>>118499716Well, I don't know if it really needs to be fixed, but I'll offer some suggestions that might improve Book Three.....
1. Have Grace read what Simon wrote, be moved by it, and REALLY start treating Simon as an equal. Also have Grace have a REAL epiphany about her past behavior, realize what she did and how she treated people was wrong, and SINCERELY make an effort to make amends and atone for her sins. Also she should fa e her fears about her number going down, and eventually having to leave the train.
Also more explanations and insites on Hazel and Simon. I mean why do we see Grace's video, but not Simon's? And there are still some unanswered questions about Hazel, which I hope will be explored further in Book Four.
Of course I'm on Team Tulip, anyway, so my opinion will be disregarded.
