Some parts like 0:50 and 0:57 and 1:27 looked better directed, not as smooth as Charlie's song, just better camera work and actions. Especially the expressions and lighting, but again the expressions don't last much,
I feel like I've heard this song before like the rhythm and motif is taken from somewhere.
The pauses like 2:50 were awkward as fuck.
I still can't stand the spider's voice. It sounds like a lighter Rob Paulsen and hearing goofy voices sing emotionally shit is unfitting. And the other voice sounded like any generic pop singer. I think she sounds better than non-remixed Katie Perry at least.
The swears still seem out of place even more than The Simpsons, Futurama, Disenchantment... something feels very unnatural about them.