>>81466071>hatingNo one's hating asshole but this is just her being kind of a bitch. I mean the guy is certainly a dick himself but what's happening here? Some guy says stupid shit and instead of being the bigger person she shows that she's just a petty competitive person with money to throw around.
It's every lame cliche after school show ever and it's just boring and Id like to see the author be better than that.
Put some new spin on the story. Give her three strikes and have the kid be a bigger challenge than she realizes.
Strikes one and two are a combination of Casey at the bat arrogance and him being a big deal, then come strike three after she realizes her own faults she slams the ball out of the park.
Boom she shows the kid up and the victory feels earned and not just some lame HUR DUR DIANA IS PERFECT. Make it an actual story. Because this? This was fucking nothing but smug reaction faces.
