>>121994498>but the way it was handled was too sudden and offscreen like the rest of this comicI like the story so far, but my biggest complaint is how bits seems to go either too fast or too slow.
Like, I feel like for a couple chapters, we've gotten repeated explanations of pranxis. Joculine winking and elbowing the audience, telling them that she's going to retread something they already know doesn't excuse the fact that she's doing it. It feels like a "Previously, on _______" from a serialized tv show, which isn't something I need from a weekly VN? It feels weird to be getting basically the same information in a different chapter that we already knew, and I can't help but feel that time could have been better spent doing anything else.
But on the other hand, things that seem rather important happen suddenly without much setup, like you said. I suppose this is a lesser complaint, because the story isn't that long and I don't fully know where the story is going to end up, and maybe I just feel like the time saved in the retreads of old explanations could be better used to let other parts of the story breathe.
