ITT: We rewrite the ending to this show
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That finale was pretty underwhelming.
>All it took was a hug... even though all those characters were already trying to console and comfort Steven
>They just had to... do it together? I guess?
Okay, so let's try making this better.
>Events leading up to Monster more or less stay the same
>Jasper stays shattered. This is the final straw that causes Steven to turn into his monster.
>Steven turns into his monster, but nobody knows it's Steven
>He overpowers all the gems and diamonds and destroys his own home
>He looks around and sees all the destruction and pain he's causing his friends and decides for himself that he doesn't want to be a monster
>Cut to real Steven, fighting his inner demons inside the monster
>Steven's friends realize that Steven is the monster
>Hug commences
>All is well, everything else plays out the same except for a montage of Steven and the gems rebuilding the house
What do you think?
>All it took was a hug... even though all those characters were already trying to console and comfort Steven
>They just had to... do it together? I guess?
Okay, so let's try making this better.
>Events leading up to Monster more or less stay the same
>Jasper stays shattered. This is the final straw that causes Steven to turn into his monster.
>Steven turns into his monster, but nobody knows it's Steven
>He overpowers all the gems and diamonds and destroys his own home
>He looks around and sees all the destruction and pain he's causing his friends and decides for himself that he doesn't want to be a monster
>Cut to real Steven, fighting his inner demons inside the monster
>Steven's friends realize that Steven is the monster
>Hug commences
>All is well, everything else plays out the same except for a montage of Steven and the gems rebuilding the house
What do you think?
