>>114743326>It's meant to be disjointed and uncomfortableIMHTGO due to the tumblr artstyle it lacks contrast and looks way too soft even in the pages that are supposed to be spooky. It doesn't have any strong shapes or perspective shots.
>Weak dialogueGood dialogue doesn't have to be long, it's supposed to be on-point. What I'm reading here reminds me of B-tier 2010 creepypastas
>Leaving things to the imagination intensifies the horrorOnly if there's something for the reader to work with. You either leave them on a visually unsettling note like Junji Ito always does, or create a shocking twist using impactful words.
When you can't draw a scary picture and all your last lines are "THEN WHO WAS PHONE?" that's just called being a hack.
