>>92423158I can already see several things wrong with this specific strip from the get-go.
>Panel One and TwoAsma is showing concern for Ruth's well-being. This is very much out of character for Asma, who we have seen as a disgruntled postal worker in almost every appearance she has ever made. If she's showing concern for Ruth due to some previous connection between the two that has never been made known until this point, then fucking hell, Willis, you're doubling if not tripling down on Tell Don't Show.
>Panel FiveI'm pretty sure that not even the most /fit/ of superheroines can kick a five-cubic-foot chair into the air and out of the dimensional plane, not to mention Ruth's posture while doing so. Seriously, if Ruth doesn't come out of this with a broken foot, then clearly nothing bad can ever happen to bisexuals, which Ruth apparently is now. Also, those overalls don't looks like they offer much in the way of flexibility.
>Panel SixAs OP said, Amber needs to fuck off back to her own room already. Meanwhile, I still have no idea why Willis thinks that Amber needs a wire to access the Internet. Wireless Internet is wireless for a reason; the background radiation of the seventy-odd routers in the vicinity should be boring through her skull right now, not to mention the fabric of the chairs.
