing, I would try changing a bit of her design. Maybe change the boxes on her utility belt into pockets. Does she really need the symbol on her shoulder? Maybe you can make it one flat color so you don't have to outline it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 16:47:33 No.92483514 Report

Quoted By: >>92483640 >>92483779 >>92483904

So, just saw this thing about Tapastic.

https://twitter.com/mkinyon/status/865184555782811648

Been posting my comic there, should I stop?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 16:49:08 No.92483546 Report

Quoted By: >>92483805

>>92482729
This is the first time I've seen someone make paper cut outs for a comic on here!
Wouldn't it be easier to make a mark at 0-3in. and build a base from there? And why 3 in.?

drawfeg

drawfeg Thu 18 May 2017 16:53:52 No.92483640 Report

Quoted By:

>>92483514
Dunno, but good thing I refused to post mine there

Nessie

Nessie Thu 18 May 2017 16:54:44 No.92483664 Report

Quoted By: >>92484488 >>92485010

>>92479260
Well she's supposed to be wearing a lab coat over her school uniform, she's technically not a real doctor, just pretending to be one.

>>92475979
Congrats. What's the comic going to be about?

Nessie

Nessie Thu 18 May 2017 17:00:37 No.92483779 Report

Quoted By: >>92485966

>>92483514
Eh, maybe. A policy like that seems like it could fuck you over in the long run. A lot of creators seem to be jumping ship right now, though, and there's a lot of push back happening. I'm just sticking around for a while longer to see if Tapastic caves in and removes the policy to stop the backlash.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 17:01:44 No.92483805 Report

Quoted By:

>>92483546
They're literally 3 inches tall. With a prop I can stage scenes in real life.

EtMotL

EtMotL Thu 18 May 2017 17:05:59 No.92483904 Report

Quoted By: >>92483940 >>92485966

>>92483514
Here's a followup to read, with a lawyer's take on it:
https://twitter.com/AkivaMCohen/status/865232171258310656

Because I initially heard about this via cryptic comments with no adequate explanation: Tapastic have retroactively inserted a Right of First Refusal clause into their Terms of Service. If you want to sell the rights to your comic for whatever reason, you have to notify Tapastic, and they have 30 days to either make an offer to buy it from you or refuse, before you can sell those rights to someone else.

Do read around it, and dig up what information you can about what this means.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 17:07:51 No.92483935 Report

Quoted By: >>92484267

>>92475979

Good on you!

Just finished writing a long ass word doc with all of my story/character notes, plot outlines, rough dialog to be punched up later, etc. Started doing a little bit of boarding myself earlier this morning.

Shame that it will all be total shit because I'm one of those ">tfw want to make a comic but I draw like a kindergartner with downs syndrome" fags, but I've got a bee in my bonnet and I'm determined to see it through. Worst case scenario, I never show it to anyone and I get a bunch of drawing practice in.

Still, don't give up. Follow your dreams, and rest assured that no matter how your comic turns out it will at least (probably) be better than mine!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxGRhd_iWuE

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 17:08:07 No.92483940 Report

Quoted By:

>>92483904
I already have a publisher, they were gonna publish physical copies, I was using Tapastic to sort of gain an audience before that. Not sure how that'd work.

drawfeg

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drawfeg Thu 18 May 2017 17:23:57 No.92484267 Report

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>>92483935
I learned to draw by determining myself to learn, just looking up stuff online and practicing. It gave out really good results

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 17:33:46 No.92484488 Report

Quoted By: >>92486009

>>92483664
>friend sits at the front our lab class 'cause she's a fucking nerd
>instructor is doing a demonstration
>rest of the day she is scratching at her leg, complaining
>small hole has burned through her jeans, skin is red
>turns out a small droplet of acid got on her
>"Cool! Science!"
>fucking nerd
But maybe give her some stockings, thigh highs or whatever.

bones

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bones Thu 18 May 2017 17:51:44 No.92484871 Report

Quoted By: >>92485045 >>92508014

>>92468772

I just finished a brand new page this mourning, just now able to get online and post it :/

*you can read this webcomic on any of the following websites:

comicfury: http://fateschaos.thecomicseries.com
taptastic: https://tapastic.com/episode/664005
webtoons: http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/fates-chaos/world-changer/viewer?title_no=75153&episode_no=1

*watch me make this page: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iWG8p_oSkHo&feature=youtu.be
*watch me make this page to explicit rap music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7FnwCPFl9Zs&feature=youtu.be

*as you can see in the videos of me making this I was struggling to get shit right because i just jumped in head first freestyle and didn;t know what i was doing but correcting myself as I went along and in the end i think i did a pretty good job of pulling this out of my head and imagination and putting it down on digital paper, ya know? lol

>everytime someone mentions discord chat and shares there discord ban hammer war stories

damn it must be nice not to be dirt poor trailer trash and to be able to afford your own personal internet so you can get on stuff like discord, i feel like im missing out

but hey if eminem can go from dirt poor trailer trash to a billionaire just from sharing his art/projects/writing and ideas with the world than why not me? lol a boy can dream cant he? :,^)

Earthfield

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Earthfield Thu 18 May 2017 17:56:46 No.92485004 Report

Quoted By: >>92486009

Got another one finished. I'm confident that by tomorrow, I'll have completed them all. If I don't, it'll have to wait until Monday because my girlfriend is most likely spending the weekend at home and I won't be able to work on my drawings as much as I'd like too.
In any case, once it's finished, I'll make sure to upload it to my now dead site, while I get back to work on that as well.

Just checking, but while I'm happy to wrap this crossovers up for good, I recall someone interested about them, but I forgot who, can't find the post, and I wasn't sure if they were actually asking me to join the fray or not. I'm probably getting ahead of myself, just checking.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 17:56:57 No.92485010 Report

Quoted By:

>>92483664
>What's the comic going to be about?

It's about a young wolf with magical shadow powers and her fairy sprite beginning to unravel the mystery of why they exist and are bound together.

bones

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bones Thu 18 May 2017 17:58:05 No.92485045 Report

Quoted By:

>>92484871

ahem, page art...

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Thu 18 May 2017 17:58:38 No.92485054 Report

Quoted By:

>>92480374
Half mexican.

Or are you just talking about the odd shading on his neck?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:15:39 No.92485454 Report

Quoted By:

>>92479988
adorable

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:16:39 No.92485474 Report

Quoted By: >>92485669 >>92485736 >>92485957 >>92486035 >>92486868 >>92487090 >>92487465 >>92487549 >>92487867 >>92488542 >>92490382 >>92492397 >>92492520 >>92492585 >>92492611 >>92493759 >>92498048 >>92500788

quick,

describe your main villain and his goals

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:24:59 No.92485642 Report

Quoted By: >>92485693 >>92498196

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:26:28 No.92485669 Report

Quoted By: >>92485691

>>92485474
An old powerful shapeshifting wizard uses his forbidden knowledge and powers to politically maneuver those he deems "great men" to the history books, effectively creating a mythology future generations will look back on and be inspired by, though these "great men" may not be as noble or as great as history makes them

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:27:30 No.92485691 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485669
sounds pretty cool anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:27:39 No.92485693 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485642
Dan Backslide?

Dustin

Dustin Thu 18 May 2017 18:29:47 No.92485736 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
I don't really HAVE a MAIN villain yet, but really I don't have very many villains developed at ALL. I wanted to make a group of pirates that were kind of like a biker gang, for one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:36:38 No.92485899 Report

Quoted By:

>>92482729
>size references
are they going to be interacting with real world objects which you will also reference? because that is completely adorable

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:38:35 No.92485942 Report

Quoted By: >>92493800

>>92482895
Hmm. Neat ideas. good themes. personally the issue with the seven is just different kinds of selfishness, so she's on track!
Just one tip though, if you're going to be writing a story set in America, maybe learn Farenheit? If it comes up in the story I mean.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:39:21 No.92485957 Report

Quoted By: >>92486045

>>92485474
A Witch hunter who has made a deal with a fallen arch angel to destroy all magic users on Earth. He done fucks up and falls in love with the MC and has to deal with wanting to kill her entire kind and wanting to bang her.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:39:38 No.92485966 Report

Quoted By:

>>92483779
>>92483904
Yeah I've heard horror stories about that kind of thing. As soon as you're popular they can intentionally buy it from you and never use it, just to fuck over their perceived competition

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Thu 18 May 2017 18:41:25 No.92486009 Report

Quoted By:

>>92484488
oh science.
>>92485004
fuck, I love how you did his gloves. that's way better than my design. I'm so extra pleased by this entire thing!!!

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Thu 18 May 2017 18:42:27 No.92486035 Report

Quoted By: >>92486054

>>92485474
oh but.. that would be spoiling it. we're very close to finding out the goal. i wonder if anyone can guess

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:42:51 No.92486045 Report

Quoted By: >>92486117

>>92485957
Sounds like Judge Frollo

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:43:00 No.92486049 Report

Quoted By:

>tfw you're finally able to get a screen tablet

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:43:13 No.92486054 Report

Quoted By: >>92486563

>>92486035
Is it Space nazis from the Future?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:43:47 No.92486065 Report

Quoted By: >>92488858

>>92437935
Drew this today after picking the pose out from a little practice session. no boobs on Hal, and I don't think there's any "progress" necessarily but it's an update.

Once I get comfortable enough with my people drawing skills I'll work on constructing scenes and such.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 18:46:05 No.92486117 Report

Quoted By:

>>92486045
Now that I'm thinking about it, yes it does.

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee

ColdFusion? !!jbouFAho9ee Thu 18 May 2017 19:03:40 No.92486563 Report

Quoted By:

>>92486054
The current end boss villain is a space witch from the past, so that would be a hell of an interesting goal.

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Thu 18 May 2017 19:16:00 No.92486868 Report

Quoted By: >>92492897

>>92485474
Restart the universe because he hates how it turned out.

and one of them just loves being evil.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:25:01 No.92487090 Report

Quoted By: >>92487376

>>92485474
A being who possesses the bodies of the heroes who "slay him"

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:37:08 No.92487376 Report

Quoted By: >>92487536

>>92487090
can you be any more unoriginal? might as well scroll down tvtropes and copy/paste

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:40:31 No.92487465 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
>want to respond but EVERYTHING about them is a spoiler and even anonymously I don't want to chance anyone connecting these dots ahead of time

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:43:15 No.92487536 Report

Quoted By: >>92487907

>>92487376
Not that guy, but fuck that, possession is fantastic and you don't know the rest of the plot.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:43:47 No.92487549 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
The main villain just wants unlimited power for him and his people, the BBEG manipulating him wants to come back from the dead and be the only one with power.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:57:17 No.92487867 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
A seemingly normal human who for some reason these twisted machine abominations follow without question.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:57:44 No.92487873 Report

Quoted By: >>92488015

>>92478589
>I remember that starting on the second ban, admin/mods never asked for everyone opinion.
I don't expect mods to run a strawpoll every time they ban someone. And you'd have to put a whole lot of effort into being a drama queen, /pol/ or otherwise annoying to get banned.

If anything WCL has always been very welcoming.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 19:59:01 No.92487907 Report

Quoted By: >>92487951 >>92487974 >>92487985

>>92487536
it's written by an unoriginal faggot, I already know the rest is shit

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:01:01 No.92487951 Report

Quoted By:

>>92487907

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:02:14 No.92487974 Report

Quoted By:

>>92487907
Yeah, that Anonymous is a real hack.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:02:48 No.92487985 Report

Quoted By:

>>92487907
>One sentence description
>I can already tell how bad the rest of the story is from a single generic sentence

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:03:59 No.92488015 Report

Quoted By:

>>92487873
>/pol/
I was once like you

bones

bones Thu 18 May 2017 20:23:12 No.92488542 Report

Quoted By: >>92488651 >>92488747 >>92488750

>>92485474

well all my main villains are more victims of circumstance more than your normal run of the mill average joe conventional villains... ya know?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:26:44 No.92488651 Report

Quoted By: >>92489945

>>92488542
so deep

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:30:02 No.92488747 Report

Quoted By: >>92488800 >>92489945

>>92488542
of course they're victims if they're drawn by you

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:30:04 No.92488750 Report

Quoted By: >>92489945

>>92488542
People claim this is the best kind of villain but I can't think of one decent instance of it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:31:55 No.92488800 Report

Quoted By: >>92489945

>>92488747
btfo

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 20:34:03 No.92488858 Report

Quoted By: >>92495299

>>92486065
fixed it up a bit. His chin was bothering me. Recolored it from scratch quick too.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:02:56 No.92489565 Report

Quoted By: >>92489764

How bad is it to shade with no actual light source in mind but all the characters in a scene still look like they have the same light source?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:05:43 No.92489631 Report

Quoted By: >>92489945 >>92489948

why are these threads so mean now

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:11:25 No.92489752 Report

Quoted By: >>92489945

oh no, bones is reading ava's demon and pulling a dewd

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:12:01 No.92489764 Report

Quoted By: >>92490337

>>92489565
It's bad if you can't keep it consistent. If it's particularly inconsistent, then it's distracting, and bad.

How do you name your chapters? Do you name your chapters?

bones

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bones Thu 18 May 2017 21:20:43 No.92489945 Report

Quoted By:

>>92488651
>>92488747
>>92488750
>>92488800
mfw

>>92489752
what?

>>92489631
there just jealous haters, ignore them, i know i do, pic related lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:20:53 No.92489948 Report

Quoted By:

>>92489631
threads are never mean or nice, they're just angry or happy and take it out on everyone around them

bones

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bones Thu 18 May 2017 21:23:04 No.92489996 Report

Quoted By:

mfw the whole thread turns on me for no reason.

like "oh hi haters... bye haters!" lol

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:31:18 No.92490175 Report

Quoted By:

>>92453173
I like this strip and the art is good, but your water has way too much black, it looks like oil. Could work, but only for a night scene...

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:33:31 No.92490216 Report

Quoted By: >>92490369 >>92490399 >>92490403 >>92490474 >>92490621

QUICK!!!

What's the most obscure reference you've made? Has anyone gotten the reference?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:35:20 No.92490256 Report

Quoted By:

>"what??? i dont even know what this eve's devil is???"

now he is doubling down on the dewd! run!

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:35:54 No.92490268 Report

Quoted By: >>92491452

>>92468475
It looks so much better in black and white, holy shit.
Not really sure if you're just bad with colors or bw suits your style. Let's see your previous page pre-colored.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:38:08 No.92490316 Report

Quoted By:

i love it when bones happens

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:39:02 No.92490337 Report

Quoted By:

>>92489764
I name my chapters as puns of the main title.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:40:11 No.92490369 Report

Quoted By: >>92490751

>>92490216
less 'obscure' and more 'hidden,' but here's alien garfield

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:40:42 No.92490382 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
There is no villain. My story is about adventures and what interesting and/or dangerous things to find there. My story is a fantasy story but real lie has (most of the time) no actual villains as well.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:41:16 No.92490399 Report

Quoted By: >>92490438 >>92490544

>>92490216
The main character's names. I think maybe less than a handful of people have got it without me explaining it to them.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:41:27 No.92490403 Report

Quoted By: >>92490522

>>92490216
>When you make War and Peace references but no one you know has read War and Peace

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:42:56 No.92490438 Report

Quoted By: >>92490684

>>92490399
name?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:43:15 No.92490445 Report

Quoted By: >>92490550

Trying to figure out what to do for backgrounds because I rejected the idea of leaving it as crappy pink lines.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:44:12 No.92490474 Report

Quoted By:

>>92490216
there's one I think people still haven't figured out, regarding a recent character addition. but it's possible it's just so obvious they dont comment. also nobody reads it.
I've put in some supremely obscure references, to old defunct websites, to old gamemaker games I found on the internet when I first discovered gamemaker... to original fiction i've read, that was written in the form of tv scripts..

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:46:22 No.92490522 Report

Quoted By: >>92490544

>>92490403
>Leotol's Toy by Warren Peace

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:47:15 No.92490544 Report

Quoted By: >>92490684

>>92490522
nice
>>92490399
waht's the name?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:47:24 No.92490550 Report

Quoted By:

>>92490445
if you're really feeling lazy, just make silhouettes of things like the seats and basic lines for the background and windows and stuff. i suggest leaving the backgrounds, say, light pale blue, and the silhouettes a darker desaturated blue

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:50:09 No.92490621 Report

Quoted By: >>92490713

>>92490216
I named the three villains Tinker, Evers and Chance. No one's gotten it yet.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:52:21 No.92490684 Report

Quoted By:

>>92490438
>>92490544
That would give the game away as once you know them it's easy to just google it.

But it's not just "a reference", the names are somewhat apt to the characters, and the fact it's so obscure amuses me greatly.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:53:14 No.92490713 Report

Quoted By: >>92490745

>>92490621
no, but you did bring it up in a thread, and we all looked it up and agreed that was incredibly obscure

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:54:40 No.92490745 Report

Quoted By: >>92490950

>>92490713
did I bring it up before? huh, must have forgotten. Forgive me for repeating

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 21:54:59 No.92490751 Report

Quoted By: >>92490950

>>92490369
there's also this

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 22:03:14 No.92490950 Report

Quoted By: >>92491032

>>92490745
no problem there, we get new people all the time.
>>92490751
go to prison

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 22:07:18 No.92491032 Report

Quoted By: >>92491264

>>92490950
you're thinking of grumblecakes

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 22:17:58 No.92491264 Report

Quoted By:

>>92491032
yeah but man.. i could go for a little steam and sugar

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 22:26:35 No.92491452 Report

Quoted By:

>>92490268
I only have a crummy photo of my black and white right now but here ya go bro~

Anxn

Anxn Thu 18 May 2017 22:44:45 No.92491848 Report

Quoted By:

>>92479502
work on lines anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:11:28 No.92492391 Report

Quoted By: >>92492420 >>92492721

>>92479502
You've got a long way to go so to speak. Don't be demoralized.
Architecture with no perspective behind it is going to be dead on arrival, and even very flat, graphic styles a-la samurai jack need a grasp of basic perspective to work. You're using crosshatching without knowing how it works. Crosshatching needs to wrap around the volumes or it flatterns your picture, leave that be for now. You should be able to represent volumes with just line.

Read How to Draw by Scott Robertson, it's a perspective book. It's really important to know the basics of perspective even if you don't care about drawing grids for it. Thankfully it's pretty easy to understand.

Read Michael Hampton's Figure Drawing: Design and Invention for figure drawing. It's a newer book and a much nicer read than the old Loomis or Bridgman.

Draw a lot with a mindset of problem solving (the solution is always there in the fundamentals) and you'll slowly see improvements.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:11:43 No.92492397 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
>gif related

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:12:46 No.92492420 Report

Quoted By:

>>92492391
>even very flat, graphic styles a-la samurai jack need a grasp of basic perspective to work.
not in my experience. i like it anyway, but hooo man that ... that art..

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:17:22 No.92492520 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
"everybody but my brother and significant other deserve to die"

jam

jam Thu 18 May 2017 23:20:46 No.92492585 Report

Quoted By:

I'm trying to make the spider creatures a little more... expressive; something that's kinda hard to do when your mouth is sideways.

I'm thinking of having the corner of the tip of the mouth curve a little like a smile or frown occasionally

>>92485474
Just doing what they think is best for them and the people they care about. Same as everyone else.
(probably)

jam

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jam Thu 18 May 2017 23:21:48 No.92492611 Report

Quoted By: >>92493054 >>92505694

Anxn

Anxn Thu 18 May 2017 23:27:56 No.92492721 Report

Quoted By: >>92492826

>>92492391
thanks anon. I'll check out those books, probably pirate them. I would like to know however, how would I show volume with crosshatching? do you have anything to compare that is good?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:31:46 No.92492826 Report

Quoted By: >>92492837

>>92492721
Perspective helps with that. Once you get into the habit of drawing things by breaking them down into simple shapes (learning how to draw ellipses makes you draw better cylinders, and so on) you'll have an easier time with crosshatching since you'll be drawing over volumes you've already established.

Anxn

Anxn Thu 18 May 2017 23:32:28 No.92492837 Report

Quoted By:

>>92492826
thanks anon

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:35:24 No.92492897 Report

Quoted By: >>92493259

>>92486868
Is this a JoJo reference?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:41:21 No.92493015 Report

Quoted By: >>92493084

I'm aware at a low level of skill.

It was my idea to do this sort of thing for a webcomic, having just image on the page and text underneath.

The idea being I could create one really good image.

jam

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jam Thu 18 May 2017 23:42:03 No.92493035 Report

Quoted By: >>92493084

trying to design a Slave Race.

I'm gonna go with them either having an intelligent hivemind that is manipulated through alchemical pheromones (produced my spider alchemists) or being an otherwise free species that is being mindcontrolled by head-worms

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:43:07 No.92493054 Report

Quoted By: >>92493318 >>92494993

>>92492611
that's pretty clever. in my head it's not the center slit of the mouth moving, it's the bulge over the top of the chelicera just showing differently.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 18 May 2017 23:44:11 No.92493084 Report

Quoted By: >>92493318 >>92495207

>>92493015
illustrated stories aren't comics exactly but they are nice
>>92493035
headworms are a little cliche, and theyre not as creepy for critters like this. howbout head-MITES?

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe

The dewd !!fynVFEFUBTe Thu 18 May 2017 23:52:55 No.92493259 Report

Quoted By: >>92503846

>>92492897
No, it's a le undertale reference

jam

jam Thu 18 May 2017 23:55:33 No.92493318 Report

Quoted By:

>>92493054
Yeah, something like that. The mouth-arm moving like lips

>>92493084
no

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:15:41 No.92493759 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
I have no villain but an antagonist:
Leader of a society of people with supernatural abilities who murders them all in a plot to incite a war between humanity and an ancient civilization - which all turns out to be part of a game of skill though which he hopes to proof himself to his master who also poses as his female bodyguard.

It all makes perfect sense, I swear.

drawfeg

drawfeg Fri 19 May 2017 00:17:14 No.92493800 Report

Quoted By: >>92494478 >>92494922

>>92485942
Gonna write the comic in Spanish first then make English translation since all my proof readers are close friends of mine. So, Celsius is good, anyhow, Fahrenheit is just one Google search away so I doubt it's hard to convert

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:25:41 No.92494005 Report

Quoted By: >>92494093

i can't take it anymore lads, I'm giving up on my comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:29:30 No.92494093 Report

Quoted By:

>>92494005
ok

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:31:09 No.92494136 Report

Quoted By: >>92494237

>tfw artist probably won't get back with art today either

I-I just want to see my MC in all her glory...

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:35:06 No.92494237 Report

Quoted By: >>92494304

>>92494136
it's over, even if he does get back to you it'll slowly drop off. these duos never work

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:38:04 No.92494304 Report

Quoted By:

>>92494237
She's a professional freelancer and I'm paying her. I'm just overexcited about seeing more of her amazing art.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 00:46:36 No.92494478 Report

Quoted By:

>>92493800
ah okay then
just remember we don't usually use degree fractions

jam

jam Fri 19 May 2017 01:08:23 No.92494922 Report

Quoted By: >>92495140

>>92493800
English speakers outside of america use celsius, so I wouldn't bother.

jam

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jam Fri 19 May 2017 01:11:26 No.92494993 Report

Quoted By: >>92495235

>>92493054
spiders are fun

I'm gonna call her Akasha.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 01:18:03 No.92495140 Report

Quoted By: >>92495207

>>92494922
yeah but it's -about- america. it's a period piece. i wouldnt write a story about edwardian england and use farenheit

jam

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jam Fri 19 May 2017 01:21:12 No.92495207 Report

Quoted By:

>>92495140
Fair enough

>>92493084
Also doing big meaty slaves, for big meaty work.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 01:22:19 No.92495235 Report

Quoted By: >>92495334

>>92494993
great name. i feel like i've used it before for a spider. I'm sure I haven't, but that's just how great a name it is.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 01:25:02 No.92495299 Report

Quoted By: >>92495962 >>92504418

>>92488858
I drew flash as well, but I think he looks a bit more wonky.

jam

jam Fri 19 May 2017 01:26:45 No.92495334 Report

Quoted By:

>>92495235
There's a Spider Goddess called Asha in Heroes of Might n' Magic which is fairly similar.

I think I've had the name lying around in a .txt document of fantasy names for like 5 years. I made it not long after playing Dark Messiah so it's probably not a coincidence

It's a great spider name though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 01:51:45 No.92495962 Report

Quoted By:

>>92495299
You'll get it someday, dude. I've watched artists who looked just like your art, and they eventually got it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 02:33:32 No.92496910 Report

Quoted By:

>>92483475
Yeah, I just use the basic pencil tool. Nothing fancy there. Unfortunately the tattoos are crucial to her character. Plus, I really like the treasure chest belt. It feels really piratey, and it doesn't take any time to draw rounded trapezoids. From what I'm being told by you guys, I think it's mostly just my own inexperience and obsession with perfection that's slowing me down. That color suggestion is definitely something to think about though. I think I'll try that next time I draw her. It should make the color layer look more organic too without the hard stop between tones! Thanks Anon!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 03:16:09 No.92497878 Report

Quoted By: >>92498456

>tfw finished draft
>tfw taking a small break before beginning revisions

I don't know what to do with my life right now.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 03:24:02 No.92498048 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
Hunter having a mid-life crisis trying to prove that he can actually kill something

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 03:31:44 No.92498196 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485642
Not bad.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 03:45:06 No.92498456 Report

Quoted By:

>>92497878
videogames. then back to art.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 05:17:37 No.92500060 Report

Quoted By:

bump

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 05:21:53 No.92500131 Report

Quoted By: >>92500211 >>92500436 >>92500805

>webcomic thread
>hardly any comics
wtf are you retards doing

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 05:27:54 No.92500211 Report

Quoted By:

>>92500131
Shitposting, come join us!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 05:40:18 No.92500436 Report

Quoted By:

>>92500131
updated yesterday. takin my one alotted break

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 05:52:46 No.92500631 Report

Quoted By:

holy shit, Marry Me actually finished
see? a hiatus isnt the end

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 06:02:48 No.92500788 Report

Quoted By:

>>92485474
The current antagonist are actually a surviving group of inter-dimensional aliens who simply wanted to terraform the planet, and live on it. How were they supposed to know nuking the afterlife was a horrible idea?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 06:04:14 No.92500805 Report

Quoted By:

>>92500131
ok

http://battlesecretary.smackjeeves.com/

trying to keep the habit of updating up this time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 06:26:30 No.92501119 Report

Quoted By: >>92502630 >>92503657 >>92503671

when are you guys going to stop wasting time on comics and do something with your life

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 08:37:43 No.92502630 Report

Quoted By:

>>92501119

>Submitting to the 9-to-5 wageslave meme.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 08:40:08 No.92502656 Report

Quoted By: >>92504469 >>92504573

Showing my comic.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 09:11:13 No.92502997 Report

Quoted By:

I was thinking of actually trying to get into drawing and starting my own comic. I was thinking that it could follow a personal investigator in hell, or Satan's assistant or something.
Here's a comic I just shit out in the last hour. Opinions?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 10:21:44 No.92503640 Report

Quoted By:

bump

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 10:23:59 No.92503657 Report

Quoted By:

>>92501119
I stopped wasting time on comics and am also doing nothing with my life.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 10:25:45 No.92503671 Report

Quoted By:

>>92501119
I work on comics to avoid committing sudoku. I wish I was joking.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 10:47:50 No.92503846 Report

Quoted By:

>>92493259
Pretty sure it's a JoJo reference, Anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 11:55:08 No.92504418 Report

Quoted By: >>92505071

>>92495299
Does that look good to you? Did you even bother looking at it one more time before posting it? do me favor and tell me what you see wrong with it, I need to know your not an idiot. if you don't reply I'm going to keep bothering you.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:00:11 No.92504469 Report

Quoted By: >>92504637

>>92502656
I still don't get what's going on here.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:13:32 No.92504573 Report

Quoted By: >>92504626 >>92504637

>>92502656
Love your comic

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:19:53 No.92504626 Report

Quoted By: >>92504650

>>92504573
What's happening in it? Explain good freind.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:21:04 No.92504637 Report

Quoted By: >>92504666

>>92504469
http://character-limit-blog.tumblr.com/

I am here to listen to your critique and try my best to fix it. But not right now, I am very tired.

>>92504573
thank you. I really glad to hear that.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:22:38 No.92504650 Report

Quoted By: >>92504666

>>92504626
No idea but it has such a raw fun element to it. lol sorry it sounds generic but every time he posts I find it interesting. You can tell he cares about his characters

That being said I'd like to read the whole thing in one go, is there a site?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:23:45 No.92504666 Report

Quoted By: >>92504676

>>92504650
>>92504637
And oops I didn't refresh, thanks for the link

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 12:24:52 No.92504676 Report

Quoted By:

>>92504666

You welcome. Satan.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 13:01:20 No.92505071 Report

Quoted By: >>92506372

>>92504418
tell me how my lantern is first.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 13:50:53 No.92505596 Report

Quoted By: >>92505743

I recently finished a panel (bottom) and I went back to compare it to my earlier stuff (colored). I like to think I got better.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 13:58:08 No.92505694 Report

Quoted By: >>92505970

>>92492611
use the shape of the eyes

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:01:34 No.92505743 Report

Quoted By: >>92507257

>>92505596
Yeah, you definitely did. How long did it take you to draw that?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:19:09 No.92505948 Report

Quoted By:

>>92430099
So uhh, where's that WCL invite?

jam

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jam Fri 19 May 2017 14:20:40 No.92505970 Report

Quoted By:

>>92505694
I did.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:43:41 No.92506310 Report

Quoted By: >>92506384

>>92448759

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:47:59 No.92506372 Report

Quoted By: >>92506388 >>92506792

>>92505071
>>92505071
Alright LISTEN, your getting better with the bodies porportions ,the manhattan you had posted some time ago was so wanky looking mainly because the proportions of the limbs were off they didn't have a balanced thickness, but these are looking better. there's gotta be a balance with proportions. if your not sure, GOOGLE photos of bodies ,whatever body type you want (proportions stay SOME WHAT the same no matter what as body fat is evenly distributed as a person gains weight I mean maybe not the stomach) but eventually if your studying right your gonna notice what size any given limb should be compared to the others (you have that somewhat down you just need more studying and practice) for this particular piece where going to look at male bodies (no homo).

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:48:56 No.92506384 Report

Quoted By:

>>92506310
> Wow muh red and blue retro 3d glasses, must be fagstuck :^)

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:49:12 No.92506388 Report

Quoted By: >>92506404 >>92506792

>>92506372
your going to be COMPARING things on the body to other parts untill it LOOKS right as a WHOLE. your wrists should be a tad more thicker aswell as the bends of the legs!!!!!!!!!! just remember you want it too LOOK right brother. Just look over what you draw (this is key really sit there and look) compare it to a photo and see what needs to be adjusted, you should do this after a first attempt so that your not directly copying but your just adjusting them. things will slowly start to click as you do this and study people , trust me the brain is awesome like that. The green lanterns thighs and ass shouldn't be that thick, look at his arms ,from there you compare the arm thickness to the thigh thickness.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:50:15 No.92506404 Report

Quoted By: >>92506419 >>92506792

>>92506388
for a man the thighs should be thicker then the arms but not as thick as they are there, i hope you see how that bottom part is off now and how simple it was for me to deduce that just COMPARING the limbs to each other and haveing that limb knowledge . I hope you start off with the head whenever you draw people because from there you start COMPARING the thickness of each part of the body. The flashes ribs might be coming out a bit to much when compared to the rest (but your lanterns top looks decent and even)

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:51:18 No.92506419 Report

Quoted By: >>92506792

>>92506404
Your faces are consistently the same looking square jaw , butt chin, It looks a little too cartoony. take that as you will as I'm more focused on your bodies. And your lines, dude before you color clean up your lines, the term is chicken scratch I believe ,clean this up, you must be a SAMURAI my brother, clean one hit calculated strokes , erase until you only have one line for any given part and it LOOKS right. if your lines arnt atleast clean the next time you post I'm gonna be really disappointed . Your feet and hands could use work with the fingers being unevenly proportioned, but there not bad for your skill level at all.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 14:53:19 No.92506443 Report

Quoted By:

Why do you keep making replies instead of just finishing one full post?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:07:52 No.92506631 Report

Quoted By: >>92506649

Battlestations! I'm ready to draw... right after work.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:09:13 No.92506649 Report

Quoted By:

>>92506631
This is what I call a tight script right here...

Anonymous

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Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:11:19 No.92506669 Report

Quoted By: >>92507092

Speaking of clean samurai strokes (also apples to drawing when I say that) and for all you chicken scratch mfs I want post this beauty for inspiration, this piece was done by miyamoto musashi, he was a legendary samurai in japan with an estimated 60 kills , every stroke in this painting has purpose and is absolutely beautiful. Youre that worm.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:19:39 No.92506792 Report

Quoted By: >>92506923

>>92506372
>>92506388
>>92506404
>>92506419
This, anon, is incredibly helpful. I sincerely thank you for the specificity.

Gonna work hard to implement and keep in mind the advice when I'm able to sit down to draw today!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:26:44 No.92506923 Report

Quoted By: >>92507110

>>92506792
Np dude, And If i could correct myself, you can start with the head ,torso, or the basic shape Skeleton, when you start. drawing all those are fine.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:36:59 No.92507092 Report

Quoted By: >>92507580

>>92506669
What if I have a really tiny bamboo table and I can't use my full arm to do any strokes?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:38:10 No.92507110 Report

Quoted By:

>>92506923
Greatly appreciate it. I'll try and get a cleaner piece up next time!

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 15:50:07 No.92507257 Report

Quoted By:

>>92505743
A few hours. I want to say 5, but I jumped between stuff while drawing it. It wasn't all in one go.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 16:11:27 No.92507580 Report

Quoted By:

>>92507092
You giving me sass boy? You know what I mean

bones

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bones Fri 19 May 2017 16:38:41 No.92508014 Report

Quoted By: >>92508191

>>92484871

yoooooooooooooooo~!

i just now finished a new page, check it out yall!~

ending this thread right yall. ^^

I hope yall like it, see yah in the next thread

watch me make this page to weird random anime raps: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YAN5IZZ6TbA&feature=youtu.be

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 16:49:29 No.92508191 Report

Quoted By: >>92508765

>>92508014
man you better post this in the new thread, I like how your varying the panel shapes, something I need to start doing.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 16:57:39 No.92508348 Report

Quoted By:

New thread
>>92508296

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 19 May 2017 17:20:52 No.92508765 Report

Quoted By: >>92508884

>>92508191
Does it feel good to give yourself (You)'s

bones

bones Fri 19 May 2017 17:26:55 No.92508884 Report

Quoted By:

>>92508765

that wasn't me you retard!

now how does it feel to be a Mongoloidian imbecile

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