>>81106508>There is no such thing as a flawless comic artist. is this a defense for Morbi? like, duh, of course there isn't, but that doesn't mean you can't get better or anything, lol.
>>81106521>>81106519>>81106494true, yes, foreshadowing is good and multiple threads of thought getting woven into the story is totally fine, but i'm just talking about how it's presented. it just feels a lil sloppy here, i think. if it's text then we're going to want to read it, right? but shoving it in the corner and shrinking the size makes it feel out of place. do i read that, and then move on to the next panel? should i skip it and come back to it after it all? instead of dropping innocuous little speech bubbles over several pages, just address the father and his condition outright so we register it fully and can fully focus on what's really happening.
>>81106837but there are a bunch of little things that many people forget about because of the update schedule. for example, the page
>>81106519 posted was put up a full month ago! like hell did i remember about that tiny speech bubble that said something about "Di Radius." that could just be me, though, but if we're not going to remember something then it had might as well not be there, as it just clutters up the page.
there's also the argument that Morbi could be writing for people to read through the full thing in one go as opposed to waiting for the updates, in which case he shouldn't have to shove as many details as he can into his pages.
>>81107130>>81106457>>81106476>>81106513>So many punctuationwell, there were only two exclamation points in a row, but fair enough
sorry y'all, just voicing my opinion a bit. sure Morbi does the tiny text box thing a lot, but that doesn't make it good!
