>>88917446I don't like it because it's, simply put, very bad writing. Whatever political stance you may have, you've got to admit it's as subtle as a brick and about as dumb.
I haven't read Gruenwald, your summary sounds interesting, but a good idea can fall completely flat with a bad execution.
Consider Dredd: he's a ridicolous parody of fascistic societies all right, but there's some depth to it, there's at least an attempt to do something more than just building a strawman and laughing at it.
I'm alright with political jargon: just make it well written political jargon. This shit's just bad.
