>>81296821>>81296535Had there been at least 1 panel of the 2 guys after the first panel, this particular problem in the narrative would have been resolved.
An over the shoulder shot of the girl with the guys still lurking behind her.
A reaction shot of the 2 guys backing off when they see Spidey.
OR even Spidey coming back to see the 2 guys harassing another woman.
ANYTHING to imply that they need a proper JAMMING rather than a stern talking to.
Those flaws aside, it's a good Spidey moment comic. Shame it's drawn so amateurishly-- which ordinarily I wouldn't mind since it's a random comic on the internet, but now that actual published titles by the big 2 look this bad, it actually annoys me that internet artists aren't striving to produce better art that this... even if it's only for likes, follows and reblogs.
