>>79059901you have very basic stylization, what with the squared-off shoulders and such, but you don't really commit to it. I feel like you're trying to do a Genndy Tartakovsky feel but it sorta gets lost, specifically in the torso area and face. you dont really exaggerate the lines and curves as much as you could. when it comes to stylizing something either go big or go home.
also, the shape of the head is a bit wonky, her forehead kinda slants forward and the position of the facial features seem...off? the eyes are a bit too far down I think.
and then just clean up the lines but I'm guessing ttis was just a sketch anyway
but keep it up, you got good potential
