>>110360358Linkara actually released it into the public domain, as if to say "well I'd like to see you do better".
After finding that out, I'd spend hours digging through the comic and what people had to say about the comic to find everything that could be utilized for a better story. Where did Lightbringer's powers come from? What if his backstory didn't exactly happen as described? What if Hannah's strength had an explanation that made sense? What if General Werres was dangerously competent? What if Darkbringer was really Lightbringer's split personality? Who's that Future Girl superheroine showed in one panel?
It's a gold mine of wasted potential.
Two simple ways to improve it from the ground-up would be to just hire a really good artist, and replace most of the dialogue and narration with visual storytelling.
