>>84161506i'm almost done with my fic. Should be a little under 10,000 words.
I just need help with this passage, because it's a reference I really want to make, but if it doesn't work, then I won't use it:
"You're busting my chops, Pidge! You're busting them hard and it don't feel good!"
vs simply.
"You're busting my chops here, Pidge!" Lance growled. "Busting them hard!"
All in all, this last leg is going rather smoothly and it should be ready by early next thread if not sooner.
