>>86731897alright, but the rest of my argument still holds. there's still a lot to fix.
-those big purple lines under the eyes look bad. a more subtle and realistic make up around the eyes would be better.
-maybe redraw her eyebrows
-painting her nails black would have helped them pop out more from the "plastic doll" aspect
-no lazy eye. it's not much, but it shows dedication.
-the black lips. maybe it helps define the mouth, but it's a bit out of character.
-speaking of wich, the sluttified shadman thing.just no.
