>>108036799Non-Ian examples for all three:
>Rotor>>GallagherBasic personality and disposition, family, backstory, dynamics with cast.
>>PendersLove of gizmos and gadgets and guns, being gay (not really positive or negative, just weird).
>Antoine>>GallagherCharacter groundwork, sense of humor, arrogance (it's very different from the show), obliviousness/tunnel vision.
>>DeCesareSelf-doubt, conviction, dynamics with other characters, crush on Bunnie, charisma.
>>PendersBackstory, competence, sense of priority and honor (handled poorly in-story, but not bad elements)
>Bunnie>>GallagherBasic characterization, especially the excitable, aggressive aspect.
>>DeCesareConcern, empathy, observational (instead of standing quietly in the background she lets other people take the spotlight in discussion while thinking about her response, this is a very tiny, nuanced detail that changed her future characterization dramatically), modest.
>>KoslowskiSelf-conscious, frets a lot without telling people.
