>>87430996Always fun to do a first kill.
I feel kind of bad for not dwelling on how shell-shocked about it Erin should still be, having killed someone just a few months back. But she's been on the back-burner for the Sisters lately. She shows up next issue dealing with some shit that happens this week's update. She's not supposed to be good around death, but she's one of those people who gets jaded to it pretty quick because she's a bad person.
Plus one should argue self-defense, but Erin did fuck him before murdering him because she just wanted to get hers.How you fucks been doing? We've been good. Getting close to the end of our twelfth issue, "the Witness." Third issue in our second arc. Feels good to get this far. Been busy as shit with other projects.
>>87427156Pretty good banner. I like your work and I need to catch back up.
>>87424548He's very well dressed, but the cloak/tunic/boots look is very similar to a dozen other protagonists. You should consider personality in how he dresses as well as his age, if he is 14 and magic is starting to come back into the world; maybe he should be a little more cautious in how he carries himself? He's also blandly handsome, which is only a problem because he looks more like a background character than a protagonist.
I have a hard time visualizing him emoting in a way that has staying power, just looking at him. Even giving him a different mouth/teeth would help him stand-out. He doesn't need to look crazy unique, but a little thing like buck teeth or a slouch and a more humble posture can sell him as being a character rather than background fodder.
Looking at his design, nothing speaks to who he is or the sort of things he might go through. Surface impressions are important even if they're wrong. When you look at a person on the streets you can make assumptions based on them. You want this to be someone who at a glance you can see someone thinking "I wonder what that guy's about."
