>>89592129I don't read your comic but I have respect for you for trying hard. You keep going despite everyone shitting on your face. You allow yourself to make mistakes, unlike most people.
I'll be honest: I have zero interest in reading your comic, but I like to see your posts. I even check some pages when you post them, even though the genre isn't my thing and the writing is all over the place. Sorry. That's how I see it. I don't see a central plot or hook that I should care about.
A lot of people have told you to work on your art. I agree, but on the other hand I feel like you could be an ok webcomic artist even with your current level of illustration skills.
You should study storytelling a little more, polish the basics, and most of all: focus. Simplistic art can work too if you don't try too hard.
I think you could benefit from studying Pendelton Ward's way of combining his artstyle with his unique writing voice. They are both simple yet effective. And no, I don't mean imitating him, just used him as an example of focusing the tone, technique and the thematic goals of the story into one cohesive package.
If you want to make a fun, silly story for an example, make your artstyle fun and silly as well. I mean something along those lines, if you get my point. You already have some grasp of that but right now I can't tell what kind of story I'm looking at. Is it supposed to be funny, silly, chidlike, serious, sexy, escapist fantasy, sad, dramatic, happy -- what? It doesn't help that many of the character designs remind me of known characters from other comics, such as dragon ball and adventure time. It is a turnoff to see stealing made obvious, always. Hide your influences, but by all means have them.
Sorry for shitting on your face as well.
I'm glad you just keep going.
I believe you can improve, because you work hard, and that's what matters.
You do you, ColdFusion. You do you.
